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Published: 2005-08-25 07:47:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 4689; Favourites: 169; Downloads: 498
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Edit: Decided Not To Go With The Molester ;D ...Edit: DECIDED TO REMOVE THE POEM. BECAUSE SOME BIATCH IS GIVE ME 'F' ON MY LITERATURE SKILLZ.
Something I forgot to mention in here: I did a new style that I never-- (well at least tried to do before) done before.
A soft tenderness feeling touched my face.
The sun showered down with its light.
A warm feeling motivates my body.
Suddenly, an anonymous being step up infront of me.
The being handed over a specially wrapped flower and said, "my precious gift to you..."
To my friends that I know in REAL LIFE O__O...
well.. Kuroi-ame is an exception... we never met in person.. but we're very close to each other. XD ...
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I did lineart + colouring.
Zeiva did the sketch.
My friend edited my sucky poem 8D ...
Time: 6-8 Hours (Got Side tracked)
Tools: Open canvas (Lines), Photoshop (Colour)
;D I'm getting obsess with photoshop now D:! ahhhh XD ...
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Comments: 118
WOW!! *ww* 
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Thanks for the comment!
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Wow! It's amazing! The color, the art, the effects, the poem, even the background! I'm faving this one for sure!^__^
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the colors are so pretty^^ you have such talent X3 wonderful pic <3
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14 soon like.. next year ^^
im not a literature-- so... yeah.. screw the poem T.T;
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just a little note... instead of π: 0 β©: 2 put
hm.. it's not working.... @__@;
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yeah too lazy to change-- i already know.. but i forgot-- x__x;
ermermemrer.. should I fix it? XD.. idunno hahaha
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XD ohh ur spanish-- i get it XD ... okay.. !de nada??
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jajajajaja si!!!.... XD yo hablo espaΓ±ol!
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Wow beautiful, the highlight, vibrant and bright colour scheme really bring out the charm of the artwork- I can feel such warm summer setting and light-hearted atmosphere. Her expression whilst holding and smelling the flowers are enthralling, it just gives off this sense of tranquility which is also intensified by the breeze and her flowing hair. Anyway, I really believe that the flowers highlight her feminine, gentle and delicate qualities of her. The rendering is excellent and one of it overdone. Great job!
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*o*!!! Thank you so much! u make the best comments EVA!!
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I'd like to make a few corrections on your poem...
A spring breeze runs as it tickles my hair.
A soft tenderness feeling touched my face.
The sun showered down with its light.
A warm feeling moviatives my body.
Suddenly, an anonymous being step up infront of me.
The being handed over a specially wrapped flower and said, "my precious gift to you..."
When you say "A sofy tenderness FEELING..."
It should either be a soft tender feeling...OR a soft tenderness touched my face.
Second, you spelled motivates wrong. Moviatives is not a word.
Next, ".......an anonymous being step up..." If it is supposed to be present tense, it should be stepS up; with an extra S. If it is past tense, it is stepped up.
Last, the M in the beginning of the quotation should be capitalized. ^_^;
About your art-The colouring in the hair looks fantastic and the background is simply stunning. The shading on her collarbone looks a bit funny though.
Great job.
Good day.
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hm-- yeah-- you should give me a F for failure on everything i make, fucktard.
im only 13-- don't see me as a pro
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I'm only talking about your poem. Goodness, you get offended much too easily. I just think some of your other pictures look better than this. Yes, I WOULD give you an F in any literature you create, but I just stated that the shading on the collarbone looks weird. No need to become defensive.
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the poem wasn't great, i admit it. In the description it says so that i hate it, really. .__. ;;
sorry for spazzing on u--
i just think u look at the smallest mistakes that anyone could make-- really.., im no perfectionist.
im not a poet-- so i don't try to be.. but i do try to make one-- of course I'll fail in it anyway--- no point for me to live on ini that life. there, im already dead.
but i thought that the picture needed a poem-- so i made one in less than 10 minutes--
bad choice--
I shoudl get rid of it.
-__-* u know.. even after this.. im still angry at u
oh well, I hold on to grudges too well. 
sorry for being an angry kid because I AM an angry kid-- some people may have to restrain me to prevent someone getting hurt. that's why i try so hard on my pieces of artwork-- i try to make them the best as possible from my capabilities so no one would make fun of it-- for my good deviations-- the ones with the enourage critism or something. the poor ones would be normal comments-- -.-;;
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I suppose I am a perfectionist...
You don't have to get rid of it, just improve it, I guess.
If you're mad at me, I think I should be mad at you........I think.
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u have no reason to-- maybe when i called u a fucktard-- but that's insignificant.
i don't want to improve it-- there's no edition for it after I make it into a jpeg 
because i edit it even more after saving it into a jepg-- it really waste my time -__-'
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.......Actually, I was talking about the poem. The picture doesn't need much improving; it's nice.
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... -.-;;
okay, im done with this.
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That's beautiful. You both did an amazing job. The colours are so lively and work so well together. And the shading is perfect. As for the background, it's very realistic <3
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That is so gorgeous! =*o*= I love the rings or light in the BG and the beads in her hair! XD The colors are so bright and pretty! Excellent coloring job! =^__^= 
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you're welcome =^__^=
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