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A collab team between me and ! We thought a lot about them,... I may have "overplanned" RoselineRoseline -- Adamnt Imputious and silly
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TeamTempest [2013-03-29 04:42:29 +0000 UTC]
Looks great! Do you want me to fix the mistakes that Fluffy pointed out or do you?
Also, I can add more info on Nyla soon. ^_^
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Clear-stream In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 04:57:35 +0000 UTC]
Just change her move, fixed everything else :3 I wanted it to be Captivate since she can';t learn Aura sphere yet XD [link]
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UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 04:01:13 +0000 UTC]
I freaking love that Sneasel omfg
Is it just me or do a lot of people draw the feather on the right side, when it's canonically the left? My ex did this every single time he drew Chryss, even when I told him otherwise. Was this intentional or now?
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Clear-stream In reply to UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 04:58:31 +0000 UTC]
I actually had no idea XD and YES THAT SNEASLE'S COLORS COME BECAUSE I FUCKING LOVE CHRYSS! I colored, Tempest did the lines
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UltimateSassMaster In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 17:08:42 +0000 UTC]
Lolol! Hehe looks like Chryss has a little sister xD
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Clear-stream In reply to UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 17:17:57 +0000 UTC]
XD Maybe if they meat... very plausable, seeing as they are both in present.
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UltimateSassMaster In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 18:12:50 +0000 UTC]
Haha xD I don't think Chryss would be too fond of the idea~
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TeamTempest In reply to UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 04:50:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
I dunno I always draw it on the left side, but I'm pretty sure you're right. I never really paid attention. LOL
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UltimateSassMaster In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 17:08:00 +0000 UTC]
Our left or the Sneasel's left? xD It's canonically on the Sneasel's left, but it's not that big of a deal, I was just curious lol
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TeamTempest In reply to UltimateSassMaster [2013-03-29 17:53:09 +0000 UTC]
I do it my left. Lol I dunno. X_x
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UltimateSassMaster In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 18:12:28 +0000 UTC]
Ah lol. Well like I said its not a big deal, just a notice a lot of people do that when they draw my character specifically xD
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Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 02:21:54 +0000 UTC]
Not a bad application, you obviously spent allot of time on the designs of both characters and it was nice you listed them, though there are a few typo's here and there, the only problematic one being "She also has a bold personality that she tries to put off." I don't know if I'm reading it wrong or something was cut off, but I'm assuming you meant "tries to put others off."
Also I would have liked a description for Nyla, I'm guessing Tempest may be on that and it'll be put on later. I do have to admit I like Roseline, and I'm assuming she's your favorite based all the work you did. She sounds allot like my own character Zigie (hoary for my unoriginality!) and I would love to see the two interact, as unlikely it would be.
I'll briefly talk about the art since I'm most uncomfortable when I criticize someone's art (I'm a writer for a reason.) you show the quirks of your character's vary well and I do liked the sketched look (though that may be unintentional.) my only complaints (Sorry.) is that I the opened mouths being the same tone as the main body color, it's less noticeable on Rosaline but on Nyla I found it distracting, and even Rosaline has a flaw that I noticed right away, her left hand was a humanish five digit-ed thing, while the right one was a normal paw, I just found it was inconstant. So there's my art critique (I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry....)
Over all I give it a 7/10, good, but I would like to see more (sorry.) Well good luck with this team, can't wait to see what happens.
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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 05:08:32 +0000 UTC]
Don;t say sorry, I like the feedback! It's good for us!
As for that line, I may need to re-write it. It's supposed to sound like she tries to PULL off... Hmmm... And yeah, Typo's happen. They are a pain, but at least they are fixable
Tempest said She would be making a description on Nyla XD. As for Rose being my fave, well, she IS my character. I normally have very serious characters who come from sad Backgrounds or have had something horrible happen to them in their past, so I thought it would be fun to have one that was just pain... a girl! That and i LOVE LOVE LOOOOVVVEEE Riolus!!!!!! I'm shure Rose would love to meat Zigie!
Don;t be uncomfortable talking about the art, I understand how hard it is. You don;t wanna sound to mean or anything. The sketched look was because I was rushing Tepest a little on getting the lines up I really wanted to do one march task, and I still need to draw it out. It's kinda funny, and had to do with Rose. Also, do you have tips on how to do that with open mouths? I would love to know or check out something about it. It's kinda hard. As for that hand/paw... yeah, I noticed to, but like I said, I was in a rush to get it up, and hopefully we can update it to look a little better soon!
That was a great Critique! I've never had merchants before, so I hope these girls work out!! And Make sure you watch! :3
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Lazysupermutant In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 15:38:01 +0000 UTC]
I understand that feeling, you're really excited about your project and you want to get out real quick so everyone can see it! (Or you don't want to miss a deadline.) I've done this a few times and it's led to my more flawed writings.
As for the mouth thing, the only thing I can suggest is talking to other artists about it (and this is why I don't like to critique, I have no good advice.)
Well good luck on the march task (I know mine's dead in the water.) can't wait to see.
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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 15:43:33 +0000 UTC]
I just need a cameo now! And Yeah, I was in a rush to get it uo for the March Task, Bud posing XD I do hope this team works out and I'm as good with it as my others.
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Lazysupermutant In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 16:13:40 +0000 UTC]
Cameo eh? I could help, depending which time it is.
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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 16:33:26 +0000 UTC]
I need a Riolu/Lucario cameo for The Bud task. Present.
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Lazysupermutant In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 16:48:57 +0000 UTC]
Can't help there, you could ask Rip1191 [link] he's got a lucario, he said no to me, but that was a long time ago and said he wasn't lending out CJ at the time, couldn't hurt.
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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 16:52:25 +0000 UTC]
I WOULD LOVE TO DRAW CJ I fell in love with that guy
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Lazysupermutant In reply to Clear-stream [2013-03-29 17:00:58 +0000 UTC]
Well I hope he says yes then.
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Clear-stream In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 17:02:45 +0000 UTC]
Happiest day ever XDXD
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TeamTempest In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 04:49:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I'm getting more info on Nyla real soon. I'll definitely look out for the fingers on Rosaline. Thanks for pointing that out!
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Lazysupermutant In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 04:59:09 +0000 UTC]
...oh, your welcome then! (Honestly I expected you to be mad, unless this is a ruse...oh well, back to the panic room.)
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TeamTempest In reply to Lazysupermutant [2013-03-29 12:05:04 +0000 UTC]
No, no way! I never get mad at honest feedback, if you're nice about it. You were very nice about it! Now I'll do better next time. ^_^
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MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 02:00:38 +0000 UTC]
There are a few things that need to be changed on this application. Riolus cannot learn Aura Sphere. Please use attacks a Pokemon can learn via level-up, tm/hm, move tutor, or egg moves.
Please indicate rank.
Please write in the actual date under "Been Selling Since..."
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Another-Color In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 02:37:17 +0000 UTC]
Isn't the color considered a 'mistake', too?
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MissFluffyKitty In reply to Another-Color [2013-03-29 02:41:11 +0000 UTC]
Its not a top concern.
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TeamTempest In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 04:47:55 +0000 UTC]
Actually, I have a question on Nyla's coloring, since I'm the one who picked it out. When sneasels were first introduce in Gold and Silver, their coloring was brown with a blue feather (Here's that pixel ). Is that allowed here on PMD? I've seem one other team use the coloring once, but I don't want it to hinder anything. I wouldn't have changed her color into anything else, and I don't want to pull "I wanna a BLOO feathered sneasel so THERE!"
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MissFluffyKitty In reply to TeamTempest [2013-03-29 04:58:17 +0000 UTC]
Yes, that is allowed! You can base Pokemon appearances on past sprites from the games.
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Riolumon In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 02:04:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow your quick I was just about tell him that. O.O
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MissFluffyKitty In reply to Riolumon [2013-03-29 02:05:38 +0000 UTC]
Then please read this for future reference: [link]
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Riolumon In reply to MissFluffyKitty [2013-03-29 04:23:15 +0000 UTC]
D= AHH! (Bows) I'm sorry.
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