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Description EDITEDIT: COMMENT PLEASE BEFORE YOU FAV.



I reeeally LOVE favs, but I wanna hear some feedback about this too 8)

You can fave first if you want, but please take the time to comment too if you can 8C


EDIT: ALSO THEY ARE FLOATING IN THE AIR. XD;



MILD-ISH BLOOD WARNING

.....if it needs to be matured for blood, please tell me



LOL UHM. I HAVE NOTHING WITTY TO SAY AT THE MOMENT. SO....BEFORE I THINK OF SOMETHING WITTY, I WILL WRITE A STUPID, SHORT MINI STORY TO GO WITH THIS LIKE I TEND TO DO A LOT.


ON WITH THE STORY TELLING.




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....Was this guy unstoppable!?


Two figures collided once more, after fighting for what seemed like an eternity. Both of them were panting, and smeared with blood, but there was a distinct difference. One had many wounds, and a grimace of pain and hatred.

The other was smeared with his adversary's blood, and had a wicked smile on his face.

They both recoiled and glared at each other, hatred burning in their eyes, and Nightbane roared, "Have you had ENOUGH yet!?" The other figure snickered, his bloody claws twitching with anticipation, "Ooh...I'm just getting started."

Once again they colided with simolutaneous roars, their claws locked in mortal combat. Most likely to the death. They both hovered in the air and pulled back once more, their limbs trembling with exhaustion.

Suddenly, with fangs bared in a malicious grin, Nightbane was charged by his foe, surprise and horror etched on his face as he was pushed backwards. His claws clenched and unclenched again and again in fists as he tried to regain his balance in the air, but he could not shake off the evil shadow looming over him, his grin spread wide across his face.

He had the upper hand, and his bloody claws lifted close to eye level, and he snickered maliciously. Nightbane gritted his teeth, an all too familiar metallic taste filling his mouth as blood dripped from the corner of his jaws.

In a feeble attempt to throw him off, Nightbane thrust one hand forwards, his claws latching onto his adversary's skull. He dug his claws into the flesh, and drew blood. He even watched it begin to drain down the sides of his head and forehead, but it didn't seem to phase him at all, but actually drive him to push forwards even more.

Nightbane could see his own blood splattered on the yellow hedgehog's face, and watched his blood drip from the evil creature's claws, some even back onto his headspikes. He trembled and tried to pull up and regain the upper hand, but it was no good. The numerous gashes about his body burned like wildfire, but he strove to ignore them.

His body went rigid and his blood turned to ice as the figure snickered, his claws becoming dangerously close to Nightbane's face, "...let's....end this little fight now, shall we?.....

Nightbane's jaws opened and his eyes widened with sudden terror, as he realized there was no time for him to react, or even a chance to get away.

He continued to struggle, refusing to give up, even his own life....



......without a fight.



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I. LOVE. THE. HANDS.

*happysobCRAI*

....but something about Sonic's pinky bothers me |D;;;;; I curled it back because I wanted his fingers to have a spider-like feel to them, and be...creepy looking...?

I dunno what posessed me to draw this. I wanted to do something actioneey~ Also I started the sketch at like, 1:00 A.M. last night .__.


...please note that I know next to nothing about Fleetway Super Sonic 8D I just wanted to draw him really badly x3

Also, you may notice Nightbane's design looks reeeally different here. This design was created by the awesome <33 I really love this design for Nightbane~

I lined this with a ballpoint pen which YOU SHOULD TRY NOT TO DO KIDS 8'D IT DOESN'T DO SO GOOD OF A JOB. ...But it's all I had so it did enough. I colored this with my Prismacolor pencils, and edited it in Photoshop (Darkened the black background, gave Sonic and Nightbane's wrist band some glow (As well as their eyes), blurred it just a tad because the scanner made it too sharp, and gave more definition to the coloring (STOOPID SCANNER made it too light too -______-;;;;; )



......ALSO.

...I would like to dedicate this picture to my good good friend WHO SENT SIS AND I A PACKAGE IN THE MAIL OMG.

.....I AM SO TOTALLY TAKING PICTURES OF OUR GEEFTS AND UPLOADING THEM 8DDDDDDDD THANK YOU SO SO SO SO MUCH ABBY. I <33333 YOU~~~ *hugglesforever* (Thanks Dream too! <33333 *hugglesyouBOTH*)


I am requesting critique on this because I am SUPER pleased with it, and I've never been able to request critiques until now..... .w. SO PLZ CRITIQUE~


AAAND


ENJOY!~


Sonic and all other related characters belong to SEGA
Artwork and Nightbane(c)Me
Nightbane's design in this picture created by
NO.STEALING. D8<<<< IF YOU STEAL I WILL HUNT YOU DOOWN. ... ...thankyou 8D
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Comments: 95

SuperSonicGirl79135 [2009-12-23 23:30:24 +0000 UTC]

I love it! you penicaled it right?? awesom ejob

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Chico-2013 In reply to SuperSonicGirl79135 [2009-12-24 17:49:50 +0000 UTC]

YuP!

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Gazer123 [2009-12-23 23:08:50 +0000 UTC]

Well, only subscribers can write out those big crit things so here's a critique in nice, traditional comment form. :U

The lighting is pretty off. Especially on Nightbane's chest fluff, the shading seems to totally ignore the blue light coming from Nightbane's cuff and Fleetway's yellow glow. :V

Nightbane's pinky is far too long. His thumb is bent too dramatically-- it seems like it's missing a joint. On Sonic's pinky, his third joint should be overlapped by his palm, not the other way round as you drew it.

However, this is still very very good. <3 It gives off a very intense feeling. Their expressions and their poses are excellent, and their coloring is pretty good, but I personally think Sonic's is a bit eye-raping in places. :b Altogether, excellent.

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Chico-2013 In reply to Gazer123 [2009-12-23 23:21:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the crits.

..I wasn't thinking about Fleetway's glow/the wrist band's glow at all when shading for some reason >< I totally forgot about it.

Glad you like Gaz :3 I don't normally draw stuff like this, (Crazy, intense, and with so much blood) so it was hard to pull off. ><

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MasterGallade [2009-12-23 23:06:39 +0000 UTC]

...

:'D

You have discovered my weaknesses: blood and craziness .3.

You win one internet

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Chico-2013 In reply to MasterGallade [2009-12-23 23:21:26 +0000 UTC]

..8'D

OMG YEY <3

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MasterGallade In reply to Chico-2013 [2009-12-23 23:38:39 +0000 UTC]

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WildfiretheTiger In reply to ??? [2009-12-23 23:05:42 +0000 UTC]

...Woah...Just...WOAH!!! This is FANTASTIC! 'Nuff said! Creepy and cool! You have successfully make a picture that gave me the chills! Congrats!!!

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Chico-2013 In reply to WildfiretheTiger [2009-12-23 23:15:19 +0000 UTC]

8D Thank you so much! ^^

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WildfiretheTiger In reply to Chico-2013 [2009-12-23 23:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Welcome! Hey, just for the record, how're the VA contest results comming? If I shouldnt've asked, Ignore me! D:

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Chico-2013 In reply to WildfiretheTiger [2009-12-24 17:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Good! The results will be up soon!

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Yoshifan1993 [2009-12-23 23:03:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gore and hedgehogs what could be better well I suppose zombies but ok ill let you off! xD

Just kiddin I found this a magnificent piece of art you simply atonish me with thiswonderful work of art and the story behind it is so compelling and carnage-filled I feel a sense of life in it!

Brilliant Chi and uh sorry if its a long comment still cant beat Abby's comments by miles!

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Chico-2013 In reply to Yoshifan1993 [2009-12-23 23:18:52 +0000 UTC]

XD

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it!

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TopHatHedgie In reply to ??? [2009-12-23 23:00:39 +0000 UTC]

*shudder*

Mist is getting beaten + Fleetway Super sonic


*runs away crying dragging Mist by the arm*

DO NOT WANT.

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Chico-2013 In reply to TopHatHedgie [2009-12-23 23:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Mist: D8 *is drag'd*

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TopHatHedgie In reply to Chico-2013 [2009-12-23 23:44:37 +0000 UTC]

*huggles Mist* :c

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Chico-2013 In reply to TopHatHedgie [2009-12-23 23:49:02 +0000 UTC]

Mist: *huggles back* D'>

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TopHatHedgie In reply to Chico-2013 [2009-12-23 23:50:04 +0000 UTC]

^^ mist. *huggies more*

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Chico-2013 In reply to TopHatHedgie [2009-12-24 17:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Mist: <3

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SilverSteel-Alchemis In reply to ??? [2009-12-23 22:57:00 +0000 UTC]

dis is so beastly chii oAo

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Chico-2013 In reply to SilverSteel-Alchemis [2009-12-23 23:16:06 +0000 UTC]

o3o

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SilverSteel-Alchemis In reply to Chico-2013 [2009-12-24 03:19:00 +0000 UTC]

>w<

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Hedgey [2009-12-23 22:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is so epic, I just love the freaky-like feel to it and the blood makes a nice touch! I love how you did Fleetway Sonic too ^^

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Chico-2013 In reply to Hedgey [2009-12-23 23:16:13 +0000 UTC]

8) Thanks!

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Hedgey In reply to Chico-2013 [2009-12-24 18:15:08 +0000 UTC]

No probs ^^

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jack0lat3rn In reply to ??? [2009-12-23 22:32:49 +0000 UTC]

whoooaaaaa this is super epic.
They both look SO COOL.
and the story is icing on the cake.
I <3 the glowy affect.

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Chico-2013 In reply to jack0lat3rn [2009-12-23 23:16:43 +0000 UTC]

8D Aw, thanks!~

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to ??? [2009-12-23 22:18:44 +0000 UTC]

(Do you think this is long? 'Cause it is. xD)
ZOMG!!! TEH GORINESS!!! IT'S SOOO COOL! 8DD
Chi!!! This is sooo amazing! It's just... WOW! I can barely put my thoughts into words! Oh wait... maybe I can. *smiles evilly*

First of all, the overall feeling of this pic is EPICCC!!! The blood, the darkness, the expressions... TOTAL WIN! Something REALLY must have possessed you to draw that early in the morning and THAT good... and evil. xD

Secondly, TEH HANDS! They're sooo good! The creepy position of the fingers are flawless! Great stuff. I wish I could draw creeper hands like that. 8'D

Third of all, LOOK AT THOSE INTENSE POSES! Dark Sonic looks slightly big, but it's crazy how you squeazed those two amazing poses into one pic! YOU HAVE SKILLZ, CHI!!!

In addition, your prismacolor techniques have gotten a LOOOTTTT better. Your coloring isn't as edge-y and the shading is placed perfectly! AWESOMESAUCE!!!

THIS PICTURE IS SOO GOOD, CHIIII!!! I'M SOOO JEALOUS! Also, you got the gifts then? 8DDD YUS!

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Chico-2013 In reply to LucarioGirl4Ever [2010-01-01 23:04:39 +0000 UTC]

*LATE REPLY IS LATE*

X3 LOL

|D I'm so glad it turned out alright ^^ Glad you like!~

PFFF the hands failed quite a bit D| But I'm overall pleased with them I suppose |D;

XD Thankyou~~

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LucarioGirl4Ever In reply to Chico-2013 [2010-01-02 17:01:25 +0000 UTC]

Horray for lateness! xD (Don't worry, I'm used to it.)

It's true!

PFFFT. It's amazing!

NO! The hands don't fail. Look at the hands I draw! D8

Nooo prob! Like always. ^3^

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Eternal--Nights In reply to ??? [2009-12-23 22:15:22 +0000 UTC]

I forgot to mention cool!! XD

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Chico-2013 In reply to Eternal--Nights [2009-12-23 23:16:48 +0000 UTC]

x33

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Geoledgy [2009-12-23 22:12:14 +0000 UTC]

cool and creepy lookin' at the same time C:

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Chico-2013 In reply to Geoledgy [2009-12-23 23:16:54 +0000 UTC]

Thankyu 83

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Geoledgy In reply to Chico-2013 [2009-12-25 21:33:52 +0000 UTC]

np

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Fly-Sky-High [2009-12-23 22:07:39 +0000 UTC]

OWwwch D: That looks painfull... But epic! <3 Aswesome story in detail even if its short it drives to read more owo *is curious what will happend next*

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Chico-2013 In reply to Fly-Sky-High [2009-12-23 23:17:09 +0000 UTC]

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niXocS-the-hedgehog In reply to ??? [2009-12-23 22:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant. Fleetway Super Sonic's brutal and destructive nature depicted in it's true, full form. It's not often i see a character with such definite form that scares me.

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Chico-2013 In reply to niXocS-the-hedgehog [2009-12-23 23:17:27 +0000 UTC]

8D Thanks ^_^

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Eternal--Nights In reply to ??? [2009-12-23 22:02:04 +0000 UTC]

my goodness thats creepy O_O

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Chico-2013 In reply to Eternal--Nights [2009-12-23 23:17:32 +0000 UTC]

oAo

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tannergolds In reply to Chico-2013 [2011-08-11 16:17:16 +0000 UTC]

That's a lot of torture!

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Chico-2013 In reply to tannergolds [2011-08-13 01:44:38 +0000 UTC]

Indeed it is

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Eternal--Nights In reply to Chico-2013 [2009-12-23 23:18:19 +0000 UTC]

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