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Published: 2014-02-27 22:10:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 274; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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This is a revision of a work I posted. Made the plane more transparent, so as to make it look like it was more of a imaginary thing the boy sees as he plays with his toy plane.Related content
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Ultimately, I think that may be the main problem in terms of composition. Nate also suggested that.
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Try seeing what it looks like if you draw the plane matching the position of the paper plane.
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Yeah, I just couldn't take the plane out, but I think the transparency lends itself better to the idea of the boys imagination, which was the idea all along.
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