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chewchulainn — Conscience (Rough Draft 1)
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Published: 2016-10-03 01:15:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1145; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Inspired by a convo I had with FateStayFree! I couldn't get this idea out of my head all week, and when I draw a doodle in my notebook I decided it had to be a full comic in order to get the idea across. But that means it's gonna take awhile to get the full thing out @@Gil's little angel has quit, claiming that he 'never listens to it anymore', only ever making bad choices, and so Cu, always on the lookout for new jobs, took its place. How the hell does that work? Who knows. Maybe Gil is just hallucinating from hunger, it's best not to think about it too much.
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This job may have some hazards that were not listed in the job description :3
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Always gotta read the fine print before signing up for anything, Cu should know this by now~
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I definitely agree with you that a comic works best for this. I loved the dialogue! You've already told me some of the content of it before I read it, but it made for a very amusing read. I loved the former conscience's list of complaints in his resignation, and him saying good riddance haha. Though I'm wondering who held the position before him, whether it was the good side of Gil (maybe Kid Gil) or somebody else.
And as a drawing it was really good too. I think I've said before, but I really like the ones without colours but I definitely think that the colours added to this one. Particularly with little red devil Gil, I think that the overall effect of him was definitely improved by him actually having that colour (and he looks very good as a devil - I love his little horns and tail, and the eye colour goes well with demon Gil too). Lancer looks very cute as an angel too. But my favourite part of the picture was definitely proper Gilgamesh. I really love his facial expressions in the second to bottom left hand side. He looks utterly bemused by Angel Lancer (and looks pretty adorable in it too). Oh, and the little speech bubble with his face in it was very nice too.
But yeah, I really liked this! 
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Thank you ^^ I felt like I could get eveything across better than I could with a fic, though I think that would still be fun to write. In the final draft I may make the list of complaints a bit more specific, but I'm glad you thought it was funny xD I think the angel would have just been a good part of Gil (maybe Kogil though, that would make sense), but after being ignored in favor of doing stupid and naughty things for so long, he got sick of it and packed his bags xD
Thank you! For the final version I'm gonna color them on a tablet so that I can get into the line better, but I thought it'd be more effective to color it a bit before posting it, so it wouldn't just be sketches. And I'm really glad you liked the expressions ;u; Since they weren't going to be moving that much, I wanted to make sure the expressions were varied enough, so I'm glad that was noticeable ^^
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It'd be kind of sad if it was kid Gil haha. Must be tough for the poor kid to finally find out how much of an ass he's going to turn out to be when he grows up. Though I quite like the idea of F Zero Gil having a good angel little Gil and a bad devil UBW Gil as the two extremes of his character. But a story could be fun. I still really want to do a giant Gil story, which is where this idea originally stemmed from if I remember correctly. It'd be cool if you did make a longer/more specific list of reasons. I can see Lancer having to go through all the ridiculous specifics of him being mean and offensive and the two Gils snickering at is they look back fondly at all the trouble they've caused.
It'll definitely be cool to see it all finished, even if I really liked this one anyway.
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Oooh, I'd still like to read about actual Giant Gil o3o I know you've got a long list of stuff to do too, but if you ever get around to it I think it'd be fun o3o Especially if it involved little Cu on his shoulder~
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It's definitely on the eventual story list!
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