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The Five Points ~Up thru the clouds,
and down to the sea
Straight to Five Points,
goes the sphere and the tree
I will take you away,
to this place where I fly
Of wonder and promise,
sans blue and gold sky
A place where one watches,
three suns set on que
A place where one watches,
a moon rise of two
Come with me now,
you are already here
nothing to worry,
nothing to fear............................................
A poem by Chris Herrman
Designed and rendered using Vue software.
Not to be copied or reproduced in any form of digital or traditional mediums without MY written permission.
Thank you for the comments and thank you for the visit
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Comments: 81
chrisntheboat In reply to Stepbeyond [2012-07-08 23:55:30 +0000 UTC]
They live in the spheres and travel through my worlds, and have adventures at the same time
Thank you
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Don64738 In reply to chrisntheboat [2012-06-26 13:56:50 +0000 UTC]
You are most welcome Chris!
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chrisntheboat In reply to erziban [2012-06-23 03:50:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Liz! How are you? I hope doing well
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erziban In reply to chrisntheboat [2012-06-23 23:38:00 +0000 UTC]
Well, but busy...and the writing is at a stand still right now, so I have started knitting and crocheting again so I have some sort of creative outlet!
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HouseofChabrier [2012-06-17 05:25:00 +0000 UTC]
The poetry made me tear up, and feel slightly sad. The render is quiet and beautiful. The combination of words and image are serene.
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chrisntheboat In reply to HouseofChabrier [2012-06-17 16:33:30 +0000 UTC]
Hello Annie dear. I am so happy that you liked my poem, that is important and to have you get a tear is so much the better
It is a very serene place to see Annie and the air smells of lilac and rose petals, sometimes pizza. I like it when it smells like pepperoni pizza You are missed so much dear friend
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chrisntheboat In reply to erene [2012-06-17 16:34:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you dear friend~ I am happy that you like it....
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PenelopeT [2012-06-14 05:42:04 +0000 UTC]
another beauty... so serene yet haunting. Love the colors..
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chrisntheboat In reply to PenelopeT [2012-06-15 23:25:24 +0000 UTC]
I thank you Penny my friend~ It is very serene there
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Hillbillygirl [2012-06-14 03:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness!!!! Beautiful! Beautiful!
The creation of both vision and words are perfect!!!!!!! Love it my friend! An amazing artist both in art and words.
So moving and deep, but yet soft and gentle.
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chrisntheboat In reply to Hillbillygirl [2012-06-15 23:23:24 +0000 UTC]
Very kind of you...
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chrisntheboat In reply to SoNothere [2012-06-14 02:52:12 +0000 UTC]
You are kind to say dear friend I thank you kindly
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Achello [2012-06-12 12:08:44 +0000 UTC]
i want to moon rises! Nice place to be.
Hope you and your cat are well!
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chrisntheboat In reply to Achello [2012-06-14 02:52:40 +0000 UTC]
You should see it Terry incredible
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chrisntheboat In reply to Riverine [2012-06-12 00:36:07 +0000 UTC]
I am Flabbergasted:rolf: that you are speechless
Thank you Davey!
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chrisntheboat In reply to HippieVan57 [2012-06-12 00:35:08 +0000 UTC]
Hey Jeff I thank you much Bro
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db-imagery In reply to chrisntheboat [2012-06-12 18:40:06 +0000 UTC]
always a pleasure, bud!!
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chrisntheboat In reply to TomKilbane [2012-06-12 00:34:05 +0000 UTC]
I thank you my friend for saying I am happy that you like this piece
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iytj [2012-06-11 10:26:51 +0000 UTC]
Yeeah!! Lets go there!!! Excellent work as usual, dearest!
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chrisntheboat In reply to iytj [2012-06-12 00:33:13 +0000 UTC]
You are sweet to say Isa~ How are things?
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iytj In reply to chrisntheboat [2012-06-12 00:38:58 +0000 UTC]
oh,thanks Chris!i'm just honest!
we all wait for the upcoming election, results.
things are truly hard,here!hope to avoid the default!
i'm getting better ,recovering from the surgery,still in pain a little!
thanks for the concern dearest!
it means a lot!
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chrisntheboat In reply to iytj [2012-06-12 00:47:30 +0000 UTC]
I always worry about you I know, I watch the BBC at night and see all the measures imposed by the banks(Austerity) and then today Spain gets money with no strings attached
I do hope the best candidate wins. I only wish the best for your beautiful and historic country, because all the world is connected financially
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iytj In reply to chrisntheboat [2012-06-12 09:13:42 +0000 UTC]
the politicians here are so corrupted! all of them!big fat liers!and thieves!
we have become the experiment of the loansharking Banks !
Spain has better luck,i guess!
thank you again,dearest! and you're so right!we all are connected and we all hope for a feasible solution!
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chrisntheboat In reply to davincipoppalag [2012-06-12 00:32:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you David my friend..I am watching the game 6 right now as I write this!
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chrisntheboat In reply to davincipoppalag [2012-06-12 05:00:17 +0000 UTC]
WOW! Best game I have ever seen Just wow for those guys..And if anybody ever says that hockey players are soft they are F^%%$crazy! They are some tough SOB's
Cant imagine getting slammed like that
No thank you
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davincipoppalag In reply to chrisntheboat [2012-06-12 08:01:35 +0000 UTC]
Yea for sure.. I'm glad LA handed the Devils their butts hehe..
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chrisntheboat In reply to davincipoppalag [2012-06-15 23:27:18 +0000 UTC]
best games I have seen
Just awesome rough play
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