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Edit:  Fixed typos and rewrote some awkward bits.



A starship moved purposefully through the blackness of space, it's smooth, rounded lines glinting in the starlight.  Inside only the night crew stirred as it trucked along. 

The theme from Bonanza bounced through the darkened cabin.  The only two human eyes on the ship shot open.   With a yip of excitement he threw the covers off his bed and shouted:  "Answer!"  A glowing holographic screen bloomed from the desk in the corner revealing a head and shoulders.  A ridge of purple hair bisected the blue face from forehead to nose.  "Blue!"  Rover cried, a massive smile splitting his face.  "You're a sight for sore eyes!  Ain't talked to you in a coon's age!"

"Rover..." 

The human laughed.  "You know one of these days I'm gonna find out just how old them coons are and get this thing down to an exact science.  You gotta call more often, Little Blue, we're already at the far end of our route and we ain't found a bloomin' thing.  And sharin' a ship with these guys is about as fun as countin' sand.  Of course we did run into this mini nebula...Oh!  I gotta tell you about that!  The funniest thing h--"

Flyspur's voice was insistent.  "Rover!"

He cocked his head as he noticed the pulsing purple spots under Flyspur's eyes and his serious expression.  "What's with the spots, Blue?  Get your tail caught in the washer again?"

"It's Soorn."

Rover's smile faded a bit at the name of his guardian, a tiny twinge of worry touching him.  But he was being ridiculous.  Surely he was fine.  "What is it this time?"  He asked with a small chuckle.  "The crops get another bout of fungus?  The roof start leakin' again?"  Soorn was always complaining about things like that.

Flyspur let out a tiny chuff through his nose.  "He--he's been hurt."   

Rover felt a lump form in his throat and his chest tightened.  It was probably nothing.  He had probably just pulled something bending over all them plants.   "He's alright, though."  He couldn't keep the tremor out of his voice.

Flyspur closed his eyes for just a moment, bracing himself for what he had to say.  "I found him in the field in a deep blood sleep.  He'd been cut on some of his farming equipment.  I...I don't know how long he had been there.  He's in the medical facility on Oojin.  He--"

But Rover was already out of his chair and reaching for his hat.  "I'm commin'!"

Flyspur's holographic face flickered as the connection faltered.  "I'm not sure you have time.  He was in blood sleep too long.  They say his hearts--"

"I'll be there!  And don't worry none, Blue.  He'll be fine."  

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"SOORN!!"   Rover charged frantically through the door, his boots thumping against the hard, grainy floor, a nurse trailing him and shouting for him go stop running in the medical facility.  He completely ignored her.  He dropped to his knees beside a shallow tank of water surrounded by holoscreens.  Flyspur sat on the other side silhouetted against the picture window and the setting sun but Rover scarcely noticed him, his focus was entirely on the figure in the water.

A trembling hand raised out of the tank .  "You came."  

"Course I came."  Rover took Soorn's hand and held it close to his chest, water seeping into his shirt.  "Blue said you were hurt.  You're alright, though, ain't you?  Blue, he always worries too much."  But as he looked him over a knot formed in his stomach.  Soorn lay on his back, halfway submerged in the warm water.  His usually bright blue skin had faded to a dull grey and his golden eyes hung half-closed as if it were too difficult to open them all the way.  But what worried Rover the most was the massive purple gash on his leg.  It was gelled over already but with the Jssfloon's naturally thin blood he could only imagine how much he had lost.  But he was in the healing house now.  Surely he was on the mend.  Nothing could keep Soorn down.

Soorn managed a small smile.  "I've been better."  His voice was as tired as he looked.

"How did you get here so fast?"  Flyspur asked.  He looked almost as bad as Soorn with purple rings under his eyes, his hair uncombed and his soul spots, the dots under his eyes that appeared during heightened emotion, seemed to be set permenently in place.  "I thought you were clear at the end of your route."

Rover grinned.  "Hitched a ride with an Andretti Speeder.  Boy them puppies can go!  They're only one-seaters of course so I had to ride with the luggage, but that don't make no nevermind.  Soorn, you wouldn't guess what I payed him..."

There was a polite 'ahem' from behind  and Rover turned to find the nurse who had been chasing him still standing in the doorway.  "Are you the..."   The nurse looked Rover over in curious disbelief.  He was certainly not Jssfloon.  "...family?"

Soorn glanced at Rover with a twinkle in his tired eyes and said:  "You're darn tootin'."

Rover chuckled warmly.  He always loved hearing human sayings in Soorn's soft Jssfloon accent.

The nurse looked down sadly.  "I'm terribly sorry for your loss."

Rover's eyebrows lowered suspiciously.  "Run that by me again?"

"I wanted to convey my sympathies over the loss of your...father."

Rover leapt to his feet and whirled around to face her.  "What loss!?"

She took a timid step back, a little intimidated by the sudden reaction of the alien that now towered over her.  "You didnt' know?"    She looked from Rover to Soorn.  "He's dying."

Rover's mouth parted and he stared at her for a long moment before his eyebrows dipped in defiance.  "No.  NO!  He just got a little roughed up is all.  He's going to be fine!"

The nurse blinked in surprise.  She had never encountered this reaction before.  "I'm afraid not."

The human's expression darkened dangerously.  "Then DO somethin' about it!"

Flyspur rose from his seat and put a hand on his friend's shoulder.  "Rover, they..."

He shrugged him off  "This is a hospital, ain't it?!  Fixin' folks is your JOB!"

The nurse switched her tail nervously and retreated a few steps out of the room.

"Rover.  I know you're upset but please stop acting like a child.  They've done all they can."  Even through the exhaustion Soorn managed to give him a demanding look.  

"But..."

"Sit, please."  He looked toward the nurse.  “Thank you for all of your help.”

She nodded and gratefully left.

Rover lowered himself into the nearest chair feeling like he was going to throw up.  Flyspur sat beside him.  “It...it’s your hearts, ain’t it.”  Rover pleaded.  “They can restart them.  If they can do it for me  they can do it for you.  They could even replace them!  I know they can do that.”  Rover's brows came together like a thundercloud as something occurred to him and he jumped to his feet again.  “They ain’t sluffin of because of that doggone Third thing, are they?  Cuz I’ll march right out there and give them--”

“Rover...sit...down.”  Soorn stabbed an insistent finger at the chair with one of his lower hands.  

He dropped back down, in frustration and anguish.  The chair made for much smaller bodies, groaned beneath him.

“It’s not just his hearts.  His heart string is going into a cascade failure.”  Flyspur murmured.  “They...can’t repair that.”

Rover followed Flyspur’s gaze to one of the monitors.  On it was a vertical line with four circles equally spaced along it.  The top one was still and only three were pulsing, a soft note sounding with each throb.  The second one seemed to be slowing down.  Rover didn’t have to be told that they represented the four Jssfloon hearts.

“It’s alright, though.”  Soorn said.  “Both of you are here.  With the two of you around I never feel like a Third.”  He touched the side of the tank with both his upper and lower hand where Flyspur and Rover sat.  “I couldn’t have a better family.  Your two remember that."  His upper hand slid out of the water to touch Rover's hand, and his lower did the same for Flyspur.  He squeezed them both.  "Family isn’t in the blood, it’s in the hearts.”  

He let them go suddenly as he closed his eyes for a moment and with a small grunt a lower hand clutched his chest.  When his eyes opened again he couldn’t seem to focus them.

The monitor’s second circle had stopped blinking.

Rover started to get up again.  “No...no.  I’m going to get the doctor.  There’s gotta be somethin’--”

“Rover Finnigan.”  Soorn’s voice was barely a whisper now but the double name stopped him in his tracks.  “I haven’t the strength to shout at you.  Please keep your tail...in that chair or so help me I’ll do whatever it is that human fathers do when they take their boys behind the barn .”

This couldn’t be happening.  This wasn’t happening. Rover thought as he settled back into his chair.  It was a nightmare.  Just another one of those horrible nightmares.  Why sure.  Any minute he would wake up in his bunk on the salvage ship, forgetting this whole mess as soon as he opened his eyes.  But knowing that...thinking that didn’t stop the fact that his chest felt like it was going to implode.

Soorn beckoned weakly with a lower hand and choking back tears Rover leaned closer. 

"The farm is yours now, Rover..."

"No…”

“Don’t worry.  I wouldn’t make you work it.”  Soorn's voice was growing quieter and he seemed to be struggling to keep his eyes open.   "I don't want you to keep it.  I want you to sell it."

Rover shook his head, his mouth open but nothing came out.  He loathed farming but to sell something that Soorn loved so much, he didn't think he could do it.   

"Don't say 'no' to me, little traveler.  You sell it, buy fancy ship you always wanted and fly off into that big beautiful sky you are so fond of."  Soorn's wet four-fingered hand quivered as it reached up to touch Rover's cheek.  "You find your people, your family...your mother and father."

Rover put his hand over Soorn's, tears finally slipping down his face.  "You're my pa, Soorn.  You.  I...I don't need no one else."

A tiny smile touched The Jssfloon's mouth and his soul spots flushed a blissful purple.  His lips parted to reply but the words never left him.  His face slowly relaxed and his yellow gaze settled somewhere over Rover's shoulder.  His hand grew limp in Rover's grip and the first face Rover ever remembered seeing slipped under the water.  
 
He didn’t have to see the still monitor, he didn't have to hear that the blips had gone silent.  He knew.

The first words in his memory swirled to the surface.  “Hello, little traveler.  I’m your friend.”  

He bowed his head...and cried.


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Sorry for that.



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Comments: 129

chill13 In reply to ??? [2015-10-15 22:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow.  Just wow.
What can I say?  I am so honored that you feel that way about this piece. 
I'm always just a little nervous when I put up something serious...afraid I will end up sounding kind of sappy.  And I was particularly nervous about this one since I've never killed a character before and I wasn't sure how people would respond to that.

 So this is so very nice to hear.  Thank you so much! 

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John-AM In reply to chill13 [2015-10-16 02:58:57 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome! All of it is true.
I don't think I've read anything serious of yours that sounded the least bit sappy. I guess we all just need to try certain things before we know how we are at it.

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The-Octonut [2017-11-29 20:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh my chest hurts... D':

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chill13 In reply to The-Octonut [2017-11-29 20:51:30 +0000 UTC]

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DigitalPaintingWolf [2017-09-25 20:08:42 +0000 UTC]

DID HE DIE!?!,?

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chill13 In reply to DigitalPaintingWolf [2017-09-25 20:25:27 +0000 UTC]

Yes......

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DigitalPaintingWolf In reply to chill13 [2017-09-25 20:26:38 +0000 UTC]

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

My feels!!!!!

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chill13 In reply to DigitalPaintingWolf [2017-09-25 21:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Sad day for Rover and Flypur.

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DigitalPaintingWolf In reply to chill13 [2017-09-25 21:02:22 +0000 UTC]

How exactly did he die? I did not get that.

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chill13 In reply to DigitalPaintingWolf [2017-09-25 21:06:20 +0000 UTC]

Jssfloon have four hearts all.connected to a nerve fiber down their spines. That fiber that connects them and sends electrical impulses to them stopped working.

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DigitalPaintingWolf In reply to chill13 [2017-09-25 21:07:06 +0000 UTC]

So kind of like an alien heart attack?

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chill13 In reply to DigitalPaintingWolf [2017-09-25 21:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Exactly like that

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DigitalPaintingWolf In reply to chill13 [2017-09-25 21:08:44 +0000 UTC]

*sheds tear* im ok....

Well something that can cheer things up, in almost done with your half of the art trade.

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chill13 In reply to DigitalPaintingWolf [2017-09-25 21:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Yay! I can't wait. I will try and get yours done tomorrow.

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DigitalPaintingWolf In reply to chill13 [2017-09-25 21:10:34 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! Can't wait to see it

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Rebel-Rider [2015-10-29 04:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Would you mind if I shared this on my Tumblr profile? (It will link back, and I see that you do allow shares.) I keep my profile clean. I just think this piece is neat.

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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2015-10-29 13:18:14 +0000 UTC]

As long as you give credit and a link sure. And thank you very much for asking first.

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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2015-10-29 15:44:20 +0000 UTC]

I knew that there are groups you don't want to be in, so I figured it would be best to ask.

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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2015-10-30 02:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! it's nice when people are thoughtful like that. And you always are!

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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2015-10-30 03:00:15 +0000 UTC]

I admit, asking strangers feels a bit weird, so I sometimes don't, if they've left share buttons up. (I won't share something if they've taken down the share buttons.)

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jerrykimbro [2015-10-20 02:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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chill13 In reply to jerrykimbro [2015-10-20 02:42:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for accepting it. 

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jerrykimbro In reply to chill13 [2015-10-20 07:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for submitting it. Your work is so professionally done. Do you do this for a living?

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chill13 In reply to jerrykimbro [2015-10-20 13:02:27 +0000 UTC]

Aw. Thank you! I have done pen and ink portraits and illustrated one children's book for money. But not on a regular basis. I would LOVE to make a living with my art! But right now it's just a hobby.

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John-AM [2015-10-15 17:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Still love the joke about the Andretti speeder. And Soorn's "I'll do whatever human fathers when they take their boys behind the barn."

I could imagine the scene much more vividly this time, from more 'camera angles'. Even though this story is sad it has beauty. Seems you cut own on Rover's wondering words in  the beginning. I think that was good, helps the story move along well.

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chill13 In reply to John-AM [2015-10-15 22:11:59 +0000 UTC]

Heh.  I didn't know if anyone would get that.  Glad someone did. 

Soorn has a sense of humor.  Really, he had to.  He couldn't really raise Rover without one. 

Yeah.  I had him say what he was thinking more than just say he was thinking it.  Rover's a pretty vocal guy.  Usually if it comes into his head it comes out of his mouth and him sitting and pondering quietly didn't make much sense with him.  At least in this situation.

I'm glad you liked the changes.   

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John-AM In reply to chill13 [2015-10-15 23:07:38 +0000 UTC]

I just love all those little puns in your story! That's one of my favorite parts! I think I get most of them, and I always thoroughly enjoy them.

I can imagine Rover would've about dies being raised by a serious stick-in-the-mud.

Flyspur was obviously more persistent in this instance, considering the importance of the situation.

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chill13 In reply to John-AM [2015-10-16 15:04:14 +0000 UTC]

LOL!  Puns and little in-jokes are something I really enjoy.  Get Smart was just full of things like that, which is one reason I love it!
I'm never sure if people will get all of my jokes, I put them in more for my own amusement than anyone else's.  But it always makes me happy when someone says they catch them. 

Soorn has a mild sense of humor but compared to Rover....he actually is a stick-in-the-mud.    And Rover does get frustrated at his confusion sometimes.  But he understands better than most Jssfloon.

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John-AM In reply to chill13 [2015-10-16 21:41:19 +0000 UTC]

I should watch more get Smart. They had the whole series on Youtube, and we watched the first few episodes, but now you have to pay $2 per episode.
Sometimes those inside jokes for yourself are the best.

It's nice they Soorn really tried to understand, and not force Rover to act like a Jssfloon.

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Tigerach [2015-10-14 04:10:38 +0000 UTC]

why do you do these things to me

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chill13 In reply to Tigerach [2015-10-14 05:36:48 +0000 UTC]

What can I say? I need a psychiatrist.

I don't think Rover would ever have traveled very far from Jssfloon, as long as Soorn was living there.

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Tigerach In reply to chill13 [2015-10-15 17:15:58 +0000 UTC]

ouch

I guess that's true.  Sometimes we have to do harsh things to our characters to get them to move.

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chill13 In reply to Tigerach [2015-10-15 22:04:18 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.  Kind of feel guilty about it, though.

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Tigerach In reply to chill13 [2015-11-05 19:23:29 +0000 UTC]

yeah....

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LadyData [2015-10-14 02:05:43 +0000 UTC]

 I thought this was a sad and very touching scene ! I felt like crying when Rover wanted to deny that Soorn was dying. I thought Soorn's quote, "Family isn't in the blood, it's in the hearts." was very relatable and heart touching  

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chill13 In reply to LadyData [2015-10-14 05:44:31 +0000 UTC]

This is probably the hardest moment in Rover's life, at least the hardest one he can remember. Soorn wasn't just his guardian, he was his friend.
Yeah, Rover is optimistic and in this case desperately so. Almost as if he believes it's not true it won't be. Unfortunately that isn't the way things work.

I think Soorn's sentiment hit home with Flyspur. In many ways Soorn and Rover are more family to him than most of his real family.

I'm really glad you liked it. I'm usually all about happy endings. But this is one of the few exceptions.

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artsytarts [2015-09-03 09:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh I just legitimately cried reading this. You are and amazing writer and artist, seriously. This whole piece just radiates emotion.

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chill13 In reply to artsytarts [2015-09-03 17:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww. It certainly is one of the lowest moments in Rover's life. I don't imagine he's cried like this since he was a kid an had that nightmare for the first time.

Thank you so much!

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artsytarts In reply to chill13 [2015-09-04 16:51:27 +0000 UTC]

I can imagine. Gosh, poor rover. I wanna hug him!!

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chill13 In reply to artsytarts [2015-09-05 02:47:47 +0000 UTC]

I think he could really use a hug about now.

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TheRompinBlackCat [2015-09-03 05:36:53 +0000 UTC]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=V35oRy…

*Sob* you did this *Sob*

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chill13 In reply to TheRompinBlackCat [2015-10-13 22:29:40 +0000 UTC]

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zealousshadow [2015-09-01 21:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully told. Tragic, yet peaceful too. Not for Rover--I don't think he'll get over this for a very long time, but I'm so glad Soorn got to say goodbye. The line: "With the two of you around I never felt like a Third" was the best--it made me tear up! There's little glimpses here and there of who Rover already is and who he will become. I also love that it was Soorn who inspired Rover to follow his dream and find his family, and that his life work on the farm went into that. I'm ing this because I will want to read it again and again.

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chill13 In reply to zealousshadow [2015-09-02 00:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much! Yes. this will linger in Rover's heart forever, really. He'll always miss Soorn. But really, it was very fortunate that the two of them got to say goodbye. Rover always wanted to go into space and find humans, but he had always been kind of torn between that and his responsibility to Soorn. But to actually hear it from him...it set Rover free without any guilt he might have felt otherwise.

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IntergalacticAuthor [2015-08-25 11:39:36 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what would be more depressing. What I just read or if Soorn had died before Rover got there and Rover didn't get a chance to goodbye.

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chill13 In reply to IntergalacticAuthor [2015-08-25 17:38:51 +0000 UTC]

That would have tore Rover up so badly.  He already feels like he should have been there.  Soorn was always trying to get him interested in farming and he knew that even though Soorn supported him in his race to space he really would have liked him to stay and work the land with him.  If he would have done that instead of leaving this never would have happened.  That would have intensified a hundred fold had he not made it in time.  As it was Soorn released him from any responsibility on Jssfloon.  If he hadn't Rover would have been torn between honoring Soorn and keeping that farm and his yearning for space.  His wanderlust would have won out eventually but he would have always felt guilty about it.  And just the simple fact that he didn't get to say goodbye...let him know how much he cared would have made it ever so much worse.

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Fantasy-Fashionista [2015-08-24 02:44:06 +0000 UTC]

Awww, this is so touching! I love this! Love the emotion, poor Rover though.

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chill13 In reply to Fantasy-Fashionista [2015-08-24 02:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm so glad you like it. Hi Ho Hyperdrive is usually pretty light hearted but Rover has his really low spots too. And this is probably the lowest he can remember. I have a feeling it 'll take awhile for him to pull out of this one, though.

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Fantasy-Fashionista In reply to chill13 [2015-08-24 02:55:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

Yeah, it's pretty cool seeing this side of Rover though, since he is a pretty happy guy, heh.

And I bet. At least Flyspur is there to comfort him.

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chill13 In reply to Fantasy-Fashionista [2015-08-24 15:01:05 +0000 UTC]

It's very VERY rare to see him like this. Oh, he'll shed a couple of tear now and then, even at some of his movies. But full blown sobbing from him is almost unheard of.

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