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Cirihtt — IF: Pop vs. Laike part 1
Published: 2008-02-12 04:39:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 4016; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 38
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Page TwoFirts part of round one for the Oc tournament "Infractus Fatality"
My Oponnent was 's character Laike
Part two and explanations soon....
For now apologies for the bad english, awfull jokes and lousy action scenes......
Edit: I just realize to late that I submitt the wrong file, now this one have more sense ....
Edit 2: : remake the intro part to correct some grammar mistakes
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Comments: 22
Aw, Pop is adorable!! And I'm liking your style, it's so dynamic, and you've pulled off the action scenes really well, especially that sequence with Pop doing his skating-thing... very cool.
And that last panel with the monsters is just sweet. I love those monsters. Talk about a mixed bunch...
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But them action moves look pretty smooth if you ask me 
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No, I just suck very much on english .......I need a editor >_>U
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Ah i see, well i can help with the editing of the intro, is this in present tense or past tense? Alright, let's say its the present tense, it will go;
Lost and not knowing anything about the place he has come to,
Little Pop walks around the desolated streets of the ghost town; 'Nifihelm' as he looks for the enigmatic redhead girl that he met in the cemetery...
(Next part) everything's good except: 'The boy encounters a young (and living) man sitting at the kitchen table of an abandoned house.'
Sorry to sound like a teacher, but it's better to double check with your grammer. You have such nice work, don't let your writing cripple it.
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nonno man is not a problem I learning more this way LOL thank you very much
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dude how did you do the motion bg effect so presicise
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Wiiiiii!!! X3 Los movimientos siguen gustandome 
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Wow I just loled so hard. Great first page. I'll be waiting for the second.
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omg i love Pop! he's so cute! loveing this comic ^__^
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woah, this is gonna be hard to top, it looks amazing, I really like the humor and action
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awww I just hoping I'm making justice to your character ^//^
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no tengo palabras para describirlo.
ES.. PERFECTO, TAN DINAMICO, LAS POSES, WTFOMGBBQ.
cirihtt, tus habilidades causan envidia admiracion y respeto.
+10000000
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Oooo! I really like your style... Sense of humor... Character... Everything! I love it!
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Oh my gawd, I absolutely adore your drawing style -A-
And the paneling is really well laid out too. Gosh, don't feel ashamed at all about this because it ROCKS!!!
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So....good.....@A@
Tobi: 030.....Wow, he's got some good moves! 
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