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ClockworkGoth — Fallen Snow
Published: 2008-01-19 23:32:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Your pale white body lays across my bed like morning snow
and as i make new traces across its surface
(lightly like a bird at Dawn)
You smile (like so many forgotten
winter sunsets) and breath warm air into my icy lungs.
You cross my room, spreading your winter beauty into all i know, and
turn out the lights
so that you are all i see.
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Comments: 5

jaredclayton [2008-01-30 16:24:51 +0000 UTC]

This is beatifully written.

I don't know much else i can say, apart from it's perfect. I love it. I love your work.

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ClockworkGoth In reply to jaredclayton [2008-01-30 22:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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ClickyPenPixieOfDoom [2008-01-21 01:07:47 +0000 UTC]

<3

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porkyporkyyay [2008-01-21 00:43:51 +0000 UTC]

I really like this I kinda makes you think but then you kinda get it idk

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ClockworkGoth In reply to porkyporkyyay [2008-01-21 02:10:03 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it. e e cummings poetry does kinda the same thing.

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