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P-Twice [2020-03-02 03:31:01 +0000 UTC]

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Holy shit this is so nice!! x3 honestly, the colors and shading are very spot on! lmao you even managed to give them what I couldn't: expressions XDXD Anyways, I think this is a very fun piece to look at! I mean, this is a rich draw with many details! Like Puppet's button hidden with the wrinkles as well as the detailed hairline; the lineart for Puppet being black while Toy Bonnie's blue gives a nice touch to the piece too. And omg the hair looks so soft and very silk-like x3 hahaha even gravity goes well with the Marionette's hair. And like I said before, you shaded correctly every part of them both; the shadows go according to one light source which is really great!

Now, I would say the anatomy of Puppet's knee joints could be better and so the jawline, but those things can be corrected with the right references and the usual practice- still I believe you did an EXCELLENT job with proportions! (Which is one of the most difficult things to do when drawing, so congrats!) Another thing I would like to point out is Toy Bonnie's pose, it's a little bit too stiff, perphaps trying to give some dynamics to his arms might help. And finally, I think the white brush tends to give some kind of texture like rubber to the clothes, so maybe try to highlight with a very light color? ^o^' But asides from those aspects, I think this is an AWESOME pic and very loyal to the references! So yeah, congratulations! You did a wonderful job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

(Sorry if I sounded too harsh but I tried to review this delicious piece objectively x'U)

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P-Twice [2020-03-02 03:32:38 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh I'm an idiot! I'm sorry I forgot to say thank you!! XD Really, it makes me happy to see these boios drawn in a different and great style! Thank you so much! x3

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