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Published: 2010-12-28 17:43:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Broken stanzas, broken hearts,
You watch my world fall apart,
Helpless whispers, hopeless prayers,
Trying to convince myself you care,
Careless words, careful looks,
We're not the romance of storybooks,
Too loud music, louder shouts,
I'll do all I can to drown you out,
Subtle insults, spiteful lies,
I see our ruins in your eyes.
Shake your head, shut the door,
You "don't want this anymore,"
Fall from favour, fight for hope,
We're hanging ourselves with this rope,
Crush my hopes, cut my soul,
Do you know the stakes, when you roll?
Make me cry to make her smile,
I long to embrace sweet denial,
Touch my lips, taste her kiss,
Please bring back that ignorant bliss,
Broken promises, broken glass,
I never thought this would come to pass.
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Comments: 2

ToSeeIfIStillFeel [2010-12-28 18:35:09 +0000 UTC]

not bad, the rythym and flow is a bit off at times but its not to much. Overall i like it it feels natural.

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clockwork-trees In reply to ToSeeIfIStillFeel [2010-12-28 18:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you,and you're welcome for the fave.

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