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Published: 2010-02-01 23:29:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 115; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description ** Indifference, a cold word that scorns my soul. Indifference. A horrid fire that burn a hole. A dark abyss that dwindles the day, a dark abyss where my tears lay**
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Comments: 3

guagna [2010-02-04 15:13:10 +0000 UTC]

i admire your ability to rhyme. it's something i really struggle with.

the repetition is nice, and really drives your point home. you have a really nice concept here, i'd love to see you develop it some more

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ChelOpera In reply to guagna [2010-02-04 22:06:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very mucho y mucho very thank you

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guagna In reply to ChelOpera [2010-02-05 17:15:49 +0000 UTC]

lolzzz.

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