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An old iron fence surrounds the groundWhere stones of the dead are standing around
Over time mother nature has hidden this site
Hidden among trees in very low light
Thickets and vines smother the homes
Of the people who lie hidden under the stones
Men, Women and children are all lying here
But time sheds their names as days become years
And as they were lain to rest in this ground
It absorbed many tears and absorbed the sound
Of the crying of the many loved ones that were there
And the memories of them, the love and the care
This dark quiet spot that meant so much to so many
Is now no longer remembered by any
These people that lived here so long ago
And the descendants of them that now do not know
Of them, or about them, or where they are lain
So long ago by loved ones in pain
Their memories could perhaps bring a smile to their face
From a simpler time to this time of fast pace
by Dale Cook
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Comments: 26
AstroX100 [2017-09-07 23:19:18 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful, I love the way you punched up the brightness of the fog
making it look otherworldly.
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wolf6666 [2012-09-02 20:06:45 +0000 UTC]
Nice poem ! Meters a bit off but not bad. Great Pic !
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SolitaryFae [2010-03-13 12:48:56 +0000 UTC]
Awesome. The sky is fantastic, its creepy. In the very best way of course.
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Thatsawesomereally [2009-12-09 10:27:07 +0000 UTC]
I love this. I can totally imagine Jack the Ripper creeping around there.
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TheFightingGoddess [2009-10-31 10:26:28 +0000 UTC]
It turned out very well! It's a great merge of elements
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LOVEmeDEATH [2009-09-28 08:54:42 +0000 UTC]
love the song,
realy like the way how you made it
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Anchefanamon [2009-03-10 20:58:16 +0000 UTC]
Gloomy... I'm pretty sure that a bunch of vampires hang out somewhere between the gravestones
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pagan-live-style [2008-12-12 16:43:20 +0000 UTC]
This fine piece of ART is featured in my Journal of today !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
greetz Len.
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ChrisRawlins In reply to pagan-live-style [2008-12-15 12:49:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much...
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jussta [2008-12-07 07:21:12 +0000 UTC]
Hi there Your great art was featured in Dark Mind.4 article: [link]
Cheers!
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MensjeDeZeemeermin [2008-11-13 19:50:28 +0000 UTC]
I suppose we're taking perfect shading, magnificent composition, and the 'Rawlins Atmosphere' for granted. Your usual excels most people's best.
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ChrisRawlins In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2008-11-14 09:40:25 +0000 UTC]
Aw, your too kind, I'm blushing. Thank you.
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davincipoppalag [2008-11-13 13:18:59 +0000 UTC]
Very moody, mysterious and atmospheric..well done Chris
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