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Published: 2013-01-06 07:54:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 2638; Favourites: 80; Downloads: 24
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I want to move my art work towards more epic scenes. So, I thought I would start 2013 off right with a hero fighting a giant rock monster.Let me know what you think!
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Dude, that guy has sickΒ armor! Β Also...,
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Nice painting!
If you could slide the giant over just a bit or extend the arm past the line of the cliff beyond, and knock off just a bit of that haze, you would fix a bunch of depth problems. As it is, landing that jump anywhere near that creature would be really awkward.
good atmosphere, but it would be nice to see just how much the weight of the monster effects the place. It looks like he just took a swing and missed, maybe he hit the cliff and knocked down some of the path. or some boulders overhead. This scenery should be dynamic too, not just the characters.
good textures and lighting. I'd apply a little more midtones on the path. A little more grit to the world, but not too much. keep the interest on the giant and the brilliant golden armored dude.
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Hey, thanks a lot for the great feedback. I used it to make some changes to the pic. Let me know what you think!
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Some great improvements there! Enlarging the path gives that jump a little more flow, but I noticed in the shifting around you ending up causing a couple more of the problems you were trying to fix. I refer to this article all the time [link] because I fall into these things all the time. Hope this helps!
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Great article, thanks!
I think I'll have to just move on and keep the theories of the article in mind for me future work tho. Can't spend too much time in one place!
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Good plan! I usually ask for critiques when I'm done working on something, so I don't forget advice as I'm struggling to fix something. Or I'll ask when I'm having a really rough time finishing a piece that I particularly love. Either way, you're right, its best to keep yourself moving
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