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ChicFlick97 — As If Life Couldn't Be Simpler

Published: 2011-07-28 21:58:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1806; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 32
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Description THIS WAS SO STRESSFUL MAKING!!! Ugh, my little cousin wouldn't leave me alone, and my mom yelled at me multiple times! THEN the freaking SCANNER was complicated! UGH!

...Sigh...

Crunch: "Those two have more in common than they think."

Coco: "Yeah, my brother can't deny taking a nap with her right after a meal of Wumpa fruit."

Crash:

Kate:

Anywho, this is the Bandicoot Family. Crunch Bandicoot, Coco Bandicoot, and by all means, Crash Bandicoot himself. Now, who's the girl he decided to take a lovely nap with? None other that my original character, Kate Clark.

She's . ewe

Well, if you must now how a girl like her got there, let's start as a human in Arizona. Now Crash, being the cocky heroic Australian he is, had to conceal himself with a helmet and jacket to pass off as a human to go and protect her from Cortex.

Cortex wants Kate to become "Cyboria", a cyborg general that would lead a robot army and destroy Crash Bandicoot. But, Crash doesn't plan on letting that happen, so... What exactly happens between the two during the time they spend together?
If you would like to read the story, find it in this [link] .

I hope you find it worth the read. (For the warning, the beginning kind of sucks, but I promise it gets better.)

Characters in the story are as follows:
Crash Bandicoot
Kate Clark
Coco Bandicoot
Neo Cortex
Nega Bandicoot (Evil Crash)
Nina Cortex
Crunch Bandicoot
Aku Aku
Cyboria (Kate)
Various others

Art, Story, and Kate Clark (c) Me
Copyrighted Characters (c) NaughtyDog
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Comments: 24

BeatrixDiSanti [2011-07-31 16:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you know what's ironical? I've found this picture of yours in my inbox (because of the club submission), and I couldn't believe that you are the person who have commented in my story on FF. What a coincidence! And the most weird of all, I've discovered that you are only a month younger than me... really weird. 0.o

Ahem, sorry for the needless 'hysterical' comment. The picture itself looks great because you coloured with accurate colours, and the poses are well drawn, too. I also had a feeling that I've known your character who's sleeping beneath Crash somewhere... isn't she from 'Odds and Ends'? I think I had read the first chapter, but I barely remember it. xD I need to read it again when I get a chance.

Keep it up!

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ChicFlick97 In reply to BeatrixDiSanti [2011-07-31 17:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That's really weird. And really cool in a bizarre way.

And, yes. Yes she is indeed. (stated in the description... ) Yeah, the first chapter sucks. I had to find some time to improve my style and vocabulary. I guess school does have its upsides. Anyway, thanks! It's always great to hear a comment here from a fellow writer on FF.Net!

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BeatrixDiSanti In reply to ChicFlick97 [2011-07-31 17:34:08 +0000 UTC]

I don't think the first chapter sucked. It's just that I only gave a look at the story but didn't read the rest, so there. But you write pretty well, really. And don't worry about the vocabulary part, I also suck at it especially from a person who's still learning English along the road. xD (And expression phrases are my enemies... believe me.)

Yeah, it's always good to hear a nice comment, although I'm more a drawing artist than writer.

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ChicFlick97 In reply to BeatrixDiSanti [2011-07-31 19:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh... Well, alright then! If you do decide to read it, leave a nice review or two, would you please!

Well, I like to draw too. (In fact, that's what I plan to go to college for ) But, I enjoy writing too. Lately I've been pretty type-happy.

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BeatrixDiSanti In reply to ChicFlick97 [2011-07-31 20:37:35 +0000 UTC]

Hah hah, I believe xD I promise right before I post chapter 5, I'll leave you two good reviews. ^^ I also don't like when I don't comment in others' stories and at the same time awaiting for them. Well, I guess that's because I'm new there, so hence why I don't receive many.

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ChicFlick97 In reply to BeatrixDiSanti [2011-07-31 21:12:13 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! You're sweet.

And don't worry, I'll keep reviewing your story. But, I save reading fanfiction during the night, where I am comfy in my bed and reading from my Opera Mini browser. Then I review!

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BeatrixDiSanti In reply to ChicFlick97 [2011-07-31 21:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow, cool! I can't read in bed, my laptop isn't even near it xD But I do during the day

And no problem, I also thank to you because that means a lot me.

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ChicFlick97 In reply to BeatrixDiSanti [2011-07-31 23:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Well, that's what friends are for, right?

I use my DSi to do it... Heh...

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2shycharmgal [2011-07-31 06:13:37 +0000 UTC]

looks awesome great work

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Bandi-Cute [2011-07-31 01:54:04 +0000 UTC]

Cute pic! I love how you drew Crash's hair^^ Great work with the expressions too (especially Crunch, he doesn't appear very impressed^_^) It's great to see scenes from your story! Keep them coming

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ChicFlick97 In reply to Bandi-Cute [2011-07-31 04:53:38 +0000 UTC]

D'aww, I love comments from you! I didn't really like how it turned out, but... I guess we'll just see how the next scene pans out.

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Kate-Bandicoot [2011-07-30 04:08:04 +0000 UTC]

Cool another Kate Bandicoot

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ChicFlick97 In reply to Kate-Bandicoot [2011-07-30 16:05:30 +0000 UTC]

Heh, yeah, I guess. But, her last name is Clark, and the only way for her to have the last name Bandicoot is for her to... get married to Crash...*shudder* Yeah... Even though they have a relationship, I don't think I'll take it that far. Possibly one day, when I get several writings out. But, until then, let's keep it real, shall we?

Curse me and my rants.

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Kate-Bandicoot In reply to ChicFlick97 [2011-07-31 07:36:07 +0000 UTC]

XD makes sense.

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ChicFlick97 In reply to Kate-Bandicoot [2011-07-31 17:07:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...

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Crazy-Maya [2011-07-29 17:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Oops sorry lol, I've totally lost my head today XD I accidently put picture instead of mistake lol XD Sorry again

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ChicFlick97 In reply to Crazy-Maya [2011-07-29 18:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Haha, it's okay. Maybe I should have used a pen. I will next time, okay?

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Crazy-Maya In reply to ChicFlick97 [2011-07-31 10:25:23 +0000 UTC]

Ok, that'd be ace I receomend fineline pens for the outline

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Crazy-Maya [2011-07-29 17:49:27 +0000 UTC]

Oops sorry about the previous comment, I made a picture at the end lol O_O I meant maybe you could try use a fineline pen or something as the outline instead of pencil. Sorry about that lol

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Crazy-Maya [2011-07-29 17:48:21 +0000 UTC]

It's nice and cute and I like your style but just a tip- perhaps next time you could try a different style

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StephDragonness [2011-07-29 05:56:49 +0000 UTC]

awww thats sweet

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ChicFlick97 In reply to StephDragonness [2011-07-29 16:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It was a pain to make, though.

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LateNightBandicoot [2011-07-29 03:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Thats cute.

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ChicFlick97 In reply to LateNightBandicoot [2011-07-29 03:35:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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