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Published: 2013-04-16 05:54:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 877; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 16
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Description Canterlot was beautiful any time of year but there are always moments filled with a greater beauty that stick out in Rocket's mind even today. Moments that beg to be noticed like a glistening pool catching the sunlight at just the right angle, beckoning you to come closer and investigate, then relax in its shimmering allure.

The time she spent as a filly in Canterlot was always with one purpose, to be with her Father, Tempest Valor. Benig a captain in Celestia's Royal Canterlot Guard, he had many responsibilities that kept him from Cloudsdale almost year round.
But all that time apart vanished in the cooling breeze when she got to visit him.
Those times she remembered as well as a crystalline dream, the sights, smells, sounds.... almost tangible even now after all this time.

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"Dad!" She screamed with excitement, no sooner than her hooves began to move her with as much speed as she could muster, tearing through a patchy crowd with little regard. She had only one thing in mind and the chastising remarks of any other pony fell on deaf ears and beneath the clatter of hoofbeats on the stone passing under her. The same as every visit, she raced from the train like a bolt of white hot lightning, locking on the single target she spied from the window whilst pulling into the station. She dashed as quickly as her hooves could carry her, excitement mounting with every step and, the same as every visit, tried her hoof at tackling dear old dad, only to succeed in staggering herself for a moment. The same as every visit.

"How've you been, Gracie?" Valor asked, smiled and laughed, just as excitedly as his pint-size assailant, pulling his cherished cargo close to him in an embrace that melted her cares away. The trip, the tough days at school, the countless stormy nights, none of that was even there anymore, none of it was real. Here she felt safe, and he felt whole, just as it ought to be.

After some time, the two began walking. Or rather, Valor began walking while Grace spent her time bounding around him in a circle, excitedly retelling a dozen stories that melded one into the next with the slightest turn of events - and never taking a breath between.

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Those were the moments that made everything alright.Β Those were the moments that made her smile, both then and now alike. Those were the moments she held onto the tightest. The moments where no matter what happened, she could always hear her Father's voice echoing across the distance as clearly as though he were standing directly in front of her. His message, always so clear, always the same and always exactly what she needed....

"Everything's going to be okay, Gracie. Everything's going to be just fine."
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Comments: 17

imepiclyawesome [2014-03-26 15:43:22 +0000 UTC]

awww! adorable! this gives me inspiration! thank you! i will put this as my backround for my desktop.

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classicEIGHT In reply to imepiclyawesome [2014-03-29 03:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, awesome! Thanks so much for the kind words. You stop in anytime to say hello! And of course, for more pony madness!

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imepiclyawesome In reply to classicEIGHT [2014-03-29 03:38:50 +0000 UTC]

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knkade [2013-04-18 03:02:56 +0000 UTC]

I must admit that was fantastic. I did not know you possessed a writers spirit.
One of my past times includes reading (too much) pony fiction, and I must admit this was good.
I would love to read more of it.

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classicEIGHT In reply to knkade [2013-04-18 03:15:40 +0000 UTC]

On occasion, I've been known to write some pretty damn good stuff. I consider this one enough to get the point across, but I didn't plot it out before I started writing so I didn't get everything in that I wanted.

But, I'm glad its been a huge hit so far his one in particular got quite a bit of attention. I may re write it later, but I'm glad you like it buddy!

Unfortunately, I know as much about Rocket and her family as everyone else does. Literally. She doesn't talk about it much, heheh.

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knkade In reply to classicEIGHT [2013-04-18 14:36:24 +0000 UTC]

It is quite cool that you have a character that tells you about her self, and not you telling her about herself. That is how character depth is created.

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classicEIGHT In reply to knkade [2013-04-19 06:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Its funny, I created her character to be standoffish, and thats precisely what she is. Even her bio states that she doesn't tell everyone everything, even her best friends, and wouldn't ya know - I don't even get the full story! I find that endears me to her for two reasons, first for the mystery, and second cause she's my damn character and I can't crack her XD

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4ScarfAce4 [2013-04-16 15:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Aww... Rocket was cute once.

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classicEIGHT In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-04-16 18:34:22 +0000 UTC]

SHH! Quiet you fool! Dont' let her hear you say that!!

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4ScarfAce4 In reply to classicEIGHT [2013-04-18 15:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh... right. Is that like calling Dot Warner "Dottie", then?

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classicEIGHT In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-04-18 19:28:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, except Rocket likes to get violent XD

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4ScarfAce4 In reply to classicEIGHT [2013-04-18 20:22:05 +0000 UTC]

Considering that anyone who calls Dot "Dottie" dies, maybe there's not that much of a difference. Okay, it's hard to see a pony - even an OC - killing anyone.

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classicEIGHT In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-04-18 20:29:23 +0000 UTC]

XD True. Though I think Rocket would go with the violence only, after all, you don't learn anything if you're dead! Heheh

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4ScarfAce4 In reply to classicEIGHT [2013-04-18 21:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... you know, my pet theory is that King Sombra looks so... abnormal for an MLP character (flowing mane, green eyes, spiky multicoloured horn) because he killed another pony. That kind of metamorphosis would make a pretty fitting punishment, marking the murderer as somepony apart from ponykind.

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classicEIGHT In reply to 4ScarfAce4 [2013-04-19 21:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Thats actually an interesting thought. I never thought about that. But then, I kinda want to know much more about all the villains. Plus, King Sombra - lets face it, he leaves a LOT to the imagination XD

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Ari-Dynamic [2013-04-16 11:39:07 +0000 UTC]

I saw this on your Tumblr. This is quite honestly the best MLP-related picture you've ever drawn, dude. No joke. The visuals are impressive and detailed; they really give the picture a very legit, storybook appearance. I love it.

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classicEIGHT In reply to Ari-Dynamic [2013-04-16 18:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, as ever, I'm glad its been such a big hit! I wish I could have added more depth to it, but I was tapped out last night for inspiration. Anyway, I accomplished what I wanted to, I got a snippet of Rocket's past to paper.
Unfortunately, I only know as much as she 'tells me'. And since she's super tight-lipped about her childhood, I imagine everyone will know just as much as I do XD

But yes, I'm glad it came out as nice as it did. It took a while to get a proper BG that seemed to match well.

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