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The Doll MakerThere once was a man who made beautiful dolls of all shapes and sizes. He even made life sized dolls. Many requested these expensive and exquisite dolls and though these dolls brought the humble man a lot of money he lived modestly with his young son Vine.
The young boy was fascinated by his father’s work. The doll parts and finished dolls filled the home. Each was unique and had their own beautiful personality. Vine would watch in fascination as his father would paint the delicate lips upon their pale faces. He wanted to be just like his father someday and create gorgeous works of art.
One day a rich business man requested an ornate life sized doll from the humble doll maker, he went by the name Gier. However the doll maker refused to make the doll upon discovering Gier was crooked and wanted the doll for perverted means. Gier grew enraged at the makers refusal, so enraged that he sent hired arms to get rid of the doll maker.
The doll makers home was set ablaze. He sacrificed himself to save his son from the flames. Vine watched in terror and dismay as his father burned alive before him. His tears only evaporated from the heat as he watched his home turn to rubble and ash.
He sobbed over the remains of his father, surrounded by charred reminisce of his home, of the beautiful ornate dolls. They were now melted, distorted, horrid disfigured atrocities of what they once were.
Vine searched through the wreckage with his tiny hands, trying to find anything that may have survived the blaze. In the end all he could find was a life sized pink glass doll eye. He cupped it in his hands and held it close to his heart, his messy black locks falling in his face. The eye was all he had left.
The child was at the mere age of nine when he watched everything he had ever known be destroyed in an instant...
Unfortunately the terrors were not over for the child.
Gier had his hired arms return to the scene of the crime, to make sure the doll maker was truly dead. They found the charred corpse of the once great maker however they also came across the son. Not sure what to do with the child they abducted him and took him to Gier.
Gier had no real means for the child but decided to keep him, kept him to replace the doll he never received. He kept Vine for three years, treating him like a doll, an object, playing with him. Vine was his prisoner. The boy couldn’t take it anymore and he began to lose himself. His mind began to deteriorate.
One night while the man loomed over Vine with him pinned to the bed, trying to play with him, Vine decided he did not want to play anymore. Vine quickly grabbed a pen off the nightstand and began to stab it through the man’s carotid. Blood gushed from the hole; it splattered all over the walls, floor, and Vine himself. Vine had just killed a man for the first time. As the body lay there, stiffening, Vine stole some money and quickly escaped.
Vine lived on the streets. He wanted to start up the family business again, to make dolls. He lived in an abandoned boarded up apartment in the bad part of town. With the money he stole he got parts and painted beautiful dolls. He sold them, getting more money, trading up, making more, more beautiful dolls. More life like dolls. Plastic, clay, and porcelain no longer became enough to satisfy Vine...
NEWS REPORT
Missing teen MURDERED. A horrific scene was discovered at the town park. Emily Rider brutally MUTILATED.
- Autopsy Report- Emily Rider:
Cause of death, blood loss and shock.
Found in what appeared to be an elegant hand stitched gown. The corners of Emily’s mouth had been sewn into a small smile with lips painted a deep red. Eyes...gouged out and replaced with glass ones, fake eyelashes and painted makeup. Her nails were removed and replaced with fake ones. A frozen expression remained on her face. Her head was shaved and replaced with blue hairs sewn into her scalp replacing her once blonde locks. And perhaps the most disturbing, every joint in her body was popped out of their socket or broken.
Truly the work of a psychopathic killer.
Examination Notes:
It appears Emily Rider was very much alive when the killer started to mutilate her. She was alive as he had her face sewn into place, each lock of hair tediously sewn into her scalp and as her eyes were gouged out.
She was initially found on a park bench, put in place like a doll on display. This would explain perhaps why the jointed were popped out of the sockets, it would make it easier to display her in whatever way he pleased. By the way the killing was executed it appears the killer views his crimes as works of art...
Jason Harris [ Medical Examiner]
Emily was Vines second murder but a first of a string. He got a thrill in creating new dolls. Carving into them, making them beautiful. He was now 17, never caught. Still living in abandoned homes, still killing.
He had gone completely mad, though he did not believe so. One might describe him as schizophrenic. Vine however thought he was fine. He lived in a reality he had created for himself in his own mind. He was not a killer, he was an artist, an artist who made beautiful dolls.
Vine prided himself in his work but still saw himself as worthless, dirty, used goods…
In an attempt to make himself as beautiful as his dolls he gouged out one of his own eyes and replaced it with the only thing he had left from his child hood, the glass eye. He then stitched half of a smile into his lips. However he did not finish the job, there was too much pain. He felt he failed in making himself beautiful, leaving scars, leaving his face mutilated by his own hands.
He knows he is damaged goods...he knows he is worthless...all he can do is make people happy by making his beautiful dolls...
His work became quite popular in the news papers and television broadcasts for displaying his art in public places. And he loved his given name by the public too...
The Doll maker...
"Just like daddy right?"
“Let me make you beautiful.”
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Comments: 337
Oysterking45 [2019-09-22 01:26:39 +0000 UTC]
This would make an intense movie. Anyone open to that?
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ADMA-DE-ROSENKREUZ [2019-07-13 15:59:10 +0000 UTC]
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to ADMA-DE-ROSENKREUZ [2019-08-02 00:29:00 +0000 UTC]
It means " thank you so much "
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ADMA-DE-ROSENKREUZ In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2019-08-02 17:03:45 +0000 UTC]
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OverTheMantle [2018-12-23 22:07:37 +0000 UTC]
That eye...it’s like I can feel it burning the back of my head...
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Wrekiz In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2019-05-29 00:27:53 +0000 UTC]
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Wrekiz In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2019-05-30 23:07:00 +0000 UTC]
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OverTheMantle In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2018-12-29 03:08:20 +0000 UTC]
He also looks a bit like an onryo. Even scarier. I like it.
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Sencilia-Harp [2018-11-17 14:19:59 +0000 UTC]
This was fantastic to read. I absolutely love ball-jointed dolls, so I found this to be a really fun story to read ^^
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Sencilia-Harp [2018-11-17 22:57:30 +0000 UTC]
Ahh thank you so much! That means a lot!
I also love bjds
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Nana-Scissors [2018-09-01 17:51:55 +0000 UTC]
I have read your story seriously! I love this story!!!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Nana-Scissors [2018-10-04 02:26:52 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh thank you so much! It is very old but I am glad you like it!
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Nitrogenouswolf [2018-01-11 14:44:18 +0000 UTC]
It may be poorly written but most art starts off with a story and develops and becoming precious and beautiful no matter how terrible the story is so I give you 10/10
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Nitrogenouswolf [2018-03-04 08:01:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! Your words mean a lot to me!
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InsanitySloth [2017-09-23 04:59:21 +0000 UTC]
Would you kindly allow me to narrate this story of yours? Of course, I will promote you as the owner of original content.
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to InsanitySloth [2017-10-01 21:59:31 +0000 UTC]
Of course you may! So long as I am credited I am 100% okay with my story being narrated ^^
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AddictArtistAndia [2017-05-22 21:37:23 +0000 UTC]
Ah I know the story is old but I still like it. ^^ Especially the other pieces that explain his gruesome and shady activities after his back story took place. Must have been tragic for him to lose all the hard work and only being able to salvage that precious glass eye. I read, well, kinda skimmed through the rest of the story pieces but I still think it's cool. It's lengthy enough and not really clichéd. Overall, I do like this Vine character, elegant and creepy. Great work!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to AddictArtistAndia [2017-06-17 23:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I do want to eventually finish the re-write but I am really happy to hear you like this old version!
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LucealMorningstar [2016-06-30 12:06:07 +0000 UTC]
This story will forever be in my favs. I think this is one of my favourite creepypastas. I love it. heehee. I want to narrate it sometime. XD Also I just love your character. He is awesome!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to LucealMorningstar [2016-07-05 17:01:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me!
You have full permission to narrate his story if you decide to ^^
Thank you again! It makes me so happy to know that people enjoy him!
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DracoTempest [2016-06-09 02:45:43 +0000 UTC]
Now that I've put my procrastination aside, I'm finally in the mood to give this a small review. (And also start on my Doll Maker fanart.)
I especially like Vine's way of killing. He doesn't just go stabby-stabby like some other Creepypastas I know, and he's definitely creative with his victims. In a good way it reminds me of the Puppeteer, who is one of my favorite Creepypastas, so that definitely helps. His backstory is well written too. What really hit me, though, was the inclusion of his sexual abuse. Most Creepypastas featuring that and the death of a loved one just did it terribly and tossed it in as an afterthought (i.e. "And she was raped" *Change of subject*), but with this one it was well woven in. Instead of just being in there to add sympathy for the character, it actually helps shape who Vine becomes.
All in all, this is a very good Creepypasta. And for a 16/17-year-old, it's very well done.
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to DracoTempest [2016-06-11 05:46:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! ^^
I knew the whole "doll" theme wasn't really unique but I hoped to make the character himself interesting at least.
I love The Puppeteer as well! And I guess that's part of the reason the two get along The Puppeteer is interested in Vine's work.
Thank you, I always worried about the inclusion of his abuse. I didn't want it to seem tacked on. If I ever had the time or motivation to rewrite the story I would make the whole thing longer and get into more detail in regards of the slow erosion of Vines mind.
Thank you again! Honestly though, I cringe when I look at my old writing, but I suppose that is only natural (I do the same with a lot of old art too.) Despite this though I do love Vine as a character. I had ended up developing him a lot more when I used to run an rp/ask blog for him on tumblr. Someday I would like to rewrite the story in a way that would give more sustenance to the reader in regards to his character so that more may be able to view him the way I do (Or a least closer to how I see him.)
I am always so flattered when I see fan art of him. It makes me really happy to see other people appreciate and enjoy something of my own creation. I save copies of all of the fan art I ever see of him and put it in one big folder. Seeing other people enjoy him motivates me to keep him alive! (Alive meaning that I continue to draw and develop him.) ^^
I saw your colored version of that sketch! I just wanted to let you know that I am not commenting on any of the contest entries for now! As a judge I felt it would make more sense for me to keep my opinions on the pieces hidden until it's time for all the entries to be judged and awarded. ^^
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xXAmLuvsXx [2016-06-05 02:49:18 +0000 UTC]
this I really love :3 I might even make few fan arts myself for the heck of it!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to xXAmLuvsXx [2016-06-05 17:19:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! ^^
I would be flattered! And I bet they would look great! ^^
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CoffyTacoTuesday [2016-05-27 11:43:17 +0000 UTC]
It would be okay if I translate this story in italian and publish it on wattpad (of course giving you all the credits)?
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CoffyTacoTuesday In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2016-06-07 16:01:35 +0000 UTC]
I did it! I posted it on deviantart too
ticci-coffy.deviantart.com/art…
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to CoffyTacoTuesday [2016-06-08 14:30:55 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! Thank you for doing the translation!
I don't know Italian so I can't read it but I bet it is great! xD
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BabaMunchy [2015-07-28 20:22:16 +0000 UTC]
I made fanart for this, but seeing the actual picture you used (because I listened to this from mr creepypasta) I did it wrong, but I hope you like it, once again sorry I got it wrong though, here is the link
evil-cute-marionette.deviantar…
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to BabaMunchy [2015-08-03 18:10:01 +0000 UTC]
No worries, I am always appreciative of fan art! ^^
Thank you so much for liking the story and character enough to want to draw him! ^^
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BabaMunchy In reply to Chisai-Yokai [2015-08-03 18:48:30 +0000 UTC]
No Problem he was fun to draw and im glad you appreciated it so its a plus for both of us ^^
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to Lynxskyrider [2015-07-10 06:13:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to XxSound-PrimexX [2015-06-23 00:51:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
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LennonTheVocaloid [2015-06-15 00:02:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is really well-written. I really like it! Good job!
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to LennonTheVocaloid [2015-06-15 00:07:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
And thank you for the watch ^^
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JumpyJumpycat [2015-06-13 17:38:30 +0000 UTC]
Its amazing! I love these types of creepypastas like sewing, Suicide (not offensive) etc!
btw the word play did it mean....sex??
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Chisai-Yokai In reply to JumpyJumpycat [2015-06-13 18:00:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
I understand liking darker topics in story telling. No worries.
Yes, Gier is a molester.
I worded it like that because I didn't want to go into any sort of detail with it.
It is a dark uncomfortable topic and I didn't want to romanticize it by going into too much detail nor did I want to leave it out because it does have a big significance in how Vine ended up the way he did.
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