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Published: 2010-11-22 15:00:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 8106; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 17
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page 6 of LOSTthanks a bunch again for every reader who has been waiting for this
i'm so happy you all like it!
actually i wanna put Green saying "of course i'm right. when am i ever not?"
to Sapph: be careful, Yellow can be crazy when she's panic
okay, this page represents the "information" Sapph gives to Yellow on where Red might be (I ain't saying it's true or not~)
note: Red left pika once when he left for mount Silver but with a good reason. but now(?)
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THAT EMERALD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
omg Ruby look pretty sexy there
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shot XD hahahahahahahaha
well yeah xD
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Mistaken not mstaking! anyways sorry for being late with this... just noticed you made some comics!! <3! reading them all right now <3
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oops
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just read everything, How dare you say its bad! >: (...
its amazing!
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and again, thank you, i appreciate it
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haha, this is going to be my first time praising an artist to a dramatic critique XD!
Comics comes and go, some will be complete and utter failures because they focus on battles or tend to go off beat of the manga. others would be great drawings yet poor character personalities... Yet your comics compliment both of these aspects of a wonderful character development and great drawings ^.^, comics comes and goes, but yours is amazing ^.^, which will inspire many to work just as hard >: D
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thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!>w<
i'm so very glad you think so! guess it's because i read the real manga too much
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bwhaha, high five? i keep re reading the manga over again ^.^
and no problem, dont be so hard on yourself! your doing wonderful
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correction... i mean like, this is my first time being a dramatic critique XD, lols sorry for the mix up.. anyways XD
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no, it's okay^^ it's great to get a critique^^
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yeah sure^^
just call me denika
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Also, passay seems having a date with Miss Lieutenant Major Admira Passay.
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MARSOC-F = Marine Reconaissance Special (Spetsial'nogo) Operations Command Forces, better known as Marine Reconaissance Special Operations Commandos are an Elite Spec-Ops Marine Corps. theSpetsnaz100's HQ is in The harbor.
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BritishCommando will explain about my MARSOC-F.
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I'll explain 2 you about my Counter-Terrorism Forces.
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MEANWHILE
RIKOV: WHAT R U PLANNIN' MEIN FUHRER
FUHRER: IM GONNA TAKE MY TIME WATCHING YOUTUBES.
Lt. Cpt. Passay: Then, COMMAND?
COMMAND: I'M GONNA GO GET SOME ICE CREAM CUZ MY LEFTOVERS WERE EATEN BY THAT HUNGRY MAJOR PETROV
COMMAND GETS ICE CREAM WHEN SAW THE HUNGRY PETROV
COMMAND: THAT PORKY MOTHER-SERIOUS (STUPID) PETROV! HE ATE MY ICE CREAM! I'M PREPARING PETROV AS MY LUNCH!
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Hmm, for the panel where Sapphire says "you know i might be mistaking right?" it could have been "you know I might be mistaken right?".
Other than that, the comic seems pretty good to me xD
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yosh
and yes, i always forget to use capitals
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If you dont mind, I can do a spell check for you if you want of your future pages or something xD
If the text is good, then it'll be sure to make your story better C:
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okay
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Awesome, I'll do that then xD
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wkwkkwkw iya
lol baru nyadar?
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a few days
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nyaaa~ i didn't actually mean to make the cliff hanger, but the paper wasn't gig enough!D:
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