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ChloroformBoy — antagonistic, i have no pulse.
Published: 2010-12-03 06:27:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 4946; Favourites: 127; Downloads: 18
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Description hold on.
hold onto what?

hold onto me, hold me,
when nothing else matters
because my arms are open 24/7
25/7 actually, even that extra hour
on the longest day of the year
because that's how special you are
(to me?  i guess.  but i never know
if i guess correctly or not)

"wait, did you say something important/poetic/meaningless?"
what.
"hold on a second, i'm busy."

well, i've never held onto a second;
time always slip through my fragile
fingertips.  never held onto an hour
either.  or an our.  a your?  fuck you
pronouns.  just hold onto something
(i'm a thing; hold me) hold me like a
second.  for a second.  instead?  you
hold me like a second-place trophy;
for a second-best, runner-up (no, i'm
walking down, head down, just down)

i told you i'd wait that extra hour for you,
but holding onto this second is too much
even for me.  sorry, but it's closing time.

it's none of yours, but i'm out of business.
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Comments: 90

MaikarChaos In reply to ??? [2010-12-04 02:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Words like these are the reason I have you on my watch list. Well done again.

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ChloroformBoy In reply to MaikarChaos [2010-12-21 12:31:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much sorry for the filler words

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snow-pear In reply to ??? [2010-12-04 02:30:16 +0000 UTC]

last line =
you =

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ChloroformBoy In reply to snow-pear [2010-12-21 12:29:57 +0000 UTC]

fruit =

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lacyfay [2010-12-04 00:45:30 +0000 UTC]

that last line is my absolute favorite. <3
i love your work. (:

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ChloroformBoy In reply to lacyfay [2010-12-21 12:30:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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mesmeric-revelation [2010-12-03 23:11:49 +0000 UTC]

fantastic last line!

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ChloroformBoy In reply to mesmeric-revelation [2010-12-21 12:30:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks !

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StormTheParade In reply to ??? [2010-12-03 22:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow, this is really... awesome. Hehe
I really like the way it just flows.
Like a thought. or a train of thought.
Except my thoughts are never this brilliant.

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ChloroformBoy In reply to StormTheParade [2010-12-21 12:29:26 +0000 UTC]

maybe you just need a new conductor lol

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StormTheParade In reply to ChloroformBoy [2010-12-22 19:00:00 +0000 UTC]

Lmao! good point

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HurricaneBombHayato [2010-12-03 22:08:31 +0000 UTC]

ahhhhhhhhhh that was better than mine

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ChloroformBoy In reply to HurricaneBombHayato [2010-12-21 12:29:12 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks ?

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MiracleBird In reply to ??? [2010-12-03 18:01:45 +0000 UTC]

i so gonna buy your album if i ever manage to get some money o:

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ChloroformBoy In reply to MiracleBird [2010-12-21 12:28:58 +0000 UTC]

it's free silly

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MiracleBird In reply to ChloroformBoy [2010-12-21 21:50:04 +0000 UTC]

.. awesome 8D time to go downloading c:

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ChloroformBoy In reply to MiracleBird [2010-12-21 22:06:32 +0000 UTC]

do you need a link.... ?

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MiracleBird In reply to ChloroformBoy [2010-12-21 23:00:31 +0000 UTC]

that would been awesome o,o

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ChloroformBoy In reply to MiracleBird [2010-12-22 00:04:14 +0000 UTC]

haha it's on my homepage

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MiracleBird In reply to ChloroformBoy [2010-12-22 12:30:23 +0000 UTC]

then i'll go find it c:

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ChloroformBoy In reply to MiracleBird [2010-12-22 12:50:09 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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MiracleBird In reply to ChloroformBoy [2010-12-22 15:44:37 +0000 UTC]

awesome c: thanks ^^

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DanielDC In reply to ??? [2010-12-03 14:33:24 +0000 UTC]

You are a master of your language.

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ChloroformBoy In reply to DanielDC [2010-12-21 12:28:49 +0000 UTC]

i try XD

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hannah-m-bella [2010-12-03 14:06:33 +0000 UTC]

i love the way you play with words

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ChloroformBoy In reply to hannah-m-bella [2010-12-21 12:28:39 +0000 UTC]

THAIN QUEUE

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xXxWindextorxXx In reply to ??? [2010-12-03 11:45:01 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. I love it.

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ChloroformBoy In reply to xXxWindextorxXx [2010-12-21 12:28:28 +0000 UTC]

thank yOU

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xXxWindextorxXx In reply to ChloroformBoy [2010-12-22 01:10:26 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome

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skullmulcher [2010-12-03 09:22:09 +0000 UTC]

this is like, almost exactly how i've been feeling for the past week or so.

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ChloroformBoy In reply to skullmulcher [2010-12-21 12:28:21 +0000 UTC]

ahh hope you feel better

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CharliieRaconteur [2010-12-03 08:34:24 +0000 UTC]

thise ones very nicely done

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ChloroformBoy In reply to CharliieRaconteur [2010-12-21 12:28:20 +0000 UTC]

thanksssssss

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Angelic-ins0mniac-xo [2010-12-03 08:27:11 +0000 UTC]

agreed. amazing. i love your work

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ChloroformBoy In reply to Angelic-ins0mniac-xo [2010-12-21 12:28:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Angelic-ins0mniac-xo In reply to ChloroformBoy [2010-12-23 05:35:38 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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xExistence In reply to ??? [2010-12-03 07:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Amazing as always

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ChloroformBoy In reply to xExistence [2010-12-03 07:49:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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xExistence In reply to ChloroformBoy [2010-12-03 14:29:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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