HOME | DD

ChocolateIsForever — Fatal Mistake part2

Published: 2010-04-07 10:55:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 5093; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description ...And here's the part 2!
Told you it was coming soon!

I practiced with comic strips templates a bit and this is the outcome...But I liked the other style better. Anyway.

Orin(the fairy) isn't dead. Of course not, he's one of the main characters! He's immortal, so while it seemed like his body had died(no pulse, no breathing, cold body etc) his ammunity system worked just fine and brought him back to life a few hours after Kael(the faun) started his jurney to the Sacred Grounds, aka the fairy forest.
Quite inconvenient for poor Kael, now he can't return the dead body and clear his reputation as a warrior

...Great for the plot though!!
Now it's when all the fun begins!!........As you may have guessed, there's no Plan B, Kael's going to be painfully sacrificed to purify and send away summoned ghosts

Ok, Im not THAT cruel with my OCs....maybe just a little.
Well, what can I say? Stay tuned to find out yourselves!

Previous:[link]
Next:[link]

*Art and story are copyrighted to me, myself and I.
Such remarks amuse the King

Enjoy!
Related content
Comments: 20

Devonthefandomkeeper [2017-05-08 17:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Pshhh

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

warriorwolfuntaimed [2011-10-08 03:12:41 +0000 UTC]

hehehe thats so cool

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Nikki-vdp [2010-04-09 07:46:17 +0000 UTC]

The third 'screaming Orin's head off ' panel is sooooo perfect . Totally love it, you really should keep doing this

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChocolateIsForever In reply to Nikki-vdp [2010-04-13 19:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! hahaha, I'm so glad you like it, it's my second favourite panel in this(the ninth one is my first)
And this is something really great to hear and the support is much appreciated!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Griff-Kendu [2010-04-08 00:25:03 +0000 UTC]

I love everyone's expressions , they're so funny! Especially Orin's explaining sheepish one x3 Ah, this is so awesome! I can't wait to see how it progresses.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChocolateIsForever In reply to Griff-Kendu [2010-04-14 09:35:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much! Well, I try to draw the faces and expressions funny and kind of 'extreme' for the comedy of it
Drawing Orin is the easiest and funniest thing ever! His design isn't difficult at all, fast and always cute and funny!^_^
(My notebooks are full of sketches and ideas for strips)
...I'm very glad you like my OCs' lil' story(as I said before, it's not very cool or special or anything, but sure can bring some laughter...this is why these fairies were created in the first place anyway.)

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Griff-Kendu In reply to ChocolateIsForever [2010-04-14 22:53:48 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome
Yes, I've noticed they're a bit exaggerated and I absolutely love that . Expressions are really fun to draw over the top too and you do it awesomely.
And I can just see he's adorable. :3
It's a very fun story, and not many people have stories for their OCs in the first place, and this is really entertaining

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChocolateIsForever In reply to Griff-Kendu [2010-04-15 15:27:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I appreciate it!
I'll try to put the rest of those fairies' universe on paper as soon as I can
I'm really happy that people enjoy my work I want to make people laugh and be entertained by cool sarcasm and as I call it: grey humour--it's like having fun from bad or unpleasant situations in life!....without being cruel or extremely cynical!(it's different from black humour, see)

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Griff-Kendu In reply to ChocolateIsForever [2010-04-15 23:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Ah, gray humor! That's a great name for it! I've always wondered if someone would come up with a name for the milder form of black humor... gray humor fits.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChocolateIsForever In reply to Griff-Kendu [2010-05-14 11:12:09 +0000 UTC]

hahaha yup, it's a good combination of things and situations that make you wanna stangle something just for the sake of it, but at the same time, just beg for some sarcasm!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Razzek [2010-04-07 23:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha! XD Poor Kael. XD

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChocolateIsForever In reply to Razzek [2010-04-13 20:27:55 +0000 UTC]

...Glad it made you laugh!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

AteMozzarella [2010-04-07 13:49:21 +0000 UTC]

..... I smell bromance XD
oh but THIS is funny XD any other plans for escape?
Plus I think you spell it as ogre .3.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChocolateIsForever In reply to AteMozzarella [2010-04-07 14:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha!Do you?!
....I dunno, if I'm in a good, pervy mood then maybe
Well, Orin has an idea to save Kael's ass. He's going to try convincing them that he's immortal and not a ghost...This is gonna be fun! And maybe a little gory...

Thanks for correcting me there...I can't believe myself, I spelled ogre wrong while being a Shrek fan
Ah, well. Edited!Problem solved!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

AteMozzarella In reply to ChocolateIsForever [2010-04-07 15:00:29 +0000 UTC]

hohoho XD
I DO HOPE TO SEE THAT.

And you're welcome :3 I realized the mistake easily but it took me a full twenty seconds to actually remember how it was really spelled XDDD silly.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChocolateIsForever In reply to AteMozzarella [2010-04-27 11:34:33 +0000 UTC]

I'll keep that suggestion in mind

Silly? Oh, no I blame my retarded spelling when it comes to words I haven't really seen written before(it's true, I've never seen the word ogre written, and I should have googled it before I posted it)

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Aranglinn [2010-04-07 13:38:41 +0000 UTC]

xD lol

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

totally-not-crazylol [2010-04-07 12:14:28 +0000 UTC]

LAAWWWLL

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ChocolateIsForever In reply to totally-not-crazylol [2010-04-07 13:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes, supersticious fauns are crazy and bad-tempered

I feel sorry about poor Orin though He got stuck with a mean faun in all this mess simply by wanting to save an elk

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

totally-not-crazylol In reply to ChocolateIsForever [2010-04-08 09:30:54 +0000 UTC]



yeah. . . "save" it. . .

👍: 0 ⏩: 0