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Description Round 4 - Finale
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Posting early so I can get this off my hands and focus on Godfall OCT .

Many, many thanks to =miryuu-chan for proofreading!

I don't have much to say other than I'm happy with how it came out. Although in retrospect, I can see some major flaws but oh well~! Also, reading western comics influenced me a bit, mainly the vertical panels, hehe!

Win or lose, it was a blast. I hope you enjoyed the comic, characters and their endeavors as much as I did! The other parts will be posted in the following days.

Characters belong to their respective owners.

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BA 0 | B 0
BA 1 | B 1 | P 1
BA 2 | B 2 | P 2
P 3 | BA 3 | B 3
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BA 4 | EX | EP | B 4
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Comments: 37

UnknownPersonzsister [2025-04-23 14:19:56 +0000 UTC]

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JamesLOB [2016-02-26 05:22:07 +0000 UTC]

rip Jay

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TheBleachDoctor [2014-01-26 03:55:34 +0000 UTC]

After seeing demjay's entry, I had to see yours. I have to say, I was stunned. Your entry was much more exciting. There certainly was more action too, and the fight was fair.

Although I must say that, being a personal fan of demjay/unknownperson, I like their style more, and their story behind everything was slightly better.

But demjay left too many unanswered questions (they always do). Both entries were amazing.

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Hasee500 [2012-01-03 02:52:19 +0000 UTC]

I... Think you won. Demjay Didn't make an entry yet...

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joan-d-ark2 In reply to Hasee500 [2012-01-04 03:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Spoke too soon, eh? Happens to me all the time.

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TotalRequestNever [2012-01-02 20:37:12 +0000 UTC]

That was absolutely extraordinary, dude. Each and every art of this graphic novel captivated me <3

Here's to you, Clickmon, and your excellent skill, characters and storytelling!

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ancient-sun [2011-12-22 02:50:47 +0000 UTC]

W-wow. What an ending, with the world falling apart into nothing. You really did a great job with this!

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katizua [2011-12-21 05:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Why loot epics when you can get legendarys!

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clickmon In reply to katizua [2011-12-21 15:27:40 +0000 UTC]

Pfft! Greens are the new purples now~

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Mikallen [2011-12-20 03:50:00 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely adore your story.

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clickmon In reply to Mikallen [2011-12-20 03:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! thank you!! There's still the epilogue to be posted~!

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Mikallen In reply to clickmon [2011-12-20 06:24:04 +0000 UTC]

You honestly took this story and ran with it in such a direction that I'm almost HAPPY I lost.

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b-oots [2011-12-19 23:19:38 +0000 UTC]

This was absolutely gorgeous.. your comics are so lovely.

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Marraphy [2011-12-19 22:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Fucking fuuuuuuuuuuuu fuuuuuu ck Wow I just adjsfsfs //////// \\\] ][

Click, this is fantastic! It was an amazing and epic story and a great ending! I love how you incorporated almost every character into the mix, I like the length, and the effort put into everything! All of those backgrounds are fleshed out and awesome. Everything was just so epic. I really hope you win!

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clickmon In reply to Marraphy [2011-12-19 22:50:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed it~!

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Fe5ter [2011-12-19 22:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Well that was a very bittersweet ending I wonder what will happen to all those souls Death collected, will the souls go to their respective afterlife and be reunited with their love ones or be punish for their sins?

Hope there be an epilogue once the winner is decided?

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clickmon In reply to Fe5ter [2011-12-19 22:21:25 +0000 UTC]

The souls contained in Death's blade were used to revive Dallas and send them back home. What happens to them afterwards is really up to your beliefs and interpretation (I have my own).

The epilogue will be posted tomorrow (that's what the "EP" at the bottom of the comments refers to, hehe). It's best to read up on all the links at the bottom for a little more background story if you haven't already~!

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Fe5ter In reply to clickmon [2011-12-21 07:44:48 +0000 UTC]

May I ask what is you're interpretation?

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clickmon In reply to Fe5ter [2011-12-21 15:26:55 +0000 UTC]

The used souls are flushed out with their memories being in the town with it, and the game repeats again and again and again.

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Fe5ter In reply to clickmon [2011-12-22 03:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Wait so does that mean Death still got got em?

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clickmon In reply to Fe5ter [2011-12-22 03:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Pretty much, haha, until someone takes down Death which hasn't happened yet... dun dun duuuun.

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Fe5ter In reply to clickmon [2011-12-22 20:21:58 +0000 UTC]

So the souls will never truly rest in peace, now I'm sad again

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Countess-Studios [2011-12-19 15:46:24 +0000 UTC]

Okay I finally read it and oh my goodness that was amazing!

Good to see all the pieces I got coming together, everything pieced together very nicely. Also, I don't know if I ever mentioned that I liked the way you always indicated how someone was speaking off screen with the little recognizable symbols in their speech bubbles.

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clickmon In reply to Countess-Studios [2011-12-19 18:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, the bubble thing is something I picked up from mangas. I'm glad you like it! There's more to come!

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darmoon87 [2011-12-19 12:41:12 +0000 UTC]

ahaha
I read this a few hours ago and was too dazed to comment or favorite or anything gosh
stumbling around wordlessly for a bit just AMAZED at all this quality work
Click your comic-making skills and writing are just phenomenal and I am very exxcited to see where you go in the future; reading this was an absolute treat and I really hope you emerge victorious

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clickmon In reply to darmoon87 [2011-12-19 17:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the small Wolfgang cameo~!

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darmoon87 In reply to clickmon [2011-12-20 01:01:48 +0000 UTC]

;u; I really did aaaaaa ♥♥

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ArtticWitchica [2011-12-19 08:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. Congrats on making it to the finals I hope you win

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finchfully [2011-12-19 07:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh, the cover drawing is gorgeous.
And haha, was the squirrel thing and Up reference?

..Wow, this is intense. (Sorry, just going through and commenting as I go along)
This is so cool. The skeleton is amazing.

God you are so good at portraying action. It all just fits together so perfectly.

Ugfjfsdjknfsdhjkb so much emotion in those panels where the rocks are falling around her. Gorgeous.


Aaaand end. Love it. This was....stunning. Very well done!

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clickmon In reply to finchfully [2011-12-19 17:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, thank you so much! The skeleton part is probably my favourite.

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Cranberry-Soap [2011-12-19 01:48:08 +0000 UTC]

Gah, that was so intense! I really loved the ending, it was illustrated beautifully ;u;

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IkeTheWarrior [2011-12-19 00:35:19 +0000 UTC]

That was amazing,nicely done! c:

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ReD-HearT-DroP [2011-12-19 00:26:11 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME THIS IS JUST EPIC!!!

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Figgeryboo [2011-12-19 00:16:55 +0000 UTC]

CLICK, OH GOD CLICK, THAT WAS LOVELY.

WIN OR LOSE YOU HAVE TAKEN ME ON AN ADVENTURE.

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MirChuChu [2011-12-19 00:09:52 +0000 UTC]

HNNNNNNNNNNNNG. SO BEAUTIFUL! ALL OF MY LOVE AND TEARS! TAKE THEM!

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clickmon In reply to MirChuChu [2011-12-19 00:15:59 +0000 UTC]

HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG, I CAN'T HANDLE ALL THAT LOVE AND TEARS!!!-- *explodes*

Thank you and thank you again! \(宜)/

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MirChuChu In reply to clickmon [2011-12-19 00:20:03 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome! Best of luck to you! c:

*follows you to Godfall*

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