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Published: 2006-02-21 14:50:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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paint me a picturesing me a song
i know that i look
as if nothing is wrong
but deep down inside
where nobody goes
is a broken child
a shatterd soul
blink back the tears
that hide your eyes
put on a smile
bring back the lies
breathe in the scent
of the black ode of time
let it flow through
it's yours and mine
broken and whole
and broken once more
they found us lying
on the bathroom floor
bleeding all over
in crimson red
i should have cried
but i smiled instead.
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u know i felt this so many many times. i find that deep down, *face* is important. its so strange. when ur crying inside but u cannot let the world see it. and u regret later. 
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thankyou, hun.
yeah.
i totally get you.
but the world's like tht.
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yeah thats such a pity. 
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Beautiful! Of course, very sad. But the message in so subliminally wonderful. More
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THANKS.
i will try.
i've hardly any time left to breathe.
up to my ears in hwrk.
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haha.
MISSD ME?
(:
i miss dng my art stuff.
but i've practically no time.
whn i'm free i just feel so tired.
too tired to do anythg.
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same hear but I can't give up doing what I love
not even if it kills me
whats the point of going on if you can do what you love
I will write during class and so on forth
I miss your drawings.
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glad you've got such strng convictions.
i do doodle and stuff.
but it's nth big.
and inspiration is scarce.
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not many people where I am from can draw 1/10 as good as you
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haha.
they probably just need practice.
and inspiration.
and all tht stuff.
hahs.
i dont knw.
i'm not a very gd artist.
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yes you are damn it
well in my town you could draw better than most peoples with your eyes closed
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hahaha.
you think too highly of me.
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no you think to lowly of yourself you got to understand more than 1 person likes you in the whole I am one but some people still don't know you
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thanks for the lovely words.
(:
but i've a long, long way to go as an artist.
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true I have a ways to go at poetry or karate
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it's okaye.
let's just work hard!
((:
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Nice to see some work from you lately. (:
I like this...It's kind of sing-song-ish, and really pulls you in.
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haha.
i'm sorry i hvnt been posting.
school's really getting me down.
i'm up tp my ears in hwrk.
):
but i'm glad you lik the poem.
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ohhhhhh.....i loved the ending it was so twisty! ^_^ nice job
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