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Published: 2010-09-30 21:33:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 265; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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A more refined drawing of my character "Renee".This is another drawing I'm very proud of,it took me just as long as "Alexander" and "Millie".
Please comment! I love reading what people have to say about my work.
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Comments: 8
WolfDemonYuki [2010-10-02 19:13:27 +0000 UTC]
Her face seems a lil squished >.< SORRY. I feel like an ass every time I say something like that.
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CleanSlash In reply to WolfDemonYuki [2010-10-05 21:38:51 +0000 UTC]
No, you're right!her face does look squished,I'm pretty pissed because I didn't notice it till after I scanned it to my computer.But fear not!!,this drawing is not yet finished!I plan to add more stuff to the background and I will take advantage of this and try and fix her face!Oh and don't feel bad when you point out mistakes!sometimes you point out stuff I don't even notice and for that I'm truly grateful!
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CleanSlash In reply to WolfDemonYuki [2010-10-06 04:59:05 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome!
Sooooo....um...excluding the squished face,do you still like the rest of the drawing?Her clothes her hair,her hands?I would like to hear what you think.
I might also touch up her cobra tatoo,any thoughts on that?
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WolfDemonYuki In reply to CleanSlash [2010-10-06 07:31:32 +0000 UTC]
I like your shading, overall it's a good picture. Feels like it's missing something though. not sure what either.
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EmperorKarino [2010-09-30 21:50:58 +0000 UTC]
i do think this is drawn well, but i do like your first drawing of Renee was better. mainly because i like how she was holding swords and that her hair looked like it was being blown by the wind. and the first drawing of her had very good shading. but this is still good, its very good drawing of her. i think you did better details on her neck on this one. and the lines in this one are clearer. but all in all good job on both drawings of her.
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CleanSlash In reply to EmperorKarino [2010-09-30 21:58:21 +0000 UTC]
to be honest this drawing isn't finished yet.I originally planned to have her swords impaled in the dirt in the background forming an "X" and the sashes attached to them were blowing in the wind.I was also going to include a small hill in the distance along with clouds;but all in good time,I just wanted to show you guys what I had done so far. I'm very happy you like both Renee drawings. thanks for the fav bud!
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EmperorKarino In reply to CleanSlash [2010-09-30 22:01:11 +0000 UTC]
oh ok, oooo that would look awesome. that sounds really awesome. thats cool, if you do the sword part you could post it and call it Renee 2.1 lol. well i'm happy with your work, your really awesome. i rate you as one of the more skilled artists that i watch on this site. your welcome
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