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ClovisLuik — Vacation In Rome
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Published: 2016-04-30 19:23:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1344; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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The composition of this piece is quite good. The thing that stands out to me that could be improved is the lighting angle. Although your subjects are well lit the direct flash kind of lighting is hiding some beautiful shadows that could add a better element to the piece. Also the scene background is a bit drab. If you added a soft glow rim light towards the back of the scene, it would add an element to the drama. It would also back light your subjects a bit and add even more depth.
The posing is good and the angles you create are wonderful. A suggestion i would make and this is just a taste issue but something to consider is that the girl on the left lean forward just a tad and tilt her head onto the other models shoulder it would add to the whimsy of the overall structure of the frame and also give the friends a more intimate looking bond.
Hope this helps in your art endeavor.
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Thank you, you have made some very good suggestions and I very much appreciate your input. I will incorporate your input in future work I do and also if I end up reworking this image. thanks again
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Your most welcome. I hope my insight is correct however. I am just a noob myself still trying to find my way in 3d world. So obviously take the things i said with a grain of salt i am by no means a master of art lol
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Lovely render - puts me in mind of a Roman Holiday...
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Better not drive scooter in these dresses, lol! Or else the hot Italians go crazy, haha!
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