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clarenceyao — Marilyn Call Me
Published: 2012-02-08 20:22:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 2345; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 36
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My love for Marilyn! Its my first for this month-- I really need to sharpen my skills, so out of practice, need to learn A LOT!Related content
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Sorry for the few day delay on getting back to you on this crit. I have been pretty busy.
This piece looks pretty promising! Right when I saw it the first thing I thought was Marilyn. I dig her attitude, she has a almost I am too good for you thing going. If it were me I think I would play that more. Maybe bring the eye brown on her left down a bit to give her a bit more of that emotion. I think maybe since the eyes are round and the hair line is round if you round out the eye browns it would also make the piece flow a bit more. I really like the pose and I think the proportions are correct. I feel the arm may be a bit to muscular, but that's being a bit picky.
Overall I say your doing a good job! I would say just keep at it! maybe check out some artists who draw the female form amazing in your eyes and study what they do. That's what I do. Nice job!!
Hope I helped, let me know if you have any questions!
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Thank you so much for the critique, I will play with the eye brows. I see your point. I am still struggling with the hair though and I've been studying the other artist's renditions of Marilyn's hair. Thank you so much
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Your more then welcome! Yeah I still have a tough time with hair too! Especially girls! You'll get it
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Thank you although I still need to improve a lot.... !
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Oh,don't worry, time and practice take care of that!
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