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when someone's crying in a dark roomsilently, yet you can tell,
that feeling of sorrow you can feel,
that makes you feel the world
is more evil than you knew before,
that's me.
when life drags you backwards,
through that rose bush,
yet there are no blooms left,
that desire to give up,
that pain you feel,
that's me.
when you enter your own space,
ready to sit down and cry,
and you realise that it's all gone,
someone's kicked you whilst you were down,
and now you feel so lost,
that's me.
everything that's bad in the world only serves to promote the good.
everything that's dark in the world only serves to promote the light.
so now you look at me and tell me that i'm the dark and you're the light
that i'm the bad and you're the good
and for that reason you're leaving?
well honey without me you'd be nothing
when someone tries to leave you,
so out of passion you try to stop them,
when you kick them too hard,
when emotions take you over
and you see them fall,
that's me.
when you go to tell them
all about how you feel,
but instead you hurt them more,
when a kick in the neck
is as close as they get to you
that's me.
when they tell you they're leaving,
and you pick up the closest object,
swinging wildly,
when you see the blood seeping,
and still you can't cry,
that's me.
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Comments: 6
heavenzchild [2006-11-14 06:31:50 +0000 UTC]
wow, you know i find. What it is that i read from you. it just feel so deep and so real! Keep writing girl! Even if its nto something you may be 100% happy with, im sure you'll impact someone out there!
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nighthawkpm [2006-11-10 07:51:54 +0000 UTC]
I love parts of it - I totally agree with the message -- I understand that you are your own worst enemy at times as I am too and flight the big D. Great to see you writting and sorry for not reading much.
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clinicallybeyondhelp In reply to nighthawkpm [2006-11-11 14:14:34 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much. x
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thegreatmizuti [2006-11-07 18:30:26 +0000 UTC]
intreeging none the least but ur poetry is always intreeging
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