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Published: 2007-09-11 21:01:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2560; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 25
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just for fun I uploaded another sketch of a page from my 2nd doujin^^ will probably be the last sketch I'll upload though...05
2.ed: Uhh... I have never done this before...
3.ed: I have imagined it so often already... having sex with you.
4.ed: But I never thought it would really happen...
5.ed: So ... uh...
roy: Just calm down first.
hope you like ^^ chibi ed looks so cute ^__^*pokes* and roy is cute too^^ hihi *hops away*
sketches of:
page 1-4
page 9
page 10
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Comments: 77
didn't you read my comment to page 9? cause I wrote the reason there... it's too mature content for dA so I won't upload them here <.<
[link] <-- well you can see the rest of the pages here (I always upload a page when I'm finished XD)
translation for those pages:
07
1.ed: Does that feel good ?
2.roy: Yes.
4.ed: Dammit, you haven't even touched me yet and I am totally aroused already...
08
1.ed: That... feels so good...
2.ed: I absolutely won't last long like this.
3.roy: Noone said that you have to.
4.ed: But...
5.ed: I want to really sleep with you.
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umm.... i dont see hows thats to much mature content??
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on dA naked people are mature content already.. and anything that has to do with an actual sexual act at all is too mature content already <.< and touching certain body parts already belongs to that category..
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haha i didnt notice that they were naked..... but i realy like it but whys it in spanesh or somthing?
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they are not naked ^_^;;; but ed touches roy through his pants *cough cough*
it's german cause I am german ^_^;; why does everyone ask XD it says on my profile page that my location is in germany... i never said i was englishXD
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oo i love german i know some but not alot.... well i wasnt paying attention... either way its hot and i wish it was on DA. who cares if its inapropriat? i think its hot and i cant wait for the smexyness!
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well I care cause I already got deleted 2 pics in the past.. XD and I don't want to get banned cause of such things really.. (even though I would love to upload these *sigh* )
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Hmm..Maybe something like..
"You know what they say about beginners luck"Or something along the lines of that.
Oh!
IT is ultra cute, btw^^
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hmm, no I really can't imagine my roy saying that ^_^;; thanks for your suggestion though ^__^-
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Oh, I'm sorry
Oh well, it is adorable!^^
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oh don't be sorry ^^ I think it's very nice that you thought about it^^ and I also think I know already what he'll say now: something like : "just calm down a bit first"
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Ooooh its lookin' good so far!!
How about "Don't worry so much ... every one has to start somewhere" or maybe "... you'll be fine" or something X3 I dunno. I hope it helped!!!
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Cute, cute, cute!!! 
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aww thanks a lot -^__^-
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aaaah das is so sΓΌss
hm~ mir fΓ€llt nix ein @___@
aber ich hab die kommis gelesen, da is allerhand gutes dabei, zum glΓΌck 8lxD
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aw danke ^^ ja stimmt so viele ideen -^_^-
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aw thankies -^__^-
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You're welcome :3
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xD Aww at the top they looks chibi! XDDD Can't wait for it^^
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ohmigosh. That is adorable. I adore the first panel.
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Dawww..Ed and Roy are SOOO CUTE in the first panel...I want to hug them, but I'd be interuppting and Ed would probably murder me or something...
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aww thankies ^^
yes you really would XD
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Welcome!
Aw, darn it. I like living...oh well, HERE I GO! *runs up and hugs them...then gets stabbed repetedly*
HEY! I'm still alive!
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yay XD lucky you XD
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OH GAWD First-timer Ed so damn cute!!!>w<(I admit,I would act like him in my first too...XD)
Taisa can say...*Makes low voice*"DonΒ΄t worry...IΒ΄ll be gentle..." *__*
Only a suggestion XD
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I think so too ^^ *huggles ed* you would? would you also be like: 'let's do it' like ed XD ?
well he definitely won't say that ^^ cause that sounds like roy will be on top.. and this page here belongs to the beginning of both versions (royxed and edxroy version) ^^ the first 14 pages are the same and then it splits into 2 different versions^^ with 22 pages each
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Teehee,maybe IΒ΄ll say it too XD
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I agree with princesspunker84's idea.
I love the chibis, socute. >w<
"Uhh... I have never done this before." XP Poor Edo, he is tense.
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aw thankies^^
yes he is .. but not that long anymore XD no need to feel sorry for him XD you should feel sorry for roy hehe XD
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Oh yes, Roy will make sure he loses his tenseness. XD
Uh oh, why should I feel sorry for Roy? *_*
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hm cause ed is not the most gentle person in the world XD
from the royxed version:
page31
ed's hold on roy tightens
roy: *winces* ed.. you are hurting me
ed: wah sorry I forget that I am so strong with my automail sometimes..*puts hands at roy's cheeks* everything ok..?
from the edxroy version:
page29
ed quickens pace
roy: *winces* ed! stop it! you are hurting me.. *slightly hurt expression*
page30
roy: you promised to be careful right? *raises eyebrow*
ed: I.. I did yes... *a bit shocked/embarrassed* I.. I'm so sorry .. I got carried away.. I'm so not used to this feeling.. and it feels so awesome *sheepish expression*
roy makes ed lose his tenseness mainly by letting himself being touched by ed without doing much at first^^ so ed gets a bit calmer again^^
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Crap, sorry, that "oo" down in the first post was supposed to be "too." One of may cats broke my T key off a couple weeks ago and sometimes I miss it. ><
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