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Description A collab team between me and ! We thought a lot about them,... I may have "overplanned" Roseline Hopefully more will come for Nyla! We spent a lot of time making this!


Roseline -- Adamnt Imputious and silly

Moves:
Aura Sphere
Agility
Swift
Brick Break

Personality: Very happy and childish but extremely stubborn. She's a little short and calls herself "funsized". She is very capable on her own, but doesn;t like it. She hates to be alone, and will cling to her partner like a little baby at times. She also has a bold personality that she tries to put off,

Design tips:
Her bow is big and poofy with ribbons. Matches her eyes
The top of her mask jas a "spike" that reaches just below her hair
Her hair comes to just above the spike in her mask, and curles. it is also darker than the normal blue on her.
Her bow is knoted arouns a small tuft of hair in the back, much like a small ponytail
Her aura sensors are longer and rounder than a boy's
The bumps on her arms are also smaller and rounder
Her snout is rounded
The end of her yellow chest fur isded and does not come to a sharp stop
Her face is more rounded and fluffy
She alsmost always has a smile on her face, unless she's severly upset or afraid
The bumps and her collor are yellow tinted
Her tail is long and fluffy, like a cat
She has fluffy chest fur
The "baggy" part of her legs are smaller and thinner
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Comments: 34

TeamTempest [2013-03-29 04:42:29 +0000 UTC]

Looks great! Do you want me to fix the mistakes that Fluffy pointed out or do you?

Also, I can add more info on Nyla soon. ^_^

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Clear-stream In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 04:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Just change her move, fixed everything else :3 I wanted it to be Captivate since she can';t learn Aura sphere yet XD [link]

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UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 04:01:13 +0000 UTC]

I freaking love that Sneasel omfg

Is it just me or do a lot of people draw the feather on the right side, when it's canonically the left? My ex did this every single time he drew Chryss, even when I told him otherwise. Was this intentional or now?

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Clear-stream In reply to UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 04:58:31 +0000 UTC]

I actually had no idea XD and YES THAT SNEASLE'S COLORS COME BECAUSE I FUCKING LOVE CHRYSS! I colored, Tempest did the lines

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UltimateSassMaster In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 17:08:42 +0000 UTC]

Lolol! Hehe looks like Chryss has a little sister xD

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Clear-stream In reply to UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 17:17:57 +0000 UTC]

XD Maybe if they meat... very plausable, seeing as they are both in present.

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UltimateSassMaster In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 18:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha xD I don't think Chryss would be too fond of the idea~

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Clear-stream In reply to UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 19:21:14 +0000 UTC]

XD yeah

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TeamTempest In reply to UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 04:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

I dunno I always draw it on the left side, but I'm pretty sure you're right. I never really paid attention. LOL

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UltimateSassMaster In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 17:08:00 +0000 UTC]

Our left or the Sneasel's left? xD It's canonically on the Sneasel's left, but it's not that big of a deal, I was just curious lol

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TeamTempest In reply to UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 17:53:09 +0000 UTC]

I do it my left. Lol I dunno. X_x

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UltimateSassMaster In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 18:12:28 +0000 UTC]

Ah lol. Well like I said its not a big deal, just a notice a lot of people do that when they draw my character specifically xD

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Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 02:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Not a bad application, you obviously spent allot of time on the designs of both characters and it was nice you listed them, though there are a few typo's here and there, the only problematic one being "She also has a bold personality that she tries to put off." I don't know if I'm reading it wrong or something was cut off, but I'm assuming you meant "tries to put others off."

Also I would have liked a description for Nyla, I'm guessing Tempest may be on that and it'll be put on later. I do have to admit I like Roseline, and I'm assuming she's your favorite based all the work you did. She sounds allot like my own character Zigie (hoary for my unoriginality!) and I would love to see the two interact, as unlikely it would be.

I'll briefly talk about the art since I'm most uncomfortable when I criticize someone's art (I'm a writer for a reason.) you show the quirks of your character's vary well and I do liked the sketched look (though that may be unintentional.) my only complaints (Sorry.) is that I the opened mouths being the same tone as the main body color, it's less noticeable on Rosaline but on Nyla I found it distracting, and even Rosaline has a flaw that I noticed right away, her left hand was a humanish five digit-ed thing, while the right one was a normal paw, I just found it was inconstant. So there's my art critique (I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry....)

Over all I give it a 7/10, good, but I would like to see more (sorry.) Well good luck with this team, can't wait to see what happens.

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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 05:08:32 +0000 UTC]

Don;t say sorry, I like the feedback! It's good for us!

As for that line, I may need to re-write it. It's supposed to sound like she tries to PULL off... Hmmm... And yeah, Typo's happen. They are a pain, but at least they are fixable

Tempest said She would be making a description on Nyla XD. As for Rose being my fave, well, she IS my character. I normally have very serious characters who come from sad Backgrounds or have had something horrible happen to them in their past, so I thought it would be fun to have one that was just pain... a girl! That and i LOVE LOVE LOOOOVVVEEE Riolus!!!!!! I'm shure Rose would love to meat Zigie!

Don;t be uncomfortable talking about the art, I understand how hard it is. You don;t wanna sound to mean or anything. The sketched look was because I was rushing Tepest a little on getting the lines up I really wanted to do one march task, and I still need to draw it out. It's kinda funny, and had to do with Rose. Also, do you have tips on how to do that with open mouths? I would love to know or check out something about it. It's kinda hard. As for that hand/paw... yeah, I noticed to, but like I said, I was in a rush to get it up, and hopefully we can update it to look a little better soon!

That was a great Critique! I've never had merchants before, so I hope these girls work out!! And Make sure you watch! :3

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Lazysupermutant In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 15:38:01 +0000 UTC]

I understand that feeling, you're really excited about your project and you want to get out real quick so everyone can see it! (Or you don't want to miss a deadline.) I've done this a few times and it's led to my more flawed writings.

As for the mouth thing, the only thing I can suggest is talking to other artists about it (and this is why I don't like to critique, I have no good advice.)

Well good luck on the march task (I know mine's dead in the water.) can't wait to see.

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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 15:43:33 +0000 UTC]

I just need a cameo now! And Yeah, I was in a rush to get it uo for the March Task, Bud posing XD I do hope this team works out and I'm as good with it as my others.

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Lazysupermutant In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 16:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Cameo eh? I could help, depending which time it is.

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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 16:33:26 +0000 UTC]

I need a Riolu/Lucario cameo for The Bud task. Present.

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Lazysupermutant In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 16:48:57 +0000 UTC]

Can't help there, you could ask Rip1191 [link] he's got a lucario, he said no to me, but that was a long time ago and said he wasn't lending out CJ at the time, couldn't hurt.

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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 16:52:25 +0000 UTC]

I WOULD LOVE TO DRAW CJ I fell in love with that guy

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Lazysupermutant In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 17:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Well I hope he says yes then.

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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 17:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Happiest day ever XDXD

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TeamTempest In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 04:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I'm getting more info on Nyla real soon. I'll definitely look out for the fingers on Rosaline. Thanks for pointing that out!

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Lazysupermutant In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 04:59:09 +0000 UTC]

...oh, your welcome then! (Honestly I expected you to be mad, unless this is a ruse...oh well, back to the panic room.)

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TeamTempest In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 12:05:04 +0000 UTC]

No, no way! I never get mad at honest feedback, if you're nice about it. You were very nice about it! Now I'll do better next time. ^_^

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MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 02:00:38 +0000 UTC]

There are a few things that need to be changed on this application.
Riolus cannot learn Aura Sphere. Please use attacks a Pokemon can learn via level-up, tm/hm, move tutor, or egg moves.
Please indicate rank.
Please write in the actual date under "Been Selling Since..."

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Another-Color In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 02:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Isn't the color considered a 'mistake', too?

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MissFluffyKitty In reply to Another-Color [2013-03-29 02:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Its not a top concern.

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TeamTempest In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 04:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Actually, I have a question on Nyla's coloring, since I'm the one who picked it out. When sneasels were first introduce in Gold and Silver, their coloring was brown with a blue feather (Here's that pixel ). Is that allowed here on PMD? I've seem one other team use the coloring once, but I don't want it to hinder anything. I wouldn't have changed her color into anything else, and I don't want to pull "I wanna a BLOO feathered sneasel so THERE!"

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MissFluffyKitty In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 04:58:17 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that is allowed! You can base Pokemon appearances on past sprites from the games.

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TeamTempest In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 12:05:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Thank you!

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Riolumon In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 02:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow your quick I was just about tell him that. O.O

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MissFluffyKitty In reply to Riolumon [2013-03-29 02:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Then please read this for future reference: [link]

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Riolumon In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 04:23:15 +0000 UTC]

D= AHH! (Bows) I'm sorry.

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