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FateStayFree [2017-04-18 18:49:10 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know you were drawing today (yesterday I guess haha), so this was a really nice surprise to see. It's always nice seeing just some simple Gil eats Cu vore even if I like the stuff which either comes from AU or more of a detailed background. I guess I just really love the idea of this being part of his daily routine and not just under special circumstances, the poor old pup. Plus I just always love some good full size vore with the pup being gobbled and shoved in at his full size, and a corpulent Gil showing all the side effects of it that I'm not convinced he enjoys all that much besides when he can taunt the doggy trapped in there who has caused it all. I also really enjoy the comics - it's nice seeing the vore go from stage to stage. Single images are great too, but it's always fun going back over comics and noticing four times the little details you missed on the first view. 

Panels 2 and 3 are my favourites but I really liked the other two as well. I was pretty surprised that he's decided to gobble up Lancer still with his little silver shoes on. I guess they might look a bit more appetising than big boots (and maybe Cu's horrible paws if he hasn't been looking after them), but it's kind of like eating candy with the silver wrapper still on haha. Though I do love the idea of him being so excited as to shove him in without thinking to even get him out of his shoes. And head first vore is definitely my favourite for exactly that reason - the poor embarrassed prey's legs and feet flailing helplessly and manically. So I loved the little movement and action lines you put in, they really made that part of the picture in particular. Then with the second picture I absolutely loved how you showed how slimy it is, and also the sliding down in the saliva. I felt so bad for Cu, but then I guess this is just the poor pup's usual fate. The detail of the earing sliding down, which I missed the first time, was really cool. But I loved his facial expression the most - just gritting his teeth and being all embarrassed and about what is happening to him as he hurtles down into Gilgamesh's all too familiar tummy. 

I'm sure by now you know how much I love big bellied Gils. It just always amuses me to see his usually really elegant body expand like that, and still him being arrogant to just enjoy tormenting the poor pup who is trapped in there. I loved his little tongue and the closed eye (he looks a lot more adorable than Archer one eyed haha), and just how smug and happy he looks with what he has achieved again. I also really liked the dialogue in this one, with him just casually telling Cu that he'll be a lot more use to him in his stomach. Poor pup. Not only does he get embarrassed but insulted into the mix. The expression of Cu in the last picture was really nice - I don't seem to remember you drawing one like that before really, so it was nice seeing him look a little angrier I thought even if he looks very embarrassed as well. His little pointy teeth were really adorable though, and just his confused questioning as to when he will finally be let out. I hope Gil does let the poor doggy out, and doesn't take too long about it, though I think Cu probably realises by now that you just don't rush Gil. He'll always just do whatever he wants. 

This was great though! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing your ideas for part ten and the following bits, where hopefully Cu will be having a funner time of it even if I imagine that will always be pretty short lived when Gil is around. 

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absurdsilvally [2017-04-18 01:37:22 +0000 UTC]

This is so cute, I absolutely adore the smug look on Gil's face X3
Oh dear, just what sort of adventures will they go on?

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