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    Once it made its conclusion, the Guardian responded with robotic confidence, “I was tasked to guard the tower within your city, for reasons I cannot currently access. The other units are much like myself, and hold other pieces of the data we store as a whole. It would seem that they have been displaced. The data I currently hold suggests that my focus was on this location, as I hold many complete records of this area and the dungeons below it.” The Guardian seemed to go through the questions asked of it with mechanical efficiency. Not much charisma, thought Cassidy, but at least it doesn’t waste time in telling others what they need to know.


    Not a soul had expected such a proper answer, leaving them all to stare in awkward silence. Oddly, it was not Chelle, Cassidy, or anyone else to break that quietness. Instead, it was the Guardian once again. “There is a city in the desert, accessible by a dungeon under this general area,” it said, peeking down at the grass below. Of course it wasn’t directly below… was it?


    ‘Desert city’ it said. Cassidy knew it by name, and he was glad that the route between them had been blocked off for some time. He was convinced by this point that the Guardian wasn’t trying to trick them, but it spoke in such a stuffy way. Plus, he realized something else as he heard various Pokemon deliberating behind him at various volumes, and decided to quickly change the subject. “Hey! Listen up!” the young Floatzel yelled above them, attempting to grab as much attention as possible. “We’ve got a lotta Pokemon here who did everything they could! How ‘bout we get ‘em all properly initiated?”


    As distracted as Chelle was by the newly-activated fountain of knowledge, she glanced toward Cassidy and nodded in agreement, “Yes. We mustn’t forget who made this possible.” She turned to the crowd and hovered high enough that most of them could see her and called out, “Potential Researchers you are no longer! If you are one of ours, step forward and be proud! Today, you helped subdue and preserve an ancient, sentient creature, and that is no small accomplishment. From this day on, you are welcome in our facilities as one of our own!”


    Cheers emanated from a significant chunk of the crowd. Cassidy gritted his teeth at this, but didn’t openly show it. He wouldn’t be outdone! The Floatzel stood, but was unable to gain the same sort of easily-spotted vantage point as Chelle did. His ability to be much louder without remorse certainly got the point across in a similar way, though. “Explorers! You ‘n me were the line that held when it looked like we were gonna lose our city. I don’t care if ya did it by bein’ quick or just by bein’ a big lug like my buddy here,” Cassidy paused, ribbing Luke in the side with his finned elbow, “you let a big thing swing at ya with the intent to kill, just so it wouldn’t take a swing at anybody else, an’ yer always welcome with us if that’s how ya like to roll!”


    Another round of cheers made Cassidy feel a little more secure, like he’d done something right that perhaps made up for his earlier mistake with his little brother. Then, he was struck with the idea to look about. What about the Hunters? Where was their little speech to fire up their new members? … Where were their leaders at all?


    “Reconstruction should begin immediately. Discussion of the desert city will be scheduled for a later date,” the Guardian stated, minorly shaking the ground as it turned itself and began to walk in powerful steps back to Andalusst proper. Most of the other Pokemon followed suit, with a number of them seeming to slink off somewhere. Must have been Hunters. Maybe they avoided calling attention to themselves with a group cheer on purpose. Cassidy was never a fan of trying to analyze people like that.


    For a few unpleasant moments, Cassidy was left alone with Archimedes, who had lagged behind seemingly in thought. The floating Inkay bothered him so much. He never floated anywhere far enough away from someone else’s face, he spoke in terms that Cassidy couldn’t understand half the time, and he just plain didn’t like him.


    “I do wonder what set the Guardian against us…” the Inkay muttered within earshot. It was the first sentiment from the weird little jelly thing that Cassidy could ever agree with.


    “I get the feelin’ it was a who,” Cassidy accused no one in particular, his voice calm but determined, “and when I find ‘em, I’m gonna get ‘em right between the eyes.”

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Comments: 48

Sackuraba [2014-03-21 18:53:00 +0000 UTC]

UMG. LOOK. I UN TOWERR. EVEELLLL EVEELLL DEMONICCC

Ignore that, that was a joke... Directed at some people

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hunterN05 [2014-03-14 08:46:01 +0000 UTC]

An awesome finish to this awesomeness!

Ncie show chaps ^^ now hat is next for our guild members I vonder~

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Purple-Soysauce [2014-03-09 15:39:26 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing ;D! I can't wait to see more !!!

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ZestyLemons813 [2014-03-02 19:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I predict that the three guilds will each be tasked with retrieving one of the missing Regis. And that will be mission two!

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Meemie7 [2014-03-01 00:20:06 +0000 UTC]

WOOT! That was a great epilogue! Can't wait to see how the story progresses!

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galvezs [2014-02-25 16:29:57 +0000 UTC]

Prediction: Ghost or Dark type pokemon residing at the bottom of the tower has the ability to possess creatures outside the tower. It attempts to possess Reigigas in order to take command of the legendary golems, using the four's combined strength to free him from his eternal prison. Bam!

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Videogamer80 [2014-02-11 03:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Wait, everyone's calling Regigigas "The Guardian" and not directly calling it Regigigas. Is it not directly classified as "Regigigas" yet? 

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ChillySunDance In reply to Videogamer80 [2014-02-11 06:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it hasn't been classified as 'Regigigas' yet or given a formal name.

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Videogamer80 In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-16 04:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Do I have to change my story(s) to fit with it?


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GuildmasterGrovyle [2014-02-09 20:41:29 +0000 UTC]

At least reconstruction shouldn't be too bad this time. Unlike Sorbet, the Guardian didn't freeze all the crops and unleash an epidemic upon the citizens. Huzzah.


However, I cannot help but think that the Guardian may prove even more dangerous. If it can be manipulated and driven to attack the town... what will happen when the other three are unearthed? United, the four of them can prove unstoppable. The researchers certainly have a lot of work to do before they go taking risks again.

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Mavrick4d In reply to GuildmasterGrovyle [2014-02-10 04:01:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm pretty sure my OC might've done more damage to the city then the Guardian ^^''

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writercoda In reply to Mavrick4d [2014-02-14 22:43:10 +0000 UTC]

CURSE YOU LUCARIO KENPACHI ZARAKI

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Mavrick4d In reply to writercoda [2014-02-15 02:07:05 +0000 UTC]

That was pretty much what MakaelaBB 's Makira said after the mission ^^'

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aronymous15 [2014-02-08 20:49:26 +0000 UTC]

Cassidy dont bother trying to compete with the Researchers they cant be beat, they have SCIENCE on their side! though I think you made an error with Regice's dot face on the top-right. Anyway the story sure is getting interesting with the other regi's being involved and there being a specific pokemon who caused the Guardian to attack, though I would imagine there would still be a lot of opposition from some citizens about the Guardian helping out. Great job on the epilogue you two, I can't wait to see how the dungeons will be handled and how the dessert city is like!

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Nox-Nemoris [2014-02-08 10:31:47 +0000 UTC]

I didn't mind the wait to be honest because it gave me time to rest after writing about my Explorer and Hunter in separate works.

Getting back to the matter at hand, I thoroughly reading Part 1 of the Epilogue and opine that the artwork is top-notch as always. Keep up the good work.

P.S. Is Kelly a Shiny Buizel by any chance?

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ChillySunDance In reply to Nox-Nemoris [2014-02-09 06:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Kelly isn't a shiny, he's just very yellowish.

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Nox-Nemoris In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-09 07:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the clarification.

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salazander In reply to Nox-Nemoris [2014-02-09 06:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Well here is the artwork he did CSD did in April 2013: chillysundance.deviantart.com/… He did not specify that in the description so I would assume no. However, due to the fact that the reference sheet is older, he may have changed around the character...

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ChillySunDance In reply to salazander [2014-02-11 06:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, this is PMDE Kelly. He's the older brother in that universe.

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Nightswift98 [2014-02-08 01:27:14 +0000 UTC]

well this is the end of a great mission, may many more masterpiece mission come soon

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CrazyIguana [2014-02-08 00:40:05 +0000 UTC]

This was well written story and had fabulous art, but I think splitting it into this many parts were unnecessary. This could have been done in two parts.  (just two arts would have sufficed)

 I'm not trying to rush your work, but at the same time, it pains me to see you working so hard and not really utilizing your time.

But its your thing. so , ">opinions" .

Again~ great job!

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ChillySunDance In reply to CrazyIguana [2014-02-08 06:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Only two parts wouldn't have conveyed what I wanted and/or been very satisfying.

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Dr-Reggie [2014-02-07 22:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Amazing epilogue so far. M1 has been truly great. Looking forward to part 2.


The mention of the tower, guarded by what I assume to be the other Regi trio as robotic giants gives me a slight MegaMan Legends vibe, which I actually find kind of neat. Legends was actually one of my favorites, so I'm kinda even more excited to see these upcoming dungeons within the group. 

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GraceFireHearth [2014-02-07 21:00:53 +0000 UTC]

love it, im just loving it x3! So now m1 is done, ey?

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Allrose [2014-02-07 18:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Ooh I do like me some mysteries. Can't wait for whats next!

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Videogamer80 [2014-02-07 15:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Shoot, I thought that pokemon would get recruitment letters from the guilds. Do I have to change my stories to fit with it?

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ChillySunDance In reply to Videogamer80 [2014-02-07 15:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Nah, you can just say you'll get them formally later on. The paperwork and stuff still needs to be done, as well as official applications being sent out to everybody.

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Videogamer80 In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-07 23:47:39 +0000 UTC]

i don't get what you mean by "formally"

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ChillySunDance In reply to Videogamer80 [2014-02-08 06:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Formally, as in, a formal application. The guilds might have given out an informal speech, but they still have to hand out formal applications, most likely by post.

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Videogamer80 In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-09 10:22:40 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhhhh. Now I get it. Oh also, will their be npc teams in the guilds to interact with for the next mission or something? I kinda dont really wanna ask around for cameos when the next official mission shows up and stuff

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ChillySunDance In reply to Videogamer80 [2014-02-10 06:03:21 +0000 UTC]

If there isn't, you can always make up your own characters to interact with. These are called 'personal npcs' and are allowed to assist so long as they don't directly complete the mission for you.

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WolfpackDragonfly [2014-02-07 14:46:06 +0000 UTC]

 Well done.  I'm gonna have to modify this a bit to fit my story...that's okay right?

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ChillySunDance In reply to WolfpackDragonfly [2014-02-07 14:54:43 +0000 UTC]

Well, this is the official story. You're probably better of modifying your story to suit this, because the discrepancies are going to continue. But I guess if you're ok with that, then sure.

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WolfpackDragonfly In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-07 16:16:26 +0000 UTC]

Hm.  I'll work on it trying to make things synch up better.  But for now, I think I'm gonna re-arrange a few events so it makes more sense in my cannon.  Hopefully it'll only be this once.

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wyrmhall [2014-02-07 14:27:51 +0000 UTC]

Aaaah, after such a wait, this was a treat to read. The writing and art were both fantastic, and I'm anticipating for what's in store. <3

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Deeborm [2014-02-07 14:19:17 +0000 UTC]

"‘Desert city’ it said. Cassidy knew it by name,"

"Andessert"


Meanwhile the Researchers continue to outperform every other guild. Hahahaha suckers


But the Hunters will probably come out on top somehow

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Spenzaroo [2014-02-07 13:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh so now we're part of our respective guilds... i like it <3

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Drakel-X [2014-02-07 10:25:04 +0000 UTC]

oo I like what you're doing with this Guardian

He's no Sorbert but I'm sure just as awesome!

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ChillySunDance In reply to Drakel-X [2014-02-07 10:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Unlike Sorbet, he's also a statue/landmark right off the bat. >:3

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Drakel-X In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-08 09:24:54 +0000 UTC]

Haha that's true imagine how all those kids that used to play on the statue (I'm assuming that there'd have been a few haha) and got traumatized after the statue started moving

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SomeKindaSmeargle In reply to ChillySunDance [2014-02-08 07:55:08 +0000 UTC]

You also got the whole 'being tricked into destroying the town' bit done with off the bat too, it seems!

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Fly-Sky-High [2014-02-07 10:24:33 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, interesting!

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ShadowEclipex [2014-02-07 08:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Also I love how the Regis play a major role in the story. They are my favorite Legendary group!

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DrakoNekoshi [2014-02-07 08:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Woo! this is getting more and more interesting, I'm really looking forward to the rest!

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Shodukai-Kunoichi [2014-02-07 08:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Another perfect story, I wonder if it's too late for me to put in a late entry now...

Oh well, I'll try getting it in anyways xD

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Quarteon01 [2014-02-07 08:07:28 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... I have a feeling that the stuff Kara told the Hunters to take had something to do with the 'data' Regigigas mentioned.


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pokemaniac-x In reply to Quarteon01 [2014-02-07 15:39:47 +0000 UTC]

I have to agree with you on that.  The fact that she didn't mention it to Sundance is also cause for concern.

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XfangheartX [2014-02-07 07:47:07 +0000 UTC]

So it looks like we already have an antagonist. Already things seemed to be heating up, hmm?


Anyway, good job to both you and for making the art and writing the story!

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