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Published: 2007-07-12 00:57:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 720; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 4
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Description I.
Boredom crushed me down
Red wine kissed my come soaked lips  
Filth becomes mundane

II.
Can’t get that smell of him out of my sheets
It festers and gnaws at my skin
It coats my face with a lattice of sticky pus and dark black rot
Even new sheets smell like him
However soaked in wine they smell fine

III.
Sick sad cold sweat
Wine whipped fury
Drunken soaked safety net
Fine, vision’s blurry
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Comments: 15

hypnotic71 [2007-12-31 07:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Raw and powerful. Creating a atmosphere, especially something this sensitive, is hard to do and you managed to pull it of perfectly.

A million praises go towards you.

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aBoycallednever [2007-08-19 03:28:10 +0000 UTC]

that last stanza is grand.

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Draconicsoul [2007-08-03 15:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Where is the line between filth and mundanity?
Is it somewhere in your sporty new avatar?

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cloude In reply to Draconicsoul [2007-08-04 06:09:19 +0000 UTC]

That avatar is representative of repetitive filth that leads to mundaneness in filth. Not much a line between more so a finish line.

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MattGAllan [2007-08-02 00:31:47 +0000 UTC]

noone writes poems about me.

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cloude In reply to MattGAllan [2007-08-04 10:19:18 +0000 UTC]

I will. Hope you like it.

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Keizie [2007-08-01 11:00:03 +0000 UTC]

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vonny-t-h-m [2007-07-29 14:02:05 +0000 UTC]

that last verse is truely great.

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cloude In reply to vonny-t-h-m [2007-08-04 10:19:56 +0000 UTC]

3rd try is always a charm I suppose.

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RyDoG [2007-07-19 03:10:13 +0000 UTC]

great poem dear

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b33lz3bub [2007-07-18 12:38:46 +0000 UTC]

urh... reminds me of the feelings that overtook me for so long after she and i ended. i got a lot out of reading that

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edibleJAKE [2007-07-12 08:20:32 +0000 UTC]

urrrrrrr .... i knew you would write something like this

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bo88y [2007-07-12 02:18:39 +0000 UTC]

wallace stevens worst
nightmare.

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cloude In reply to bo88y [2007-07-12 02:43:50 +0000 UTC]

His pretense befalls human nature. Reality paints our portrait of life time after time.

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ryano292 [2007-07-12 01:28:00 +0000 UTC]

ahh the joys of being drunk

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