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chilover — Golden-Haired Devil
Published: 2006-04-11 00:44:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 426; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 17
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I am waiting for you to comeand you tell me your usual things.
You say this every day and you do
this every day. Your sweetness brings a
smile to my face, but you are a
devil. From angel to devil,
the transition so quick. Your hair
like golden coils in the sun, and
eyes that hypnotize. But with that
smile and those devilish teeth, I can
tell what you are and what you want.
You bring me to you and want me
near at all times. A smile on your
face of pure joy and being content
with these times. I want to feel what
you feel and want to be happy
like you, with you. I think it would
be nice to feel for you as you
for me, but I can not, I know
who you are, you are a devil!
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Comments: 21
I know what you mean about feeling it lacks something, but there's a sort of cyclical energy about it that I rather enjoy. If you keep working at it and figuring out just what you feel is missing, the piece surely has potential. Good stuff.
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Thanks but I still need a lot more to go to be good.
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Hey, just keep working. If you put in the time, you'll reap the reward.
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Thanks, it is my first so I was kinda nervous about it.
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Thanks again. I was really worried that people won't get it.
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Great! I hope you see my gallery when I get it up and running. Right now, it is just pitiful.
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let me know when you get it all put up
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Thanks but I feel it is sorta lacking, you know what I mean?...
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Yeah... But I liked it, although I know nothing about poetry. 
OOooh...
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