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ChaserOfClouds — Ginger - WIP
Published: 2009-08-29 02:38:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 52; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Wooo, look! It's an ugly WIP! I'm only posting this for two reasons... A- I really love this guys face for some reason, and B- the anatomy is the sux and I figure someone who hasn't been staring at this damn thing for hours could help me figure out how to fix it.He'll probably have more earrings when I'm done with it, it'll also be lineless, and more colorful.
So pleasepleaseplease give constructive criticism about the anatomy, I'm still working on coloring it so don't bother with that. And don't bother with criting his face either because it's gotten to the point where if I tried to fix anything with it I'd just make it worse... And I'm not even going to bother trying to draw his feet, I'm just gonna stratigically crop it above his ankles.
I'm especially having trouble with that hand. I know you probably can't see it all that well here, but if you could get me a ref or something that'd be fantastic too. <3
This'll obviously end up in my scraps sooner or later.
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-facepalm-
The only thing wrong here is his left shoulder, hand, and his lack of feet. His left shoulder should probably be out a little more and maybe just a tad angled up a bit, I can't find an exact ref, but maybe some stuff to give you an idea. [link] [link] Wrong angles. :/ [link] )_-_1885_ca._-_Male_nude_crouching_in_sunlit_rectangle _in_Pennsylvania_Academy_studio.jpg [link]
As for the hand...have someone do this pose for you, and reference it, I don't know how else to help you with that. I'm not the greatest at hands myself, but live hands are always helpful. It just takes a few shots to get it right though.
...and please for the love of god do not crop off at the ankles unless you're going to be putting him in tall grass or something. An artist should never crop off at the wrists/ankles because it shows off an obvious weakness. Again, get someone to do this pose, and see how the feet go. Eventually you'll understand how it works and be able to draw it without that ref, especially if they're wearing shoes.
Haaah...Hope that helped.
Also, I'm not sure, it looks okay now, but try widening his shoulders a little in redline or something, just to see how it looks. His heads okay, it just looks a little big for a small frame.
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