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Published: 2012-09-28 22:31:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 790; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 9
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e v e I like how I fail at this I tried though~ I like how i just drew flowers to cover up the bushes xD!!! Im sorry I suck at sceneryThis is my newest style (again with the style changing)
and if your like oooh that looks so familiar = u ="
yea this is from right off tinierme page LOL except I changed a few parts e v e ( what am i doing. I shouldnt be taking it right off the page since the events still going on LOL)
Anywayyy I started Tinierme recently > u <~! I am so poor trololololol I dont get why I need G-coins for every. single. item.
P.s. I dont get how to use a better resolution on SAI ; A ; maybe thats why its kinda fuzzy? It crashed when i wanted to change it LOL
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This is a raffle
So to enter just tell me one thing i should try to improve on ( I bet you all are going to say background lol)
you can enter for both or one it doesnt matter~
and this endssss hmm Oct 5th? -selects a random date again LOL- OTL
Red Riding Hood
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Big Bad Wolf
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Here are the winners ; u ;b
[link] #10 Red riding hood
[link] #13 Big Bad wolf
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Comments: 135
Thank you very much and keep up the good work!
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I'd like to enter for the wolf. My entry is as follows: You have a great concept of this piece of work but your shading needs a little bit more work. Try using the Burn tool in PS and then smudging the ends to points at the endings to look like it has some depth to the hair. For the guys hair, (which is fine as it is but a little tip is always nice), what helped me the most is, I drew it just like the girls hair but short if that is how you put it .. And then do the shading as I described previously. For his face, I'd say draw it in the normal side, ie i draw all my characters faces pointing towards the left, (i suck at reverse), but after your image is done, just use the flip took and flip the whole thing over! And viola 
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-scribbles down mental notes of this- * o * thanks for the help > u <~~!!!!
Ill put you in right now~!!!!!
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Thanks :3 If i think of anything else may I be able to add? Or is that like cheating or something? O.o
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yes please add it~!, and you can enter for both if you want to, its just that you cant enter twice for the same character
so no its not cheating?
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Well I already have like 4 girls already, I need some guys to mate them with x'D And awesome will do~
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Can i enter the raffle for both? oUo
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yes but you need to tell me one thing to improve on, on this piece~
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I thought i read all the way through the artist's description but i guess i was distracted. 
the way that the big bad wolf is holdin' that apple is a little funky, it should probably cover his hand a little more. don't know how to say that in an 'artsy' way
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dont worry about it > u <~
and thank you~
Ill put you in right now!
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>w<
hooray~ thank you.
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It's a beautiful piece. I love red's warm smile and the wolf sleazy smirk. The background isnt the problem though. It's more character placement. They need to look like they're actually, you know, THERE, instead of looking like they were just stuck there like stickers. Add thier shadows on the ground perhaps? Anyway, looks great!
Lol, entering for Little Red
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thank you ; u ; LOL I seriously need to fix that, that is a very good explaination of whats wrong LOL ( ~ u ~)b
anyway
I'll put you in right now > u <~!
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The rabbit in the background LOL
Like in the corner, the bush is under mr wolf's foot.
Improve on Mr. Wolf c:
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thank you > u <~!
andd which one are you entering for > u <~!?
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okay~! Ill put you in right now~!
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I would say if you want to make it really cute work on the eyes, make them more then just one plain color :3 like.. give them some sparkle and stuff.. o r o
* c * I wanna try for the girl~
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okay~ Ill try for that on my next piece > u <~!
and okay Ill put you in right now > u <~!
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your work is always adorable asdfghjkl;'
the trees might need a bit of work, actually it'd be really cool if you get more details into the background!
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aww thank you > u <~!!
; u ; Ill try for that I need to search for lotsss of tutorials ; A ;"
anyway which one(s) are you entering for? > u<~?
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aha, no prob! when ever you need help, i'll be here! :>
oh yeah! mm, red riding hood? :>
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yay~! ill put you in right now o u o b
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nuu your background is beautiful D,:<
What I would say is maybe choose a direct spot for the "sunlight" to be in, so you can have a very even amount of shade on each part, so it's not just on random sides.. I guess? ;w; it's still so cute though >w<
entering for the big bad wolf please?
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aww, thank you ; u ;~
Ill try that for my next piece i totally forgot about that LOL
ill put you in now > u <~!
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;w; you're welcome~
Awesome c:
why thank youuu~
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For the most part, this piece is great, even the background ^^ Maybe darkening parts of the background would make it a little better? It looks a little washed out in my opinion, and some shadows might help. ouo
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; u ; i ll try to fix that for my next piece~ and thank you so much > u <~!
which one(s) do you want to enter for
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You are very welcome ^^
I would like to enter for Red Riding Hood please owo And thank you!
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okay~!! Ill put you in right now = u =b
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well.. the positioning of the characters is somewhat off. you might should shift them around so that is looks like they are part of the background.
i want WOLFIE!
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thank you > u <~
and Ill put you in now ~
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Welp, not to be offensive or anything but if you're going for a reallly cutsey look I'd say you should make the ears on both of them bigger. Like oversized. *shot*
Give them adoptees oversized ears. Adoptees love oversized ears. *shotx9*
But I actually like the background. I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU SAY THAT BACKGROUND IS BETTER THAN ANYTHING I CAN DO XD
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* o * r-really? ill try for that next time = u = b~ and see how that turns out~
and amg. you actually like the background ; o ;??? and nobody sucks at art~
Thank you so much xD~!!! - taking note of helpful info-
which one are you entering for btw? o u o ?~
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don't take my word for anything I doubt i'm ever right experiment by yourself maybe? XD
You're welcome~ I hope I didn't insult you anywhere there
Uh, I think I'll go for both XD They're both so cute~
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n-no every opinion helps ; u ;b
so you shouldnt say that about youself!!
its fine~!!!! and Ill put you in right now > u<~!
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whatdidisayaboutmyselfnow? *shot*
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I. Love. Him. And she is crazy cute, but I love. Him. HIM. <3
I dun wanna tell you fings to improve on, though. I suck at art.
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But if you're truly serious, perhaps find a way to merge your new style with your background? They feel like two totally different styles. o 3 o
Is that good?
ohgoddon'thatemeplz
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dont worry I was thinking that too but i couldn't figure out how to yet LOLLLL
anyway i dont hate you~~~ thank you for the opinion > u <~
are you going to enter for both o u o?~
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Just the wolf boy, thank you. o u o I almost never use girls in my rps, so it would be a waste on me. ; 3; And she's too cute to be wasted. <3
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awww, thank you ; u ; okay i'll put you in~!
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maybe make lil'red more lolita-ish? ouo and the wolf could look more punky?
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xD~~! thank you!~ and which one(s) are you entering for o u o?~
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