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Published: 2014-08-24 17:25:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 329; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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I've always been the odd one out,"What a weirdo!" - it's all they shout..
"Who are you, why are you here"?
Not caring of the tears or fear..
They just demand, they justΒ ask.
But listening the answer is an impossible task..
Nothing can take away their doubt..
It's not the truth they care about..
They want to tell "you're not one of us",
"you don't belong here", it's all they discuss..
The feeling when people around you,
Tell the place, the only safe,
What you learnt to be yours as well..
It's not a place for you to dwell..
It was never your home,
only a lie, like the foam..
You should go far far away,
Get to your own way..
But this is my home, this is my way..
They know little and I intend to stay..
Stay and pray.. Whatever it takes,
I need not to listen these snakes..
Being different is what we are,
And if we don't argue, and make eachother weak,
We'll notice it's what makes us unique..
It's a way we can learn, from one another,
Like a daughter from her beloved mother..
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Comments: 14
WeissLupus [2014-11-22 16:06:16 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautiful! The amount of detail you were able to capture is amazing. A well point made as well. Though then again a picture IS worth a thousand words
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LadyLaria [2014-10-10 13:25:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow, those flowers are amazing! Still, your poem is more beautiful! I've never truly been excluded from society, I have a great family and nice friends. But I'm always careful not to hurt others. When it happens that my colleagues try to put me down I think that i can keep calm and clean my way, but others may not be able to do so, and it's really horrible to feel excluded. This poem is great it gives people strength to resist and it's... simply wonderful.Β
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chikuQ In reply to LadyLaria [2014-12-24 08:56:42 +0000 UTC]
It is a horrible thing to feel excluded.. It's nice you try not to hurt others, some really don't always have the power to stand up on their own.. This poem was gonna be just a depressing one since I was putting in it how I feel, but then I decided to put there some hope
I really hope people find it that way.. Giving strenght and hope..
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ZeeShiKing [2014-08-24 19:04:57 +0000 UTC]
I can't believe how beautifully you told your life in words. It's so sad to read but you summed up pretty well...
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chikuQ In reply to ZeeShiKing [2014-08-25 04:20:51 +0000 UTC]
Well it is a bit exaggerated in sense that nobody (well almost) has actually shouted something like that to me face to face etc, but I know there are people who would like to do so.. And others like me to who they have.. So I'm kinda trying to speak for a bigger crowd here too And for what I feel..of course
But thank you so much, I appreciate it
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ZeeShiKing In reply to chikuQ [2014-08-25 05:42:12 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I can understand. But we gotta believe the writer!
You are welcome
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chikuQ In reply to ZeeShiKing [2014-08-25 09:33:35 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I suppose.. well it is true in many ways too XD
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chikuQ In reply to syinthetic [2014-08-25 04:15:28 +0000 UTC]
Really? thank you so much, from you it means a lot
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