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Published: 2018-04-28 12:39:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 24700; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 41
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Description Part II, Page 14.
Insight II - 13 Β // Insight II - 15 (End)
...Ouch.

I apologize to anyone that expected weight gain.
This wasn't a last-minute decision, this was planned from the start.

Emily (c) me, the guy no one remembers.
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Comments: 27

black-sunn89 [2018-04-29 13:38:38 +0000 UTC]

wow

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Vinesaucefan [2018-04-28 22:17:43 +0000 UTC]

When Aragon was vassalized by Byzantium(EU4 Dev Clash: Season 10)

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LittleWolfPup2020 [2018-04-28 19:38:26 +0000 UTC]

I hope that evil person dies.

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ChocEnd In reply to LittleWolfPup2020 [2018-04-29 15:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, she's so mean!

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LittleWolfPup2020 In reply to ChocEnd [2018-04-29 17:13:09 +0000 UTC]

She almost made her pop!

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SumGhy [2018-04-28 19:05:23 +0000 UTC]

Even if she's physically unharmed, I couldn't imagine how much that'd hurt x.x;;

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ChocEnd In reply to SumGhy [2018-04-29 15:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's best not to think about it ;(

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SumGhy In reply to ChocEnd [2018-05-02 02:55:55 +0000 UTC]

And what's worse, the pain must have cut deeper than just her physical self ;;

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Shadowprower30 [2018-04-28 15:16:11 +0000 UTC]

Poor Emily

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ChocEnd In reply to Shadowprower30 [2018-04-29 15:01:24 +0000 UTC]

;(

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Shadowprower30 In reply to ChocEnd [2018-04-29 15:18:44 +0000 UTC]

Indeed it’s sad things has really took a turn for the worst

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AnthroLoverJay [2018-04-28 13:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, I much prefer having my expectations be played with rather than knowing exactly what's going to happen. Keep it up!

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ChocEnd In reply to AnthroLoverJay [2018-04-29 15:01:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you approve! ^^

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AnthroLoverJay In reply to ChocEnd [2018-04-29 15:08:03 +0000 UTC]

Of course! While I do find weight gain stories amusing, if the plot and characters are lacking, it's ultimately not worth it, as I've read several online stories with half baked plots and unlikable characters, that showed more concern for weight gain itself rather than actually making us give a damn about anyone. Sure, the descriptions and/or artwork may have been nice, but with pacing issues, inconsistencies, logical errors, and plot holes, they sadly fail in their end goal. I applaud you for putting so much into Emily as a character. The complexity of her inner turmoil you managed to convey in a mere fifteen pages, is far more engaging and enjoyable than anything those stories brought. Bravo!

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ChocEnd In reply to AnthroLoverJay [2018-04-30 12:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's extremely nice of you! I am flattered.Β 
I agree, too; I get a little tired of the fetish stories that are great with art and description, but don't do much in making the characters likable. I feel like my illustrated stories suffer a bit from this, but the next one will be a lot better.
This has been my plan all along; to make a story where people care for Emily because of her turmoil, respect Daren for his love of Emily, and despise Downfall for what she has done. And now that I've set up those connections with the audience, I can begin to run with it in the third part! I needed this part to set up the connections, and from the looks of it, I accomplished that goal. Thanks again for your supportive comment, I really couldn't be any happier.Β 

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BunnyHeadproductions In reply to AnthroLoverJay [2018-04-28 14:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Knowing scenes like this...i know whats gonna happen

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AnthroLoverJay In reply to BunnyHeadproductions [2018-04-28 14:22:55 +0000 UTC]

I can guess at what might happen, but I'm just gonna let things flow on their own. He's already finished all the pages, anyway.

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BunnyHeadproductions In reply to AnthroLoverJay [2018-04-28 14:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Opps sorry, didnt mean to reply to

Stupid connection

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AnthroLoverJay In reply to BunnyHeadproductions [2018-04-28 14:33:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh, OK.

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GuyBronson [2018-04-28 13:52:57 +0000 UTC]

Never eat food offered by a known enemy.

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ChocEnd In reply to GuyBronson [2018-04-29 15:00:52 +0000 UTC]

But what if it's not a known enemy?

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TheCopyUniverseTCU [2018-04-28 13:28:29 +0000 UTC]

That's okay. I really wasn't sure what to expect, honestly. Not this, but I'm certainly captivated!

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ChocEnd In reply to TheCopyUniverseTCU [2018-04-29 15:00:29 +0000 UTC]

That's good to hear, then! o.o

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FoxGamer13 [2018-04-28 13:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Houston, we have a problem.

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ChocEnd In reply to FoxGamer13 [2018-04-29 15:00:42 +0000 UTC]

O.o

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FoxGamer13 In reply to ChocEnd [2018-04-29 15:03:03 +0000 UTC]

And it's name is Emily.

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TruePokeChamp8 [2018-04-28 12:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Poor Emily...
I wonder what will happen next?

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