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Published: 2012-01-30 00:43:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Note to :I really need someone to review and revise the poses of both of the characters in this. I would like them to be kept in their original poses/close to original poses.
The girl has run up and hugged him, but not to the point of knocking him over, if that helps get my vision across at all. The arm he is holding out will be holding a backpack of some sort in the final version.
I had a hard time with the girl's smile from the angle she is facing, so if anyone knows a way to fix/improve that then please do. Basically, I just need tips/help on their overall anatomy. :>
Thanks in advance~!
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I like her smile! I don't see anything wrong with it. I do think that the bodies are too small compared to the heads though. The man's legs look too short, and his head looks too big. I like the girl's body, it's perfect. Her head could be smaller, but it looks good the way it is right now. Good job! I really like it. I wish I could do a red-line, but I'm no good at drawing digitally. I'd really like to see the finished version once you're through with it. It looks so sweet <3
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I do have a tendency to make heads too big. It irks me to no end all the time.
Thank you very much for the critique! I really do appreciate it a lot and will definitely fix what you have pointed out!
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I draw heads way too big as well, and I never notice until I'm done ;o; I'm glad I helped somehow~
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