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Part 4: Despair and hope
My appearance was so changed, I just stared at this reptile in the mirror and felt an odd satisfaction at my new visage.
“Are you okay?” asked the cat.
I snapped out of the stupor I had apparently fallen into while staring in the mirror and I nearly dropped it.
“Huh, what?” I replied.
I felt so confused that I couldn’t keep my thoughts together.
“Breathe deep and slow, the transition will cause disorientation but you will adjust,” said the cat and I took deep breaths until I began to feel better.
“Well, I suppose I should introduce myself, I’m Darius Rian”
“I’m Virgil,” I replied.
“Virgil huh, is there a second name?” he asked.
“It’s just Virgil” I answered, “I don’t have a second name. I was orphaned when I was a baby.”
As I said this Darius looked at me with a shocked expression (which at the time, I had never seen from a cat before).
“An orphanage!?” he exclaimed. “Those heartless bastards, I can’t believe they’re using children for the D-Series experiments!” He cursed angrily.
“Wait, are you saying that they’ve been bringing my friends here?” I asked hopeful but also concerned “I knew there was something wrong, but I was told that they had all been adopted”
It all made sense. These people must have been taking children from the orphanage under the guise of them being adopted and no one would suspect a thing… Excerpt me.
Back at the orphanage, kids were being adopted much more then usual and within a week five of us were gone.
The strange thing about it was that they all left before I could even say goodbye to any of them and I was told each time that they left early in the morning, very early.
That is until Jack, my best friend was taken and I was told he had been adopted, but he would not have left without telling me. We were inseparable and he had been in the orphanage since birth too.
We were like brothers and we had promised each other that we were both going together or not at all. That was when I knew something was wrong.
At midnight I stole into the records room, it wasn’t difficult for me to pick the lock on the cabinet and I quietly searched for Jack’s file.
I soon found it and it had an address and phone number to his new home.
I tried the phone number and I got nothing but a wrong number tone on the other end of the line.
I then used the phone in the room to contact an information line and asked them to check the address.
I waited a moment and as I had expected, the address did not exist.
“What have they done with him?” I wondered.
I was about to head back to my room when the lights in the records room turned on suddenly. I saw an old bald man with a scar on his left cheek, but then…a sharp pain in the back of my neck…a needle! I realised too late and I fell unconscious.
“Wait! That old man was the same guy who I saw before, when I woke up!” I realised.
“That must have been Trask, he’s the weasel who locked me up in here?” said Darius.
“So that means… Jack must be here in this facility!” I said hopefully. “I’ve got to find him and the others now”
“Whoa hold on kid!” Said Darius suddenly “We need to get out of here as soon as possible”
“I can’t just leave!” I argued “I need to find my friends!?”
“It’s too dangerous. The whole reason for all this madness is to create dragons for military purposes, they’re creating bio weapons here and you are the key to their success” he said seriously. “So far your transformation is progressing without any flaws, and when it’s complete, all they would need is your blood to copy the procedure and they would be able to make as many dragons as they want” he explained
“I don’t care!” I yelled “I am not leaving without my friends, so you can either help me or just stay here!” I said sternly as I got to my feet and headed for the door.
“Alright!” said Darius reluctantly “I’ll guide you, I know this facility better than you”.
“Thank you…” I smiled and opened the door out of the room.
We headed out of the room and into a hallway lined with cables and wires. Maintenance tunnels, I surmised.
“Listen…” I said looking to Darius “do you know where the cyrostasis chamber is?” I asked and Darius looked worried and nervously replied.
“Yeah…but you don’t want to go there” he grimaced.
“Yes I do! So where is it?” I demanded.
Darius hesitated but he reluctantly showed me the way and I followed.
I didn’t understand why he was so reluctant about this. Was the place heavily guarded? Or was it something else.
We soon came to a large mechanical steel door with the number eight on it.
I found the door’s opening mechanism next to it and as I was about to push it, Darius spoke up.
“Virgil…I’m asking you one more time, please just walk away, you won’t like what you see” he said almost begging, but I was determined to know what they were doing down here.
Without replying to him I pushed the button and the locking mechanism made a loud clank and the door slid open.
I slowly stepped in and a flow of mist blew over my feet and over Darius.
Darius jumped out of the mist covered floor and onto my shoulder and I continued on inside.
It was dark inside but not so dark that I couldn’t see. It was a large dark chamber and inside was what appeared to be six large, upright, cylinder water tanks and each one had machines attached at the bottom of them.
Each tank was dark and coated with condensation but I could see there was something floating inside each of them.
I slowly walked up to one of them and I put my hand against it. I wiped the condensation away and what I saw put a chill down my spine.
I gasped in fright as I found my friend Alan, his face was half deformed and he appeared to have limbs growing out of his body in odd places, his skin had patches of blue scales and spikes protruding from it too.
I fell backwards onto the floor from the shock and I quickly got up and I looked into the other tanks as well.
Mich, Lisa, Terry, Simon… They were all here and they had been mutilated and deformed, but worst of all, they were all dead.
I felt nauseous, Darius jumped off of my shoulder as I ran into the corner and
I proceeded to vomit.
I burst into tears at this point. All my friends were dead and there was nothing I could do about it.
I ran out of the chamber with Darius close behind, I slammed the button of the door mechanism and the door closed.
I slid to the floor against the door, the tears were flowing down my face now and I covered my eyes sobbing.
“I’m so sorry Virgil, I didn’t want you to see that” he said comfortingly, he looked at the door and looked furious.
“Trask is insane!” He said with disgust “and he used me to achieve this!?” said Darius with hate in his voice.
I felt so angry too, so furious that I was growling. I stood up and wiped the tears from my face.
“I won’t let him get away with this! I’m going to make him pay!” I spat with hate and rage in my words.
“Come on, we should leave” said Darius.
I got back to my feet but then I suddenly realised something that gave me hope.
“Wait… Only five of those tanks are in use. Jack isn’t here! So he might still be alive, I have to find him!” I said hopeful that there was still time.
But before I could leave my back became warm and was getting hotter, I knew instantly what was about to happen.
“Oh no…It’s happening again!” I said gritting my teeth together.
Darius kept his distance as I collapsed to the floor. My shirt was getting tight as something in my back was pushing its way out.
My shirt stretched and soon I could hear it ripping apart at the seams and then a sudden surge of heat flowed out of my back and into whatever it was that was growing from it.
I was nearly choking from the tightness of my own shirt when finally it ripped apart and fell to shreds on the floor.
I now realized what was happening. I was growing a new pair of limbs from my back and I could hear new bones cracking and popping into place.
They continued to grow and then a thin layer of membrane began to grow from them aswell.
“Wings!” I realized.
I was growing wings and it excited me for some reason.
Something else was happening now as the muscles across my body began to tingle and grow slightly.
The tingling soon passed and the change came to a halt. I stood up somewhat dazed and I looked at my new wings in awe.
“I’ve got wings!” I said almost proudly as I stretched out one of my new limbs.
“This is bad!” said Darius worried.
“What’s bad?” I asked.
“From what I can tell you’re at about seventy-five percent complete in your transformation, which means you’ve got about thirty minutes till it’s complete” he explained and as he said this I looked at him and said, “So?”
“Once the transformation is complete there’s no way to reverse it!” I stood quiet for a moment as this information sank in and I found the thought to be quite disconcerting… at first.
To be continued
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Comments: 97
clashmecha In reply to ??? [2010-04-28 13:39:47 +0000 UTC]
Not quite how I would have put it
Thanks anyway
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animeandrew1 In reply to clashmecha [2010-04-28 14:14:06 +0000 UTC]
Nae problem mate, sorry if i was offensive.
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dracoskull [2010-01-07 22:38:55 +0000 UTC]
its about time somebody thought up a good dragon story. great job
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Adreos In reply to ??? [2009-09-30 06:18:40 +0000 UTC]
The cruelty of this "organization" (for lack of better word) comes into light. It pulls on the readers heart to learn they have been using children for the experiments.
And you successfully add to the mystery. Now we want to know who Jack is and what has happened to him, same a Virgil.
Wing growth is interesting. One thing I like about the way you describe the transformations is that you don't press it in our faces, instead making it flow as part of the story.
And a perfect line to end on to create suspense and a perfect cliffhanger.
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The picture does a great job depicting the confusing/fascination of Virgil as his wing forms/just finished forming.
And we finally get to see Darius who for some reason looks familiar.
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Adreos In reply to clashmecha [2009-10-01 12:25:48 +0000 UTC]
I can't place my finger on it. It just that familiar feeling.
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clashmecha In reply to Adreos [2009-10-02 12:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmmm, well the only character I can think of who has a similarity to Darius is another talking cat from a film called Hocus Pocus. ^^
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icedrake20 [2009-03-27 18:17:20 +0000 UTC]
oh man plz say yout doing another part to this. lol i have read they all now. so i am really looking forward to the next part of it. i even saved the whole story to my computer so i can reread it again. very nicely done.
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clashmecha In reply to icedrake20 [2009-03-28 10:07:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you're enjoying it, it won't be long now
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icedrake20 In reply to clashmecha [2009-03-28 15:23:24 +0000 UTC]
ya i know i read all of them you have put out on the tf story so far.
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Tarik94 In reply to ??? [2009-02-04 15:38:45 +0000 UTC]
aww darius is so cute ^.^ and btw nice story
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LinkZelda1 In reply to ??? [2009-01-22 17:02:50 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome!! I hope you finish the next chapter soon
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clashmecha In reply to LinkZelda1 [2009-01-25 09:21:31 +0000 UTC]
Well part 5 amd 6 are half done so it won't be long now
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clashmecha In reply to D2266 [2009-01-07 23:24:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm gonna get the next one done as soon as I can ^^
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DragonReader In reply to ??? [2009-01-01 01:37:09 +0000 UTC]
Very good DragonTF story...
If my POV "(insane smile) if they want a bio-dragon, they are going to get BIO-DRAGON"
I'm nuts, i'm I?
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snapdragon12 In reply to ??? [2008-12-20 13:41:20 +0000 UTC]
must see what happens, must see what happens, must see what happens, must see what happens, ... continued for a long time
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clashmecha In reply to snapdragon12 [2008-12-21 00:21:37 +0000 UTC]
lol you will see, you will see....
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snapdragon12 In reply to clashmecha [2009-01-03 20:20:42 +0000 UTC]
could you tell me how you get those smileys into your sentences, and not just into the corner?
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clashmecha In reply to snapdragon12 [2009-01-04 22:21:03 +0000 UTC]
Sure thing.
these dots : plus this line ) gets you when put together.
so = and D gets
; and ) gets
^^ plus ; gets
Hope I've explained this well
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MPCat In reply to ??? [2008-12-18 17:42:40 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait to read all the rest and I look forward to the rest
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clashmecha In reply to MPCat [2008-12-19 10:38:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm working on the next part now
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SeikoZoorhess In reply to ??? [2008-12-18 08:48:12 +0000 UTC]
This is a great story, as well as great art to go with it.
To be honest, this would be something worth publishing. I would read a book if you wrote it.
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clashmecha In reply to SeikoZoorhess [2008-12-18 10:29:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Thats nice of you to say but I think I'm a ways off from publishing stuff ^^
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SeikoZoorhess In reply to clashmecha [2008-12-25 10:44:10 +0000 UTC]
Tell me about it. I've been at it for years and I still haven't done more than think about actually attempting to publish something. Anyway, good luck on both writing and the excelent art that goes with it.
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clashmecha In reply to SeikoZoorhess [2008-12-27 23:55:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I think there's also a fear that if and when I do try to publish something it'll come right back with an in depth description of everything thats wrong with it
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GizaWhiteMage [2008-12-16 19:50:15 +0000 UTC]
Nice story and pictures. Please keep up the good work.
Also, the character says that there is no way to reverse the transformation like that's a BAD thing.
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clashmecha In reply to GizaWhiteMage [2008-12-18 10:37:57 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Well its a bad thing if the bad guys get him afterward
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RipperRoo46 [2008-12-14 16:35:57 +0000 UTC]
Nice man this is getting really good. Hopefully this doesnt mean hybrids is done with.
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clashmecha In reply to RipperRoo46 [2008-12-14 19:48:25 +0000 UTC]
Hybrids is far from finished
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BlueDraconicKnight In reply to ??? [2008-12-14 09:24:15 +0000 UTC]
He looks very happy!
(I think everybody would hehe)
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Hazard-Fox [2008-12-13 22:38:35 +0000 UTC]
Pretty sad for Virgil, overwhelming stuff here. Nice
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clashmecha In reply to Hazard-Fox [2008-12-13 23:00:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I guess it did get a little dark there ^^
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Hazard-Fox In reply to clashmecha [2008-12-13 23:25:30 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait to read all the rest, hopefully as good as Hybrids
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