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Published: 2003-05-25 03:54:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 247; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 24
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JungleMy soul is in a jungle
I have yet to find my way through.
There are no roads.
There are a few footprints.
They are mine,
But I fear them.
For if I see none,
Then I am forging new paths.
If I find them,
I am traveling in circles.
I have already seen those paths
And I never wish to travel them again.
I wish a gust of wind would find me
And set me down
Far away from these prints.
Comments: 3
LOVE this short poem!!!!! Is it sort of classical or is it just me? The way you've organized it seems familiar... I'm glad you're a HP fan-saw your message on the books forum about judging books, so I decided to check your page! hee hee, here I am, do check mine when you can and comment! thanks! (i do want an English Major's opinion on meh poems, even though yours are much better because you have experience.....)
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very interesting hun sort of traveling on a road and taking the path of your own making. i like that idea... i miss you...
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