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CleoArrow β Aren't you cold? Page 1
Published: 2013-12-27 20:50:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 4069; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 0
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My first attempt at a comic! Please give suggestions on improvements. I know it's far from perfect (Ugh, hands) but suggestions and constructive criticism is always welcome!This was inspired by the Snowblind episode. What if, while searching for Starfire, Raven and Beast Boy got separated in the storm? It was originally supposed to be a Christmas/holdiay thing, but then I ended up changing it. Plus, Christmas is already passed by now!
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Side notes:
-Ugh, hands.
-I cheated a little on the last picture. I changed a few details from the one above. I won't try to be so lazy in the future.
-I'm still trying to get a consistent style with Beast Boy. Hang in there.
-I love drawing snow!
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Comments: 11
Something tells me I'm gonna love this!Β Can't wait for next one!!
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This comic begins in a good way, but it's a bit soon to give critic comments :3
About the "copy-paste" of an image, don't worry, sometimes it's okay and you don't need to do two different images. In this situation is perfect :3
I wanna see more 
I'm waiting!
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Thank you very much! All critic/suggestions are enjoyed and appreciated, no matter how soon they might be in the comic.
I'm glad you like it so far! I'll try to continue it as soon as possible!
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