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Published: 2015-01-01 11:58:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1763; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 0
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Description 킬 유어 시스터!
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EcliptorCalrissian [2015-03-10 00:36:24 +0000 UTC]

The true origin of Nightmare Moon!

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Chickhawk96 In reply to EcliptorCalrissian [2015-03-10 03:25:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeap

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jyroman53 [2015-01-02 19:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Ye cannot deny cake !

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Chickhawk96 In reply to jyroman53 [2015-01-03 02:03:10 +0000 UTC]

Yee yes!

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cajobif [2015-01-01 20:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Luna: Huh? What in the name of my sister....
Cake: Do it now Luna and I'll make you rich and powerful like you ever dreamed of!
L: Is that some kind of joke? How can I be hearing... *sigh* Not him again.... DISCORD!!! GET OUT OF YOUR HIDING PLACE AND APPEAR BEFORE ME THIS INSTANT!!!!
She waited a moment. No noise, no sound. Only... the voice coming from the cake.
Cake: Who is Discord?
L: Don't play the innocent you piece of... Why am I talking to a piece a cake from the beginning? You can't talk.
Cake: Then, how come I can talk?
Luna took a moment to think.
L: Hmmm. I think they must have brought me a old piece of cake. Must have exposed to some kind of magic or...
Cake: What?!? You think seriously about what you are say-
L: I don't see another way. Unless... this is another prank from Celestia...
Celestia: Luna?
Her sister startled her, but she turned her head to face her.
L: Yes, Tia?
C: Are you alright?
L: Why, yes! Why are you asking?
C: I saw you talking to yourself. Are you sure you feel okay? Or you are trying to get attention. Again.
L: Me? Nononono. I... uh...
She shifted her gaze to the cake and back to her sister.
L: I was...
C: Where did you get that cake?
L: Huh?
C: I haven't seen one of this flavour in ages!
L: Well.... I asked for a piece... and a servant brought it to...
C: You have gone to the cold room didn't you? And took this piece?
L: Huh? How did you... *sigh* Yes. Wait! What do you mean by that you haven't seen this flavour in ages?
C: The last time I have ate this kind of cake was... around five years ago.
Luna jaw dropped.
L: F-f-f-five years ago?!?!?
C: Yes, I'm.... not very fond of this flavor. So they stopped making it.
The lunar princess looked at the cake in disgust, her stomach clenching at the single thought that she was about to eat it.
C: The cold room is the only place I know that you can find a pastry lasting that long. When I think of it, I should ask some servants to empty and clean it today.
Celestia watched her disgusted sister staring at her old piece.
C: It talked to you didn't it?
L: Uh... what?
Celestia was staring at her with a little smile.
L: Yes. It was telling me to... How come you know that?
C: Simple. I discovered it myself. I took myself an old piece of piece from there and it was telling me to "Eat only pie and kill every cake".
L: *gasp* What did you do?
C: I quite simply thrown it in the garbage. And I recommend you to do it as well. I don't see you trying to kill me just to satisfy a slice of cake's revenge because I haven't eaten it.
L: You're right. I better-
She looked at her sister in shock.
C: The pastry cooks are making a big fudge one for dinner at this moment. I would be better fro you to keep some space for fresh cake this evening don't you think? *wink*
L: Uh... indeed. GUARD!!!!!
A guard galloped in her direction and stop in front of her.
Guard: Yes, you highness?
L: Don't ask questions and bring this to the incinerator.
G: Y-your highness? Pardon me, but... this is just single-
L: What did I say? Another thing. Don't listen to what it says.
G: Huh?
L: *sigh* Never mind. I will take care of it myself. I won't take enough precaution for being sure someone will try to kill me for a cake...
Luna left her sister and the puzzled guard.
G: Uh....
C: *giggle* Don't worry, she is fine. It must be... hunger.
G: She took it from the cold room didn't she?
Celestia's eyes widened by surprise. Then she chuckled.
C: Yes. Yes she did.

Awesome work. You gave her a very cute face in this. Inspired me this story. I hope you enjoyed.

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RAM-brandt In reply to cajobif [2015-01-05 15:33:05 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking that the cake was the real origin of Nightmare Moon, but this is awesome too.

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cajobif In reply to RAM-brandt [2015-01-06 01:19:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad that you liked it.

Oh! I wrote something about the other one: cajobif.deviantart.com/art/Lun…

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Chickhawk96 In reply to cajobif [2015-01-02 01:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Amazing it was a cake's revenge!

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cajobif In reply to Chickhawk96 [2015-01-18 03:10:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. It was mad that Celestia didn't like it. Well, it needed a reason to talk. And you don't know what can happen to food exposed for a  long time

Or Luna was stoned.

I prefer magic. Glad that you liked it.

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NismyFForm [2015-01-01 17:16:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this has to be your best work yet! The detail is superb!  

And once again, the cake wins. This time, it has taken control of moon horse! But since she is best horse of all horses, she can desire all the fuckin' cake in the world.  

Great job with this dude!  

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Chickhawk96 In reply to NismyFForm [2015-01-02 00:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Wow looks like she became a cake queen

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madkrayzypony [2015-01-01 16:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work.

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Chickhawk96 In reply to madkrayzypony [2015-01-01 16:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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silberhase [2015-01-01 15:34:45 +0000 UTC]

I like Luna's greedy expression.

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Chickhawk96 In reply to silberhase [2015-01-01 15:43:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked it

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Formoy1 [2015-01-01 15:12:19 +0000 UTC]

XD Nice!

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Chickhawk96 In reply to Formoy1 [2015-01-01 15:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks : D

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hyolark [2015-01-01 14:32:13 +0000 UTC]

너무 예쁘당

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Chickhawk96 In reply to hyolark [2015-01-01 15:40:54 +0000 UTC]

이쁘다니 다행이구만요

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Twylite-Sparkle [2015-01-01 13:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Hypnotized by a forced slay her cake.

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TraLaLayla [2015-01-01 12:06:46 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love this.

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Chickhawk96 In reply to TraLaLayla [2015-01-01 13:14:53 +0000 UTC]

Im glad you love it

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