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Page 182 of Along the Way.Page 183: fav.me/d4ljxtt
Previous: cleopatrawolf.deviantart.com/a…
Art by Cleopatrawolf
Fanfic by Flashchimp: www.fanfiction.net/s/2807965/1…
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Hi there, I just read the WHOLE Story and I think it is ingenious!
I lOVE Azureshipping and this is really cute! <333
Because the egyptian Seto is way more easier to impress and to make fall in love with Tea than the normal Seto Kaiba! Seto Kaiba would deny his feelings and it would take hundrets of pages to make it believable, that he is falling in love with someone.^^ I know that^^ You can draw so awesome, I love to read it, I almost cried, when I saw, that this was the last page! Please, draw fast, that I can read more!
Thank you for this beautiful story!
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Thank you soo much!!
I'm glad to hear that you love Azureshipping!
And I'm thrilled that you are enjoying my comic!
I can only take credit for the art though, the story is the work of Flashchimp from Fanfic.net
Also, I totally agree with you about the egyptian Seto. hahaha!!
He is definitely more likely to fall in love than his present day relative.
Oh, and this is not the last page. I forgot to put the link for the next page. hahaha Sorry about that, but I put it there now. ^^
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...Seto so enjoys the idea of people thinking that they are married. Don't deny it Seto, we all know it.
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Hahahaha, Yeah we all know!! He can't hide it!!
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same! 
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I'll have the next part as soon as I can!!
Thank you!
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LMAO! Just luv the face of kaiba there xDD!!! hes like "σ.σ why ...whyyy D:<.."
man dats great haha xDD Comon kaibaaa yaa knoo you luhhhs eett :3!!
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hahaha, yeah!! I know he secretly does!!
Thank you soo much!! I'm really happy you like it!
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Or...well something happened in the short time Seto left her alone. Something tells me he got WAY sidetracked from er...whatever it was he was doing. 
Great job on the bottom left panel--sometimes Tea and Seto are fighting for the reader's attention with one more favourably drawn than the other. Here they both have very different expressions (including body language) that are equally interesting! Tea is very properly horrified and Seto is positively glowering. Great fold and wrinkle texture on all the clothing too! It looks like you've been doing some studying. Are you aware that different material folds and wrinkles in different ways?
The last panel seems very in character with the original Seto, or at least how I remember him. I never did see much of the show but this brings back my first memory of him. He and Mokuba were in a hurry to get somewhere...I think everyone else was too, but it was Seto's idea to dash into a car shop and get a car instead of running on foot. Mokuba was like "I like the blue one" and Seto was like "just pick one and hurry up." What amused me was the salesman running up to them and going "you kids can't be here" or something to that affect until Seto ripped off a cheque and leapt into the car leaving the guy with his mouth hanging open. He struck me as the type who hates waiting and delays and long speeches (unless of course he's making them) and will do whatever it takes to get things going again. :zoom:
A little note of critique: in panel 1, I like the shadows, but the fact that you've shaded them at two different slants looks sloppy. Shading should be in the same direction unless for a very specific reason. Also, what are Tea's arms doing in panel 2? If she was pushed from behind, her arms should be slightly behind her body. She could be shaking the leader's hands, but they're a bit too low for that. It wouldn't be too bad, since her arms form a nice line of action, but you've also got a background character right there, making it look like her hands are level with their butt. Hmm, wait, is the lady getting her to sit on a bench beside Seto? It's just a very awkward background of characters and the height levels are bothering me. I realize you've cut off the picture so as not to reveal Seto right away, but I think you cut off too much around the sides. Then the lady who is pushing her down must be very very short. And reaching across the bench? Aaah, I give up. Tea looks lovely, though, and very confused.
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Well, on the next page I plan to reveal that they arrived in the village the same night that the villagers have their annual festival. ^^
And the lady who is pushing Tea down, I wasn't thinking, you see I intended it that she is bending a little, but you're right the way I let the panel cut off does't show that at all and it just makes her look short.
I'm very grateful you think Seto and Tea are drawn good in the bottom left panel.
As for the mistakes, I greatly appreciate your help. I will take your advice and strive to improve the next pages. This page was sort-of rushed because I wanted to hurry up and post it. hahahaaha
I know it's bad, but I just really like to try to do my pages quickly so that I may still keep the viewers interest.
I'm always afraid that if I take too long I may lose readers.
But I will definitely try much harder on the details and take to heart all of your advice.
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Tea's face is epic! 
Awesome comic btw!
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Hahaha, I'm glad you like it!!
Thank you!
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YAY that is so damn cute >///< "your husband" AWW ♥
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Tea's expression = massive win~! and Seto looks like he's going to shoot someone pretty soon... But they didn't have guns... Set a monster with a massive spear after them lolol
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Hahahaha, yeah!! I bet Seto would!
And thank you, I'm really happy you like Tea's expression!!
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Well, they're both brunette, you can't blame them. XD
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This one's great! I love how Seto's like "I so don't want to be here..."
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Thanks Kiona!!
I'm really happy you like it!
You know how much Seto hates any type of social gathering! hahahahaha
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Married?! x) haha Tea doesent know what how to deal with that. 
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hahaha, no she doesn't!
Thank you, I'm really glad you like Seto's face in the fourth panel!
And I guess the villagers could pick up vibes that even Seto and Tea didn't notice! hahahaha
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welcome! x) hmmmmmmm.... when will they notice I wonder. x)
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hahaha, glad you like it!
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"Just play along,"-translation: "us being married is a GOOD thing." ^_^
XD I love this. Thx for the update!
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hahahaha!!
You're good at translating the Seto language!
Thank you!
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I hope they get married later in the comic some time after they fall in love
i love seto's face expresshion in the fourth panel keep up the good work
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Well hopefully I will make it to the end so you can find out!
And I'm grateful you like Seto in the fourth panel, thank you!!
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They should be married >:I
Yes...they should have a beautiful wedding. THE NOAH WAY. >:3
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hahaha, yes they should!!
Ummm, the Noah way? What do you mean?
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...The Noah way includes explosions and colorful Christmas lights. Also Barack Obama. It's...very, very interesting. o3o
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Oh, ok then. ahahaha
That does sound... very interesting.
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awww the cuteness it made me day a lot better 
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I'm really happy it did!!
And no, thank you for reading my doujinshi and enjoying it!!
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haha!! married thats awesome! I love this!! 
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