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lilYumi-chan [2012-10-07 17:07:53 +0000 UTC]

so close to winning

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FrozenAngel-chan [2012-10-06 02:51:03 +0000 UTC]

More detailing....like in eye style ^-^
And also same faced syndrom....this one's always really hard to fix
Can I enter for red riding hood?

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gr33n-ad0pts [2012-10-05 02:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Um I think every thing is amazing the way it is but maybe you could detail it just a little more. <3
(Btw I love the way your always changing styles, you make everything adorable. )

> ^ <

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kixty [2012-10-03 22:40:16 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOSH THAT IS ADORABLE! Its very good too! I actually like how the background isnt very detailed, it beings more attention to the characters. But if you did improve on one thing I would say the flowers >.< its not that big of detail though....

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DewdropLightly [2012-10-01 23:29:29 +0000 UTC]

May I enter the Raffle?

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Eclipsethewerewolf [2012-09-30 04:26:34 +0000 UTC]

big bad wololf plz

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Ruurin [2012-09-29 23:42:33 +0000 UTC]

Aaah such cute designs and expressions! They're both adorable~ * 3*/ and the background shading is gorgeous <3333

For improvement: I think you could work on blending the background and characters into each other a bit more. C: At the moment the characters and background look too seperate. One way you could do this is have some details in the foreground (such as flowers or blades of grass) the overlap the character. For example the wolf looks as if he's standing on the bushes, so if you draw some of the bush over him a little it'll look like he's standing behind it. Maybe adding shadows might work too~

Ohh this tip might be helpful. I consider it with all my drawings and it seems to work with me, though I don't know if it'll work the same way with your style. When putting a character in front of the background, they merge better with it if you include some of the background colours on the character. For example, a girl in front of the sky = I would add little bright blue highlights to her hair and to the outlines of clothing, the same shade as the sky. That way they blend better, and the girl looks more like part of the enviroment.

I think you could work on your shading a little too~ :3
Maybe add some lines in the hair to define it more. I can see some in the girl's, but they're not too visible. Oh and adding little specks of white highlights in hair can make it look cute and shiny *3*
When doing hair, you could always do a layer above the lineart and paint in a few strands of loose hair on top (e.g. to the end of the girl's bunches/ from the sides of her bangs), giving the hair more natural shape.

ashjfaj I'm sorry if it's too much to read! ; A; When I advise people with what to improve, and help give them critiques I end up writing to much and going too detailed orz; I hope something I've said will help at least! :'D You have a gorgeous style and I'd love to watch you improve it <333

;//u//; I really like the wolf, b-but Red is so adorable too ♥ is it ok to enter for both? ; A;

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Ash0000 [2012-09-29 18:56:52 +0000 UTC]

I wouls ike to enter for red ridding hood and my advice is um, (im not that great of an artist so im probably going to give bad advice...) well I see a lack of shading and the wolf boy looks like he is standing on the bush. I wish I could give better advice.

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ChihiroRabbitHeart [2012-09-29 15:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Awww, very cute ^.^ I'll enter for the big bad wolf.. Hemm My advice.. Uhmm.. I guess I mostly noticed the little/lack of shading with them.(It's a little hard to see until I zoomed in some and looked for it.) Don't be afraid to bring it out ^^ I know it is a style with some chibis to just have a more flat color, but I think it brings them out and apart from the background more if they're shaded. But you paid really good attention to the detail, especially her dress x3 And I love the kind of stitch-look you did as well. The other thing I noticed was the eyes. (Unless they're supposed to be black/dark brown.) Maybe giving them some color?

But over all, you have a very cute chibi style, and I actually think your background is quite cute and fitting for them ^.^

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lilYumi-chan [2012-09-29 15:54:16 +0000 UTC]

i wanna join there both super cute *^* love the big bad wolf XD haha i like the background it goes well with the characters i think but you need to work on perspective making sure everything looks right in that sense, i need to too haha also possibly shading but that could be on purpose

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BoykinWolf [2012-09-29 02:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Can i join? my constrtize critisim: Maybe add a little bit more texture if if thats okay...

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rainboe1324 [2012-09-29 01:24:41 +0000 UTC]

sadfgf I've been entering in a few of your contests I'm so sorry ;_;

But anyway, I think the line thickness of the hair should be a bit more varied, like more thin at the ends, and some lines I can see you connected two instead of drawing one straight line, because I see little bits sticking out in the outline so I think you should work on making your outline smoother and nicer.
Not that it isn't already D:

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StrawberryWolf-3 [2012-09-29 01:11:02 +0000 UTC]

wow it's so cute you really did a good job on it, way better then I could ever do but I think the only thing you need to work on is scenery. But over all good job.

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haniipop [2012-09-28 23:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Wait--

Improvement on this picture or overall art? Oh well. Let's try for both!


For this picture, I noticed the Wolf's apple is kind of floating on the tip of of his hands.XD Perhaps a little bit of shadow at their feet as well. Also, try to make the tree a bit bigger. If Wolf moves back, his head will collide to the branches! D:

For overall art, I'd like to see some you draw more backgrounds. I really like it! It's pretty and holds lots of potential!

Good luck on the raffle! These two are some lovely designs. ;u;

((Can I enter for both?./shot)

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Erik-Tan [2012-09-28 23:36:38 +0000 UTC]

I'd like to enter for Little Red

What to work on:

Not the background per se, but how it fits with your characters. Your characters and background don't seem to fit together well. By this, I mean your characters are outlined, and your background is more painted style. They seem like to different styles and don't mesh as well as they could. Other than that, I love it

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