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Scyrens [2009-04-18 02:02:44 +0000 UTC]

The only thing I can spot wrong on this is the guy in the middle. He looks good, but the hand holding the book is irking at me. Now, I can even draw hands myself, so I really shouldn't be doing this.
To be able to hold a book like that, one would have to angle the hand to keep it from falling out.
If he's holding it down, it's fine. Uh.. The fingers all wouldn't be together though. All I can really say is to hold a book in your own hand, if you haven't done so already, and see how our own hand holds it.
Everything else is fine and dandy. @_@

Er... That doesn't sound mean does it? I usually give crappy crit. @__@

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jellysocks [2009-01-02 13:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, you can get a sense of the character's personalities threw these drawings.

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