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Let me count the ways:1 day I met you and we were
2 young to understand what you'd mean to me in
3 years time when we became friends
4 years to come, and when we'd talk for
5 hours straight on the computer and i'd sit up
6 hours a night thinking about if you were more than a friend. And when the
7 days of the week would pass i'd be thrilled to see you again on Monday.
8 years had tortured me as I passed through middle school and my
9th year of education made me realize what you mean to me and in
10 wretched years... I fell in love.
~Don't give up. Don't give in. In the end your love will win.~
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Comments: 29
Not cliche at all
I really love your writing style, your poems have a beautiful way of expressing feelingss
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Thanks for the comment!
I really appreciate it.
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This is great!! I think you told a great story. It flowed well, & made sense.
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Thank you very much everyone, and also thanks for commenting on the format!
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I can't say I particularly like the idea, seems cliche, but it's the finest execution of such a "numbers" poem I've ever seen. Fantastic poem, great job!
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I liked it. I especially liked how numbers flowed with the story
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I like it. The idea is nice, the design is eye-catching and the story is sweet. Good work~
The thoughts... they are not sporadic, quite the opposite - I would say they flow nicely. What I'd like to point out is that the design makes the sentences a little bit hard to follow, but that's a small problem. Probably a semi colon to separate the different thoughts would work it out.
In short, it's good~
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I'm sorry about the double message. My internet crashed >.>
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I like it. The idea is nice, the design is eye-catching and the story is sweet. Good work~
The thoughts... they are not sporadic, quite the opposite - I would say they flow nicely. What I'd like to point out is that the design makes the sentences a little bit hard to follow, but that's a small problem. Probably a semi colon to separate the different thoughts would work it out.
In short, it's good~
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up to 5, it has good flow and tiem frame and doesn't feel forced. 6 is okay but after that it feels like it doesn't come as naturally to read. Like you had your constraint of numbers but couldn't fit anything so you put whatever matched the theme. That sounds harsh; I don't mean to offend, I really like this theme, I just think based on the way you did the first half that the second half could be better.
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this is amaaaaazing!
Not too cliche at all! I love it!
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This is pretty neat :3
I like it anyway.
The story makes sense and it doesn't seem sporadic per say. I think it might have had more impact were each 'number' of things to be a different 'thing' but I don't think it really loses anything because of it, and it would be hard to tell the same story without repeating a few x3
Good over all 
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That's real sweet and I love how you have written it (=
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this is sooo true... I am now dating my school crush but it took soo long for either of us to make that move.
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