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Published: 2017-06-02 19:09:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 952; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 7
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Old-ish, or whatever one would call early or mid 2016.I hope uploading old and new stuff at random is confusing.
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Oh Yeah! Brohoof /)(\
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Your FACE is sweet!
(Thanks!)
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It's very cute! Pinkie's expression is adorable and I like the shading. <3
I would like to offer some suggestions, if you're okay with it:
- The mane is attached along the back of the neck rather than just the back of the head, which means that the hair would have been less below her neck and more above it;
- I too like my legs long and lanky, but I think the front legs might be a bit too lanky? I'd suggest to keep the hooves the same size for both pairs of legs and work from there;
- I'm not too sure about the tuft of hair from RD's ear. I think it might be work looking into the source of the hair, which I think would be closer to the base of the ear.
That was it. ^_^
I think it might be a fun challenge to look into a follow-up illustration to this one where you practice some perspective. Think Dash's face close to the camera as she flies up, with Pinkie holding her tail and trailing below.
I hope this helps!
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Absolutely agree with your points, thanks! - I knew the ear-hair thing was off in a million ways, and the lankiness... well. My proportions are on and off. I won't hide behind the fact that this is a bit old, but it totally is!
(Loving the idea of the follow-up, though)
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Awesome! Yeah, that's the thing with old stuff. It's fun to see how you've evolved, though. ^_^
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