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Published: 2010-04-22 02:46:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 4568; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 55
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Well, here's the sketch of the fourth page...Before evoke your inner Simon Cowell, let me say a few words:
1 - Except for another job, is the first time in my life that I draw Ezekiel.
2 - Keyword: S-K-E-T-C-H. So, be nice.
This is not over yet...
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to ??? [2010-04-24 21:21:50 +0000 UTC]
and all that!
But back to what started this, I aim to make Anita more likable by you. Not aiming for you to cheer for her instead of Eva, I know you're Cova all the way. I just want her to be seen for what she really is, that is the challenge since she has a lot against her now.
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fanwriter In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-25 01:00:12 +0000 UTC]
Less Mary Suish?
:cheer: I would LIKE to see Anita paired with Clive or DJ. But heck yes straight COVA!
She has to lose in a challenge that normally she would win. Same for Eva. Both have to be forced to reevulate themselves and Cody needs to see the soft hidden side of Eva.
Since it was a BOY newbie who left breaking your pattern finally it undoubtedly HAS to be a girl Veteran next. I don't think it will be Eva or Izzy since you need them for the triangle and square and while I would LOVE for the CIT to be out I'm thinking she's in for 1-3 more rounds TOPS.
Looking forward to next chap Necro!
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to fanwriter [2010-04-25 01:11:49 +0000 UTC]
Maybe it's just because I think of the worst kind of Mary Sue, but I always thought they were the kinds of girls who can charm the guy with no contest, in the blink of an eye, and no one can say otherwise. Anita has not done that, so I never figured she was a Mary Sue. Sure, she has brains and body, but it hasn't done her for much except second place in contests and no special recognition from Cody.
I am looking forward to the next chapter, only I has one problem with it. I need to write it out!
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fanwriter In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-26 22:55:36 +0000 UTC]
True with the real life, but it just makes them less real and shallow almost. GOOD! I want COVA!
Ditto here...I actually started working on THREE stories at once! On the upside I got farther in all 3. In the downside still not close to posting up any of them.
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to fanwriter [2010-04-27 06:47:20 +0000 UTC]
Aww. I love your writing, I needs more of it!
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Cid-Vicious In reply to ??? [2010-04-22 05:22:22 +0000 UTC]
Well, that only find out later, but the stakes have started!
And who could not look at those nice... Uh....
Thanks, it's really hard to put some emotion in her face (that annoying unibrow...).
Hmmm, I think Heather will not like this... CATFIGHT!!!!!
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fanwriter In reply to Cid-Vicious [2010-04-23 01:40:42 +0000 UTC]
Yeah the Unibrow is a challenge...but the soft side is refreshing. Just by being around Cody the rageoholic gym girl is gradually starting to be more approachable.
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fanwriter In reply to Cid-Vicious [2010-04-23 17:58:04 +0000 UTC]
End it with a Cova kiss and a screaming Anita and I'll be happy.
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Cid-Vicious In reply to fanwriter [2010-04-24 00:06:41 +0000 UTC]
Well, let's wait and see what happen...
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fanwriter In reply to Cid-Vicious [2010-04-24 02:20:34 +0000 UTC]
Could you draw Ezekiel and Izzy in costumes? XD
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Cid-Vicious In reply to fanwriter [2010-04-24 03:09:44 +0000 UTC]
What kind of costumes?
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fanwriter In reply to Cid-Vicious [2010-04-24 04:54:10 +0000 UTC]
Use your imagination!
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Cid-Vicious In reply to fanwriter [2010-04-24 05:09:03 +0000 UTC]
Well, tell me your ideas before...
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fanwriter In reply to Cid-Vicious [2010-04-24 05:23:37 +0000 UTC]
Sent you a note.
Since there creative spoilers.
I'm good at coming up with random ideas...just too good and I get story backlogged. Yeah got to stop that...
Anything that pairs Ezekiel and Izzy, Ezekiel in costumes, Ezekiel and Izzy I like.
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Patriot44 In reply to ??? [2010-04-22 04:20:41 +0000 UTC]
I have to admit, Anita looks good enough to eat! XD
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to Patriot44 [2010-04-22 05:55:07 +0000 UTC]
Better than the food, that's for certain!
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IronBloodAika In reply to ??? [2010-04-22 03:12:55 +0000 UTC]
Oops. Her mole's on the wrong side. XD
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IronBloodAika In reply to Cid-Vicious [2010-04-22 03:18:14 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, it's just a sketch. Easily remedied.
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IronBloodAika In reply to Cid-Vicious [2010-04-22 03:33:35 +0000 UTC]
Wonder if Anita's got any?
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Patriot44 In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 04:22:28 +0000 UTC]
Wonder if Anita's got any what?
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 05:54:43 +0000 UTC]
I hadn't thought about that, but I'm pretty sure she doesn't. She might have a noticeable imperfection or two on her somewhere.
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IronBloodAika In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-22 05:56:32 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure, but I wonder what? XD
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 06:04:33 +0000 UTC]
Well, I haven't thought of it yet, I haven't gone that deep into every character. She might have a scar from some kind of injury, but nothing grave.
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IronBloodAika In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-22 06:09:16 +0000 UTC]
If it's anywhere near the chest area Eva's going to assume you know what.
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IronBloodAika In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-22 06:18:53 +0000 UTC]
She would...if they got into a fight over Cody. Again.
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 06:20:31 +0000 UTC]
TouchΓ©, I guess she would.
Anita - *sniffs as she rubs her sore nipples* "That purple nurple was murder. I hate that girl!"
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IronBloodAika In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-22 06:25:08 +0000 UTC]
XD Love to see that.
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 06:27:30 +0000 UTC]
What a horrible thing to wish upon Anita! She already has the weight of those huge things, the scandal of having to wear a tiny tube top over them, and now they're throbbing in pain and everyone's staring at them.
Anita - *sighs* "No one ever cares about my mind, just my knockers."
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IronBloodAika In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-22 06:29:58 +0000 UTC]
I meant a fight between her and Eva.
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 06:35:02 +0000 UTC]
Anita - "Oh, fight her?" *She shrugs.* "If it comes to that, but yeah, I would end up blemished, to say the least."
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IronBloodAika In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-22 06:36:45 +0000 UTC]
For Cody!
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 06:49:10 +0000 UTC]
Anita - *cracking her knuckles, then pumping her fists* "For Cody!"
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IronBloodAika In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-22 06:51:22 +0000 UTC]
Catfight awesome!
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 06:54:21 +0000 UTC]
Anita - "I have the leet inspiration, I do!"
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IronBloodAika In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-22 06:56:54 +0000 UTC]
Who's that?
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 07:03:18 +0000 UTC]
Anita - "It's not a who, it's just leet! The elite, ya know?"
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IronBloodAika In reply to TheKoboldNecromancer [2010-04-22 05:55:53 +0000 UTC]
Every one does I'm sure.
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TheKoboldNecromancer In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 06:05:03 +0000 UTC]
If you find someone without a blemish on them somewhere, you'll find an overworked plastic surgeon. *rim shot for me*
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IronBloodAika In reply to Cid-Vicious [2010-04-22 03:41:24 +0000 UTC]
No idea. Any suggestions?
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Cid-Vicious In reply to IronBloodAika [2010-04-22 04:04:37 +0000 UTC]
Nope. I think she's already perfect.
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