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Part 4: Despair and hope

My appearance was so changed, I just stared at this reptile in the mirror and felt an odd satisfaction at my new visage.

“Are you okay?” asked the cat.

I snapped out of the stupor I had apparently fallen into while staring in the mirror and I nearly dropped it.

“Huh, what?” I replied.

I felt so confused that I couldn’t keep my thoughts together.

“Breathe deep and slow, the transition will cause disorientation but you will adjust,” said the cat and I took deep breaths until I began to feel better.


“Well, I suppose I should introduce myself, I’m Darius Rian”

“I’m Virgil,” I replied.

“Virgil huh, is there a second name?” he asked.

“It’s just Virgil” I answered, “I don’t have a second name. I was orphaned when I was a baby.”

As I said this Darius looked at me with a shocked expression (which at the time, I had never seen from a cat before).

“An orphanage!?” he exclaimed. “Those heartless bastards, I can’t believe they’re using children for the D-Series experiments!” He cursed angrily.

“Wait, are you saying that they’ve been bringing my friends here?” I asked hopeful but also concerned “I knew there was something wrong, but I was told that they had all been adopted”

It all made sense. These people must have been taking children from the orphanage under the guise of them being adopted and no one would suspect a thing… Excerpt me.

Back at the orphanage, kids were being adopted much more then usual and within a week five of us were gone.
The strange thing about it was that they all left before I could even say goodbye to any of them and I was told each time that they left early in the morning, very early.

That is until Jack, my best friend was taken and I was told he had been adopted, but he would not have left without telling me. We were inseparable and he had been in the orphanage since birth too.
We were like brothers and we had promised each other that we were both going together or not at all. That was when I knew something was wrong.
At midnight I stole into the records room, it wasn’t difficult for me to pick the lock on the cabinet and I quietly searched for Jack’s file.

I soon found it and it had an address and phone number to his new home.
I tried the phone number and I got nothing but a wrong number tone on the other end of the line.
I then used the phone in the room to contact an information line and asked them to check the address.
I waited a moment and as I had expected, the address did not exist.

“What have they done with him?” I wondered.

I was about to head back to my room when the lights in the records room turned on suddenly. I saw an old bald man with a scar on his left cheek, but then…a sharp pain in the back of my neck…a needle! I realised too late and I fell unconscious.

“Wait! That old man was the same guy who I saw before, when I woke up!” I realised.

“That must have been Trask, he’s the weasel who locked me up in here?” said Darius.

“So that means… Jack must be here in this facility!” I said hopefully. “I’ve got to find him and the others now”

“Whoa hold on kid!” Said Darius suddenly “We need to get out of here as soon as possible”

“I can’t just leave!” I argued “I need to find my friends!?”

“It’s too dangerous. The whole reason for all this madness is to create dragons for military purposes, they’re creating bio weapons here and you are the key to their success” he said seriously. “So far your transformation is progressing without any flaws, and when it’s complete, all they would need is your blood to copy the procedure and they would be able to make as many dragons as they want” he explained

“I don’t care!” I yelled “I am not leaving without my friends, so you can either help me or just stay here!” I said sternly as I got to my feet and headed for the door.

“Alright!” said Darius reluctantly “I’ll guide you, I know this facility better than you”.

“Thank you…” I smiled and opened the door out of the room.

We headed out of the room and into a hallway lined with cables and wires. Maintenance tunnels, I surmised.

“Listen…” I said looking to Darius “do you know where the cyrostasis chamber is?” I asked and Darius looked worried and nervously replied.

“Yeah…but you don’t want to go there” he grimaced.

“Yes I do! So where is it?” I demanded.

Darius hesitated but he reluctantly showed me the way and I followed.

I didn’t understand why he was so reluctant about this. Was the place heavily guarded? Or was it something else.
We soon came to a large mechanical steel door with the number eight on it.
I found the door’s opening mechanism next to it and as I was about to push it, Darius spoke up.

“Virgil…I’m asking you one more time, please just walk away, you won’t like what you see” he said almost begging, but I was determined to know what they were doing down here.

Without replying to him I pushed the button and the locking mechanism made a loud clank and the door slid open.
I slowly stepped in and a flow of mist blew over my feet and over Darius.
Darius jumped out of the mist covered floor and onto my shoulder and I continued on inside.

It was dark inside but not so dark that I couldn’t see. It was a large dark chamber and inside was what appeared to be six large, upright, cylinder water tanks and each one had machines attached at the bottom of them.
Each tank was dark and coated with condensation but I could see there was something floating inside each of them.
I slowly walked up to one of them and I put my hand against it. I wiped the condensation away and what I saw put a chill down my spine.

I gasped in fright as I found my friend Alan, his face was half deformed and he appeared to have limbs growing out of his body in odd places, his skin had patches of blue scales and spikes protruding from it too.
I fell backwards onto the floor from the shock and I quickly got up and I looked into the other tanks as well.
Mich, Lisa, Terry, Simon… They were all here and they had been mutilated and deformed, but worst of all, they were all dead.

I felt nauseous, Darius jumped off of my shoulder as I ran into the corner and
I proceeded to vomit.
I burst into tears at this point. All my friends were dead and there was nothing I could do about it.


I ran out of the chamber with Darius close behind, I slammed the button of the door mechanism and the door closed.

I slid to the floor against the door, the tears were flowing down my face now and I covered my eyes sobbing.

“I’m so sorry Virgil, I didn’t want you to see that” he said comfortingly, he looked at the door and looked furious.

“Trask is insane!” He said with disgust “and he used me to achieve this!?” said Darius with hate in his voice.

I felt so angry too, so furious that I was growling. I stood up and wiped the tears from my face.

“I won’t let him get away with this! I’m going to make him pay!” I spat with hate and rage in my words.

“Come on, we should leave” said Darius.

I got back to my feet but then I suddenly realised something that gave me hope.

“Wait… Only five of those tanks are in use. Jack isn’t here! So he might still be alive, I have to find him!” I said hopeful that there was still time.

But before I could leave my back became warm and was getting hotter, I knew instantly what was about to happen.

“Oh no…It’s happening again!” I said gritting my teeth together.

Darius kept his distance as I collapsed to the floor. My shirt was getting tight as something in my back was pushing its way out.
My shirt stretched and soon I could hear it ripping apart at the seams and then a sudden surge of heat flowed out of my back and into whatever it was that was growing from it.
I was nearly choking from the tightness of my own shirt when finally it ripped apart and fell to shreds on the floor.
I now realized what was happening. I was growing a new pair of limbs from my back and I could hear new bones cracking and popping into place.

They continued to grow and then a thin layer of membrane began to grow from them aswell.

“Wings!” I realized.

I was growing wings and it excited me for some reason.
Something else was happening now as the muscles across my body began to tingle and grow slightly.
The tingling soon passed and the change came to a halt. I stood up somewhat dazed and I looked at my new wings in awe.

“I’ve got wings!” I said almost proudly as I stretched out one of my new limbs.

“This is bad!” said Darius worried.

“What’s bad?” I asked.

“From what I can tell you’re at about seventy-five percent complete in your transformation, which means you’ve got about thirty minutes till it’s complete” he explained and as he said this I looked at him and said, “So?”

“Once the transformation is complete there’s no way to reverse it!” I stood quiet for a moment as this information sank in and I found the thought to be quite disconcerting… at first.

To be continued

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Comments: 97

RoyalDandy101 [2017-07-14 03:17:05 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS SERIES!!! I LOVE THE PICTURE TOO, ITS AMAZING!! (is it weird that i sorta wish i was virgil from the begining?)

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Mari-Bro [2017-07-13 05:02:26 +0000 UTC]

*Reads Description*
Hope and Despair? Oh no, it's Momokuma!



(Please tell me I spelled that right... I'm a Nintendo kid, but I know of the Dangaropa Series because of NicoB and NintendoCapriSun, so I just thought I'd just make the reference.)


And yes, I love Dragons. If I could turn into any animal *in real life*, it'd be a Dragon. (It's more likely to happen then being turned into a Growshi in real life xD)

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Gainerguy123 [2016-07-24 04:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Great, my name is shared with one of the dead half-dragons, why is it that in around 3 of the stories I've read so far, my name is shared with someone who is either tortured, killed, or both?

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Awesomekillerfordead [2015-12-01 02:14:43 +0000 UTC]

Sad sad sad. 😧

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Awesomekillerfordead [2015-12-01 02:07:34 +0000 UTC]

Great! No shirt, Ripped trousers, I would run outside and call Doc and Marty and escape with the DeLorean! Where would Marty go though? He could not fit in the DeLorean! I guess sit on my lap? Nah. He probably would not sit on a Dragon without pants!

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KittyHawkSG63 In reply to Awesomekillerfordead [2016-06-02 20:59:35 +0000 UTC]

WE HAVE TO GO BACK!!!
BACK TO THE FUT-
Marty?
Why did you bring a dragon with us?

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coolramos2018 In reply to KittyHawkSG63 [2021-06-05 10:26:31 +0000 UTC]

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RoyalDandy101 In reply to KittyHawkSG63 [2017-07-14 03:17:38 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Crowfiire In reply to KittyHawkSG63 [2016-11-07 15:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Lol xD

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ivanganev1992 [2015-03-03 12:35:23 +0000 UTC]

Dragon Transformation part 3 (revised)

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Jazzo01 [2014-06-08 15:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Cool pics and great story

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Julthecat [2013-12-07 11:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Np

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Julthecat [2013-11-19 09:39:15 +0000 UTC]

I like the story and pics

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clashmecha In reply to Julthecat [2013-12-07 00:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^_^

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hammarbomber [2013-09-04 23:29:30 +0000 UTC]

this... is... AWESOME!!!

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m-a-r-k-y In reply to hammarbomber [2015-06-18 15:52:42 +0000 UTC]

ikr

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clashmecha In reply to hammarbomber [2013-09-29 22:22:33 +0000 UTC]

lol thank you ^_^

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Matthew-Travelmaster [2013-03-16 01:41:19 +0000 UTC]

Sweet, both the story till now as well as the pics.

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jules2rule [2012-07-16 06:06:59 +0000 UTC]

I just love your work and I love the fact that you put time and effort into this!

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Wanabeadragon [2012-07-10 14:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Sweet

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Blazzer12 [2012-03-27 01:29:08 +0000 UTC]

So once you finish these updates, are you going to finish working on the next part?

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clashmecha In reply to Blazzer12 [2012-03-27 11:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm aiming to have part 15 done next month

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rennat45 [2012-03-20 14:49:48 +0000 UTC]

hopefully Virgle will learn there is more that one way to punish Trask than just killing him. he could plan on tearing him apart limb from limb savoring his screams of agony as he begs for forgiveness or slice his body up piece by piece and force trask to eat his own body parts, or even make a small cut on the stomach and tear out his small intestine out of his living body then crush his heart with his bear hands but those are only a few more creative ways virgle could make trask pay for his horrible atrociousness. yet good job on the story and great updates [link]

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BlueLizard287 [2012-03-14 00:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Nice update!

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clashmecha In reply to BlueLizard287 [2012-03-14 12:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^_^

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Mermanwatch [2012-01-21 18:47:33 +0000 UTC]

This is a great story. To bad the other kids our dead. If they were alive it would have been cool to have a dragon hero force.

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clashmecha In reply to Mermanwatch [2012-01-22 21:47:21 +0000 UTC]

Afraid not

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Mermanwatch In reply to clashmecha [2012-01-22 22:44:45 +0000 UTC]

ok. I just hope that more human dragon kids show up.

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animorph11 [2011-06-04 21:26:05 +0000 UTC]

i did the math, that means it takes 2 hours to fully transform give or take a bit wiith the subtracted time from the tazer.
im so smart.
also i notesed that he is almost to the level to were he's obesed with killing trask, probly just pull back alittle on the end trask thing then it will seem more good guy bad guy
and this comes from a guy who rather day dream than watch tv so i know my stuff
dont take it in a bad way your awesome k

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clashmecha In reply to animorph11 [2011-06-11 13:41:35 +0000 UTC]

You are quite smart ^_^
Think of it in Virgil's position. Almost everyone he grew up with was used and killed because of Trask. something like that can create a lot of hatred

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animorph11 In reply to clashmecha [2011-06-19 19:54:17 +0000 UTC]

one thank you for the comment
and i know how Virgil feels too now and i cant come up with a counter arugement
now the comment is going to get kind of long so lesson up
one a Q do do you have a degree in gentic biology? the reason i ask is because your story...is 100% possable one its the reple efect of the spliceing that killed his friends
and im prity sure dragons exict because of so many legends and storys cant be just made up by someone and i heard from someone that dragons are in the bible
and even if thay dont exist you can recreate it by spliceing the bone marow of multiple dinosors

so answer my Q and comment on my stuff. see you later.

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Blazzer12 In reply to animorph11 [2012-03-27 01:25:22 +0000 UTC]

"The dragon" is mentioned 16 times, all in the book of Revelations. Dragons have also showed up in England, Eastern Asia, Russia, the Middle East, and the Americas. That makes it very much possible that there are, or at least were, dragons.

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animorph11 In reply to Blazzer12 [2012-03-27 17:31:04 +0000 UTC]

and yet some peolpe STILL don't beleve

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clashmecha In reply to animorph11 [2011-06-23 08:22:41 +0000 UTC]

Well I don't have a degree but I have done various researches on the subject (it's a passing interest of mine) so I have a good understanding of biology ^_^

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furrycactus [2011-04-25 06:17:05 +0000 UTC]

I can not even begin to even think how much pain and sorrow Virgil would have gone through in that chamber i mean finding nearly all of his friends dead and in that condition is something that a child wait no any human being sould ever have to experience i really feel for him ther it would have been so overwhelming i am glad that darius was kind enough to comfort someone he did not even know but onther than that it is a great story and he seems happy about the rest of the transformation.

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clashmecha In reply to furrycactus [2011-04-25 08:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it did get kind of dark there

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furrycactus In reply to clashmecha [2011-04-25 08:55:09 +0000 UTC]

it felt sad reading it but that is what every good story does

an epic story must have a sad part even if it is as dark as that which makes this story so good it makes you connect with him

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lolalltheway [2011-03-20 16:15:37 +0000 UTC]

I want to be a dragon!TELL ME HOW THAT HAPPENED!

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clashmecha In reply to lolalltheway [2011-03-21 13:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Chill, all will be explained in the next parts

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SpiritOfFire117 [2011-01-29 20:03:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow that was pretty fucked with that crystasis chamber, but at least the protagonist's motive are now in place. Good job so far.

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clashmecha In reply to SpiritOfFire117 [2011-01-29 21:13:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I guess it did get a little dark there

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SpiritOfFire117 In reply to clashmecha [2011-01-29 23:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Dark but necessary.

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clashmecha In reply to SpiritOfFire117 [2011-01-30 12:33:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm planning to explain why they used children in next parts

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rottenapple3 [2010-11-18 08:29:47 +0000 UTC]

I would to....
Especialy the ones I grew up with...

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clashmecha In reply to rottenapple3 [2010-11-19 09:33:29 +0000 UTC]

I suppose I did create quite a dark senario here

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rottenapple3 In reply to clashmecha [2010-11-19 16:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Yup lol
:3 I wish I could write as good as u can! >_<;

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clashmecha In reply to rottenapple3 [2010-11-22 12:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks, I'm not that good yet, but I aim to be as good as some of the best writers around someday ^_^

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Thurii [2010-11-11 18:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Poor Virgil. I'd hate to see people floating in a tank, dead.

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clashmecha In reply to Thurii [2010-11-12 09:33:25 +0000 UTC]

I think I portrayed his reaction to this quite well ^^

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animeandrew1 [2010-04-27 23:44:38 +0000 UTC]

Briliant, Virgil's got to be shiting himself by now. ^^

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