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Published: 2005-10-29 01:29:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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Description
our fingers can't touch thehorizon, but we still pretend--
your semen goes far enough.
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Comments: 13
i unfortunately know. lol.
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woot, very in your face and strong... the last verse literally took me by surprise.
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thank you!
i truly enjoy my haikus--
i definately think it's what i'm best at.
i'm glad you liked it.
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it never ceases to amaze me how sometimes you can read a piece with so few words and yet it is more powerful and hard-hitting and personal and touching than a piece that will try to describe the exact same thing with lines and lines of poetry.
wonderful work
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*smiles* I love how the description is longer than the piece... and the imagry is wonderful.
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haha. i didn't even notice that.
but--as long as you enjoyed the imagery--
i feel somewhat acheived with this work.
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oh wow. WOW. i fell in love with this the moment i read it.
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thank you!
i was debating on whether to post it or not,
and i'm glad i did.
i'm pleased that you enjoy it.
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