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Published: 2010-01-03 01:04:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 337; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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I like the first panel of this pretty well, but you can tell the last one was rushed. Sorry.
So that's the end! Yay?
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I'm still trying to figure out the end. Does it mean that everyone has baggage, it's just that everyone carries their's differently?
The color pencil work is beautful on all the pages. You did very well on the fedoras and hands too! Did I mention the work you did on the layouts and panels? Marvelous! (Especially when you highlighted a few panels in different colors a page or two back.)Although I have one question: What does the wall say in the last panel? Overall? LOVED. IT.
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Glad you liked it!
Your interpretation is admittedly not what I was going for, but I don't mind it a bit. Kind of cool you got something I didn't plan. It's actually more about the awkwardness of being in an elevator with a stranger. 
My thought process was something like, if this happened anywhere else, hat-man would be asking, "Are you seeing this?" However, on an elevator, you just avoid eye contact with the other person. Or something. Maybe that's just me. Also, it's supposed to play around with who's perception of reality is true and being aware of your own craziness. I recognize that the whole thing is pretty vague though, so I really like seeing what the people I've shown it too thought was going on.
Wall in the last panel would say "LOBBY."
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Far less deep, yes, but still a good enough message. And admittedly, far more amusing!
I like the vagueness once you explain the idea you had in mind. Because, really, it could very well be a Twilight Zone episode in the making!
I am just that dull to not think it means "lobby." lol
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"t could very well be a Twilight Zone episode in the making!"
This just might be the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me ever. (As long as we're talking original and not the color remakes.)
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Well, considering all the color diversity it would have be done in color otherwise it would lose a lot of its quality. Unless all the "hullucinations" appeared in white.
Hey, if I push your buttons I also have to give you pretty darn good compliments too to make up for it, right?
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This is all true.
...I still want Rod Serling.
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Well, you know what? You can't. He's dead...
I'll see what can be done by this Christmas.
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