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Published: 2011-01-17 01:03:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 351; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description Your reality is what kept me alive--
Your promises kept me adrift.

Reality Check: Your promises were bullshit.

This isn't a love poem.
This isn't a love poem.

Reality Check: I stated it twice to make myself believe.

We all have our differences.
You just turned out to be unlike me.

Reality Check: You don't know what love IS.

Your sandy-brown curls.
Your scattered freckles, much like your mind.

Reality Check: You're pretty ordinary looking.
Reality Check: I'm still fucking in love with you.
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Comments: 16

Betneybob [2011-01-23 13:35:06 +0000 UTC]

i think its great, catures a feeling most people go through, i love the last verse aswell

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ChelOpera In reply to Betneybob [2011-01-23 14:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so so much!

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Betneybob In reply to ChelOpera [2011-01-23 14:52:33 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^^

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blossomingstarlight [2011-01-21 21:07:59 +0000 UTC]

I love the 'reality check' concept and it is very understandable.
Only-it's 'adrift' not 'a drift'

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ChelOpera In reply to blossomingstarlight [2011-01-22 14:09:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'll be sure to fix that

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Davehollis [2011-01-20 20:15:02 +0000 UTC]

excellent piece.

think it would be better if the final line were "This is a love poem after all."

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ChelOpera In reply to Davehollis [2011-01-20 23:03:04 +0000 UTC]

Hm, that could work.... Thanks so much for your input and your comment!

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plathfan910 [2011-01-18 13:23:48 +0000 UTC]

am kind of loving this, you know, just like a lot and all

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ChelOpera In reply to plathfan910 [2011-01-18 18:19:00 +0000 UTC]

D'awww, thanks love!

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plathfan910 In reply to ChelOpera [2011-01-18 19:22:20 +0000 UTC]

You are so welcome!

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xxlindalovexx [2011-01-17 03:31:07 +0000 UTC]

i love this. we all know this emotion.

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ChelOpera In reply to xxlindalovexx [2011-01-17 13:50:03 +0000 UTC]

D'awww, thanks!

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xxlindalovexx In reply to ChelOpera [2011-01-17 15:31:18 +0000 UTC]

you're welcomeeee

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kellz108 [2011-01-17 02:29:03 +0000 UTC]

its really good
yes i could understand it perfectly well i can even relate lol

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ChelOpera In reply to kellz108 [2011-01-17 13:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Lmao, thats good. Thank you!!

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kellz108 In reply to ChelOpera [2011-01-19 01:45:25 +0000 UTC]

np

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